ManVeer SS: Fallen Angel - Chapter 21 - pg. 145 - Page 68

And at this part, my only reaction was "ouch" . Poor Manyata. Even though Uday might not have meant it, because he would seriously thank the heavens for bringing Manyata in his life, but betrayals can easily transform a person into a heartless soul.

Ouch!? LOL you know i thought of adding so much more cruel stuff, then again i reminded myself to keep the drama under a limit otherwise I still had all this extra bullshit planned 😆..will save it for another time 😉 caz UV is now officially back to being the bad boy ..YUMMY ☺️

The flashback with Ranvijay was so heart-breaking . was totally waiting for this line Poor guy is completely broken. And Uday just had to enter at the wrong time didn't he? 😛 . Hahaha. But it was good to see that Manyata could feel Ranvijay's pain too. A guy who just a few weeks ago tried to force himself on her is now one of her best friends. Life does funny things doesn't it 😉

I know! sometimes I even forget what he really was before.. you guys all love him, but in fact I have no clue from where and how come so easily this love emerged 😳 Well I actually feel really touched whenever anyone praises/feels bad for him. 😳

Love. That's what it is, Manyata finally realized. But the realization brought her no relief or happiness. It brought her immense pain. More hurt than she was already experiencing. The day she had realized her love, was the same day that she lost it

I was aww-ing while reading it. So far, love has only given pain to all three of them. Be it Ranvijay, Uday or now Manyata. But the good news is that FINALLY Manyata has realized that she's in love with Uday. So one problem down, and many more to go. Lol. Anyway this was beautifully written and the way you described Manyata's emotions here is amazing!

I love it eevrytime you mention this line: So far, love has only given pain to all three of them.

Because its so true! And I'm happy that you know that love isn't meant to hurt 😉 (kinda unexpected but cute 😛)..its supposed to be a beautiful feeling that gives you happiness!

Fia you got no clue how much I've thought about thsi comment of yours and I'm giving it away but honestly have to give you the credit for this...your this comment (in my previous chaps) is pretty much what created Meera.

Thank you Fia for giving me Meera! 🤗 You will see what I mean very soon. 😉

Great! I'm suffering through so much pain and he still does not have a speck of sympathy. Abhi tak gusse se ghoor raha hai! Manyata thought in her head

She'd rather sit there and moan in pain then to call out for my help! Uday thought angrily

Seriously these two and their egos. Sigh. But I couldn't help but notice here that Manyata still doesn't know and understand Uday all that well whereas Uday knows Manyata more than she knows herself. She thinks that Uday has no speck of sympathy for her and failed to notice that he was just waiting for her to call out for him, and even when she didn't, he didn't stop himself from helping his Princess out. How cute 😍

Again, you might as well write a book on him! 😆 And yep...i try to make Manyata a bit more likeable then she is in the show but her ego remains nonetheless ..and UV, well he's just UV ❤️

"Manyata the thorn is not completely out yet. I have to rip your dress"

Okay I was literally going ☺️☺️☺️ after reading this. Like seriously, you doubt your skills on writing hot romantic stuff and then give just one single line that makes me blush like an idiot. If this is not hot, then I don't know what is 😛 . And it shocked the living daylights out of me too 😆

Awww ☺️

"Uday door raho mujhse! Mujhe pata hai ke tumhara gussa kaisa hai. Kabhi chilate ho aur kabhi kiss karte ho, lekin yeh toh too much ho gaya!" Manyata shouted alarmed

Uday cursed his luck for having to deal with the dumbest girl he knew

Omg this part was hilarious 🤣🤣 . Both Manyata and Uday are just so freaking funny with their reactions. Hahahahaha. I am still laughing. This was just epic!

🤣 Thank you! I thought twice before putting this in caz it was like a comic element in so much intensity and drama but then I'm like watever its too priceless a dialogue to leave out 😆

The entire "taking the thorn out" scene and the kisses following later was fantastic. Seriously Ranju that kissing part was H-O-T. As I said earlier, I have already read it like 5 times. Because you know how much I love anger-filled romance right? 😉 . Why did that stupid car come come to ruin the moment 😡 . Lol can you see how desperate I sound? 😆 . Lmao. No but seriously jokes apart, I loved this scene to bits. So hot, romantic and passionate 😍

Awww!! LOL you won't believe how much I dragged that scene 😆 caz i knew that you guys would just go crazy over it so kept going, throwing in kisses out of nowhere but see it worked 😆

And ahha that "stupid car" was the only thing I could think of to disturb them otherwise their romance would end up in *ahem* *ahem* ..lets just say its too early in the story to introduce minis 😆 (as alissa would put it)

And omg Ranvijay ki Meera agai yaaayyy *happy dance* . I am sorry I'm just a little too excited 😳 . Lol. Okay so apparently Ranvijay already knows her right? I can't wait to finally meet her. Eeep I am so happy. And hopefully she would prove to be his shining light in these dark times in his life and help him recover from the heartbreak because I don't want her to be a rebound girl for him. I want her to be THE girl for him 😊

Awww..I totally know what you mean and trust me I'm gonna make her the best thing that ever happened to him.

Once again Ranjana, fabulous update once again. And the story is moving at a perfect pace and in the right direction. Can't wait to read more since now two love stories would be going on simultaneously so you better no keep me waiting long for reading it 😈

Yea fine will try to update soon. Trust me I'm just as excited to write the next chap as you are to read it. 😉