ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#691

Originally posted by: preya_radev
awesome just loved dis part poor manveer... manyata realized her love for uday but lost on the same day that was really sad hmmm looks like ranvijay has got someone coming to his life soon update soon nd thanks for the pm

Thank you soo much!! AM relly happy you can feel M's pain. 😳

Yep RV's Meera is entering very soon 😉

Will try my best to update soon and no problem! 😃

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#692

Originally posted by: mahi0809
@Ranjana: If you get a chance read this. I wrote it and then tell me how did you like it? Though I really trust your intuition, but when it comes to ManVeer I feel like I can never do justice with them. If you have time read this... its one of my works from last year... just lost the will to write 😔

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1765145/os-khushis-excursions-the-greenhouse-effect-pg-18

P.S: I'm from USA😊

Mahi!! All I can say is that ARE YOU CRAZY? Seriously from your comments alone Ive always felt that you understand ManVeer in a special way that no one else does. Really if you were to start anything on them, I would be wayyy to excited to read it caz I've personally felt many times that not only are you a brilliant writer but the points you always bring up about ManVeer whether its the show or my SS are always something to ponder on. Really I think you need to write on them and I'm damn sure that you will do full justice if not more on them. Even if you start small with an OS, but you must try!

Will surely read your Arnav Kushi work although I'm not a fan of that show, but for your writing alone for sure will read and comment as soon as I can make time. 😊

And oh wow..we're neighbours 😉

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#693

Originally posted by: thejazzgal
Awsoem SS ranjana

love it to core!!

whaow!!
read the the partss :d enjoy reading each n every sentence ;)

ur an awesome writer must say

do add me to ur PM list if u hav 1

DO cont SOOON!!

Thank you soo much!!! 😳 Really appreictae you taking the time to read it! 😃

And haha dont worry...you dont even need to ask to be added. once a person even by mistake comments on my SS I automatically add them and my SS never stops haunting them 😆

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#694

Originally posted by: mahi0809
@Ranjana: If you get a chance read this. I wrote it and then tell me how did you like it? Though I really trust your intuition, but when it comes to ManVeer I feel like I can never do justice with them. If you have time read this... its one of my works from last year... just lost the will to write 😔

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1765145/os-khushis-excursions-the-greenhouse-effect-pg-18

P.S: I'm from USA😊

Read it... and wrote on your scraps what i thought of it. You're crazy Mahi! Crazy for letting yourself stop writing..you're soo damn talented! I'm already so excited thinking how brilliant any FF/OS that you write on ManVeer would be! 😍

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xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#695

I'm in an evil mood. 😈 So here goes my first-ever promo. Just to torture you. 😛

Promo:

She felt his finger travel down her cheekbone to her chin and then forcefully raise her face up forcing her to look at him. As soon as she looked in his eyes, Manyata could feel the roller coaster of emotions that was in fact traveling in him which he hid so well. She could feel the anger, the hurt and the betrayal and she felt herself lose her glare in front of that all-consuming fire and her eyes softened down and stared at him in awe and admiration.

It was one of those type of moments, Manyata realized. The type that always happened in movies and were always sung about in songs. At a loss of words, frozen in her spot, looking in those eyes Manyata felt an urge to destroy herself in his love. She loved him enough to want to happily burn away in his fire.

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Okay truthfully this is actually an experiment I'm doing for some feedback on a scene which I don't know whether to include or not. 🤔 So I don't even know if this is going to make it to chapter 18 or not. Either way, this SS is going to drive me crazy!

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Supernatural_10

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Posted: 13 years ago

#696

Great Promo

its obvious a Manveer scene that too romantic one just hope no RV in it... lol i think im rigth not sure... best update soon u really are lazy...

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 13 years ago

#697

Oh Gosh!! This is torture!!! I really can't wait to read the next chapter now!! I would love for u to include this scene in this SS!! Plzzz continue asap!!:D

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Sakura24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#698

Ahhh you're torturing me...
pleeease update sooon...or I'll dieee

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Payal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#699

I don't
know whether to include or not.
Are you kidding me?? Of course it deserves to be included..! It was freaking intriguing!! U cant imagine how I felt when it ended as soon as it started! :(

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patakaguddi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#700

Originally posted by: Grenade
I don't
know whether to include or not.
Are you kidding me?? Of course it deserves to be included..! It was freaking intriguing!! U cant imagine how I felt when it ended as soon as it started! :(

exactly my point...

it deserves to be included yaar...how can u have second thoughts about this...

plz plz plz include this scene nd update soon, m waiting eagerly.😳