SS I was wrong (MANVEER) chp 16 pg 30 end of SS - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: preya_radev

omg please update soon really cant wait i hope manyata tells uday everything and i hope akash does not separate manveer update soon really cant wait

no worries... Akash wont separate them...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 6(M's POV) I called Uday. I decided not to tell him about this letter. I was freaking out. Part of me just wanted him to be here,with me...Manyata: Hello Uday... ( Sounding scared)
Uday: Hey princess... How are you this morning..?? Hmmm I guess missing me...??
Manyata: I miss you terribly Uday.. Hmm lets go out.. Somewhere where we can be alone...
Uday : Sounds like you are in full romance mood hmm.. I'll arrange something.. OK byeee...
Manyata: Byyee..
After talking to him my mood lightened a bit.. Because he was the one.. He was my strength,my soulmate, my partner for life... Idont want to ruin our relationship by telling him about this LETTER.. He will start getting worried... I was lost, completely lost in my own thougths...
Vijay bhai: M bhai kahan kho gayi..?? aur aaj tum gym mein kya kar rahi ho..???
(VB's POV)
What has happend to this jungle queen..?? She is in the gym standing alone and dude in looks like she is in serious thoughts...So i decide not to tease her..
Manyata: kuch nahi Vijay bhai.. So aaj bhai bhai saath mein nahi aaye I mean you and jay..
Vijay bhai: J bhai ne humare dil tod diya hai M bhai.. Aaj se tum ho humari Bhai ho na..??
Manyata: Haan haan bilkul hu (while laughing)
(M's POV)
My brother surely knew how to lighten my mood.. Ohhh I feel better.. hope uday calls and tells me about his plans soon...
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I was pacing in my room.. Waiting for his call..Iforgot about the letter and kept it in one of my books on the bookshelve haaa atlast he called...
Uday: Get ready princess I am coming to pick you we are going somewhere far...
Manyata: You mujhe pehele bolta tha na now I have to talk to DS also..
Uday: Dont worry hum unse baat kar chuke hai..
Manyata: fine jaldi aao...
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We were in the car..There was silence between us.. I thought yaa I am depressed what has happend to him..?? Is he angry at me for something...??
(UV's POV)
There is surely something going on in her head.. She is never so quiet... I will find out.. Deffinately find out.. Removing myself out of my thoughts.. I felt her head resting on my shoulder and her hands on one of my hands on the gear...
Manyata: Kya hua hai tumhe..? Why are you so queit..?
Uday: Kuch nahi Princess woh hum bas kuch soch rahe the anyway you tell me.. Tumhe achanak se humare sath kahi dur kyun janna hai..??
Manyata: Bas aise hee man kiya... shadi se pehel hum kuch quality time spend kar lenge...
(M's POV)
He was back.. Pheww he was back with that usual smirk of his...I took my hands and placed them on his cheek and without thinking I kissed him on his Cheek.. While he was driving... He stopped th car and... Kissed me on my cheek... and started driving again..
Uday: this was your return gift...
So this was it...
Hope u guyzz like it..
Tell me about it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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NOTEHey guyz im not gonna send PMs cuz too much of hassle.. IM kinda busy these days.. Sorry for that..😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thats okay dear...well just keep track them. awsum!!!! update :):):) hope it was longer though,update sppn :):D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARMaaneetAbhiya

thats okay dear...well just keep track them. awsum!!!! update :):):) hope it was longer though,update sppn :):D

Thankyou soo much...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update and plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#77
Awwwiiieee Greattt start yaar....😊
keep writinggg...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: UdaynArnavRmine

Awwwiiieee Greattt start yaar....😊

keep writinggg...

Thankyou soo much...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved the update!! Do continue soon!!:)

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