Originally posted by: -Tannu-
Amazing SS
read all d parts...interesting SS..
loved dargah scene...beautifully written...
i lyk rannvijay's character..but didnt lykd the way he kissed manyata's neck...cheek tak thik tha..but neck..neck par kiss karna to uv ka right hai...am being soo besharam :P
njoyed reading all the parts..especially the part wen manyata drinks alcohol nd sleepover ;)
waise one doubt..is jay's character negative??
badi ajeeb bandi hai..kabhi achhi hojaati to kabhi evil...
aakhir hai kya wo..fasaad ki jad :/
and and and..the emotions of every character were beautifully expressed..specially rannvijay's emotions..nd dargah scene where manyata fall in love wid uv...DEEPLY <3
waiting for the next update...
cont soon:)
Thank you so much Tannu! 😳
Really the comment was so rewarding as you took me back to the previous chaps which I worked so hard on and hearing about them still makes me so happy. Especially when you mentioned the Dargah scene which was a chap very close to my heart! 😳
LOL trust me I thought and rethought so much before including that RV kiss, because I also thought exactly what you said, that its reserved for UV only but I included it because needed to create some repulsion for RV (although some RV fans still found it hot 😆).
So happy you enjoyed the alcohol and sleepover stuff..wow seems so far away especially since the last few parts have been so dramatic and over-the-top..will try to lighten things up in the next chaps hopefully 😊
J is all over the place..wants to move on but her evil side takes over. Its actually my fault I havent focused or expalined her enough detail but the simple reason for that is that I dont like writing about her. 😕 Vamp or no vamp, I've nver been intrested enough to go through her character in full detail but maybe in upcomign chaps might write about her for sure. 🤔
Happy you liked RV's emotion expression and the Dargah scene!
Thank you soo sp much for such a sweet insightful comment!🤗
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