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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jazzthakur

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guys sorry but i cannot update this ff in this week
coz i m leaving for delhi tommorow and will return after a week
but promise i will update it ASAP after my return

oh thats fine...Have a happy safe journey...waiting for ur update...and pls do pm me whn u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice...plz update soon😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey guys i m back and i m writing the next part
i promise to update it as soon as possible😊😊
Edited by jazzthakur - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

so guys i m back

Chapter 7

Sweat dripping from his torso,but still he run faster and faster on the treadmill.

"dada" unnati called for him.she pressed the off key on the mill

Unati:dada hum aapko kal raat se dekh rahe hain aap bahut tensed lag rahe hain.sab thik toh hai na

Uday wiping himself "nothing choti,bas ek pal ke liye ateet ki kitaab ka ek khula panna aankho ke saamne aa gaye jisse humne dekh kar bhi andekha kar diya tha, khair jaane do chutki tum yaha kaise?"

Unnati:woh dada dadisaab ka phone aaya tha?

Uday:hmm, hum chalte hain chutki

Manyata opened her sleepy eyes with a dreamy smile curved on her face.

Sh: (in a childish manner)goody goody morning baby,open ur iny winy eyes baby

M:good morning tujhe kya hua aaj?

She throws a pillow on her "mujhe kya hua,pehle tu bata ke tujhe kya hua hai"

M: (confused look)kya ?

Sh:jyada ban mat,who sheena kal raat se behosh padi hai,jab bhi hosh aata hai chilla kar phir gir jaati hai

Moniya just remembered that uday waved to her last night,she started laughing.

M:who,……o…oh.my…….oh my god!

Sh:sambhal khud ko,pata hai waise ek baaat samajh nahi aayi.

M:kya?

Sh:tu oh kal uss yuvraaj ko gaaliyan de rahi thi ,club me entry karne ke liya tyaar nahi thi aur toh aur uss Bandar aakash ke saath chali gayi toh phir tu yuvraaj udayveer ke saath kaise lauti.

At this manyata got the dark memory of the night back,tears tickeled down her cheeks.shivangi saw that and rushed to her with worries in her eyes.

Sh:moniya kya hua,yaar.bata mujhe achanak se tu…aise..kya hua?

Manyata narrated the whole incident to her.

Anger was busting in shivangi "uski itni himmat. samjhta kya hai wo khud ko,tu chal mere saath hum abhi uske khillaf FIR likhwate hain,,,tu chal abhi..mein bhi dekhti hu k who kaise bachta hai"

"who toh bach jaaye ga but tumhara kya hoga" a voice cut their conversation

Uday parked his car in devgarh estate and was movig in the mahal when the same bracelet falled from his jacket.he picked it up.it was shinging with same M on it.

Uday(to himself):toh miss.haan nahi toh,kaun ho tum?

"wahi toh hum bhi jaanana chahte hain uday kaun thi wo"
uday:j ..tum ho

J:ye humare sawaal ka jawab nahi hai uday

Uday:tum pehle sawaal toh soch lo

Vijay:bano mat uday,tum jaante ho hum kya puch rahe hain,cmon cmon tell us tell us.

Uday:seriously vijaybanna..

J:oh cmon uday,hum joke k mood mein nahi hain

Uday:hum bhi nahi hai

J:toh phir batao kaun thi wo ladki jiska haath pakad kar tum apni gaadi mein bitha rahe the,fir itne pyaar se uske aanso poch rahe the,batao humme

Uday:j tumme hum par nazar rakhne se jyada jaggat par nazar rakhni chahiye..

J: BHULO MAT YUVRAAJ UDAYVEER SINGH

Yeh mat bhulo ke tum already kisi aur ke ho

Uday: (usual smirk)oh haan kal raat hi toh tumne hume maya se reunite karwaya hai,haina?

J:how can u uday?

Uday:as u can be J..

J:tum par sirf humari behan ka hak hai,aur wo hum tumhe bhulne nahi denge.

The smirk on his face got vanished and a hurted look covered it

Uday:I know that,hum use bhool hi nahi sakte J..,that is not a movie to watch and forget

J:better

In manyata's room

M:aunty aap?

Lady:haan main, apne bte aakash k liye aayi hu.

Sh:aap ko pata hai usne kya kiya

L:kya kiya,iss do kaudi ki ladki se pyaar kar baitha,pata nahi isne mere bachhe par kya jaado kar diya hai,who toh bechara…

Sh:koi bechara nahi hai hai woh

M:shivu bas kar rehne de

Sh:moniya tu kuch bolti kyun nahi

L:kya bolegi,kal raat mere bte ko sharaab pilakar,khoob jaanti hu mein tum jaisi ladkiyon ko.achhe ladke dekhe nahi ke unhe apne jaal mein phasana shuru kar diya

M:bas kijiye aunty ji.

L:kyun sach suna nahi jaa raha kya,raat ko mere beta haath nahi aaya toh kisi yuvraaj ko hi fasa liya haina

Sh:aunty aap apni hadh paar kar rahi hai,aap ke bte ne moniya ke saath batameezi ki thi.

L:mera beta?arre agar usne kuch kiya hota toh ye uss waqt kisi aur ke saath khade ice cream nahi kha rahi hoti.

Sh:bas ab aur kuch meri dost ke khilaaf kaha toh phir aap ke liye accha nahi hoga,behtar yehi hoga k just GET LOST!! OUT!!!

The lady leaves with a disgusting look.moniya was still sobbing,shivangi hugged her.

M:sach shivu m..maine…maine aisa kuch nahi…

Sh:mujhe pata hai moniya,tu chup ho jaa,logo ka kya boltey hain, ab tu chup chal pagal..

M:tujhe toh mujh pe bharosa hai na

Sh:haan nahi toh

And both laughed at it

Sh:par tu na badi dhoke baaz hai

M:maine kya kiya

Sh:akele akele ice cream khayyi aur mujhe yaad bhi nahi kiya

M:are maine akele thode hi khayi

Sh:pata hai uss handsome ke saath thi haina

M:tu bhi na shivangi pagal hai,haan nahi toh

Sh:sach agar mein teri jagah hoti na toh I love u bol deti

"kya,tum aisa karti"

Both turned to look ,it was neel.

N:tum sach mein shi..

Sh: (winked at moniya)haan baba,tumne mujhe propose nahi kiya hota toh mein use hi pro maar deti,infact agar tum mujhse break up kar lo toh mein abhi hi chali jaao uske paas I LOVE U kehne

N:no ways tum mere saath aisa nahi kar sakti,moniya samjhao kuch

M:right shivu tujhe ab neel ko hi lifetime jhelna padega

N:moniya tum bhi

Moniya holds her ears and smiles "mazak kar rahe the"

N:I know,waise aaj mein kuch batane aaya tha

"kya"

N:woh mujhe job mil gayi hai.

S & M:sach kaha?
N: jaigarh aur devgarh ka join project hai uss project mein, as a GM.

M:wow

Sh:ab meri shopping least lambi ho jaaegi

And they all laughed

N:and….next month humari engagement.

Shivangi blush at it

M:wow!! Good news pe good news free

In DS office

Uday:aapne humme bulaya dadisahab

Ds:aaiye uday beta

There was rajmata seems tensed,doctorsaab(legal advisor of devgarh),maharaj brijra,giriraj.

Brij:maa sahib ab humme jald hi koi kadam uthane honge

Uday:gustakhi maaf hokum,par hum janana chahte hain ye sab kis Vishay par charcha ho rahi hai

DS sighed "uday beta murari bakda gaya"

Uday's eyes got widened

Ds:doctorsaab!!

Doctorsaab:jee rajmata….(turned to uday)murari lal ko humne Bikaner mein bakda tha

Uday:tha…

Doctorsaab:yuvraaj hum unse saari baatein nahi bulwa paaye.

Uday:kitna pata chala

Brij:sirf itna ke usne humari bacchi ko Mumbai ke kisi anant ashram mein choda tha

Ds:aur itna keh kar usne jeher kha liya

Uday was shocked he got the flash of the scar he saw

Brij :par maasahab hum itne bade sheher mein kaise pata lagaenge

Ds:shayad ab hum manyata ko kabhi nahi dundh paayenge

"nahi aisa nahi ho sakta" maharani komal was at the door

K:maasahab aapne ye baat humse chupayi,(tears formed in her eyes) kya ab hum humari beti se kabhi nahi mil paayenge

Uday:jaroor mil paayenge aunty komal

Giriraj:ye aap kya keh rahe hain uday

Uday(with a smirk)yes dad, manyata iss ghar mein jaroor wapas aayengi jaldi hi,ver very soon

Aur yeh yuvraaj udayveer singh ka vaaada hai.

So guys how was this hope u all like this.sorry if not

Guys plz don't forget to like and comment

I will update the next part soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
that was awesome loved it so much what will be manyata reaction when she knows she is a princess update soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
wohooo...yuraj uday veer singh...hayyeee...even in stories i love him...hayyeee i am carzy about him...😍
oh sorry...about ur update...i was lovely...awesome...continue soon...
i am eagerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏thanks...loved it...awesome...fantastic...👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update! 👍🏼

Thanks for the pm.


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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi dear...nice to have smthg to read after longtime but really loved it...please update the next part soon...can't wait for Manyata and everybody's reaction on the truth!!!Please please please...thanks 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Whoa! this is really interesting, can't wait for the next update!

Simran :D...

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