The Sand Princess...Maanveer ss part5 pg8

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Fatima

@fatima4a

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Akki!!!!!!

Amazing, awesome, basically: LOVED IT!!!!!!!

yaar, yeh tumne kya jadoo kia hai, I was sooo in the story...

hope to see manveer reunite soon...

can't wait to read more

update soon honey

Love(L)

Fati

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jane niroopa

@janeniroopa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

awesome update but i feel sad for uday's condition hope he recover soon and manveer unite😊

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

what a thrilling twist!!

continue soon :)

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#64

this part was just out of the world, the whole twist was awesome and so innovative, absolutely shocker 😊, but was awesome, update soon

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
wow that was thrilling keep writing please!

thanku sweetz for liking ...will update soon😊

Edited by akkiiiii - 13 years ago

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#66

loved it update soon [/QUOTE

Thanks darling ...will try to make it all the more interesting...keep reading n yeah do comment 😛

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: -Moni-
Hey Akki :)

I just read all the parts in one go...awww thats pretty flattering to say the least sweetie
..And I must admit I m so hooked to the story... next part will keep u all the more hooked ...I promise hehe

.the mystery and suspense is killing me jaldi update karo😆...Hope to do that today itself ...but keep fingers crossed😉

with Uday being in come I doubt we will get any ManVeer scenes in the next update but you can throw in some flashback for the diehard fans like me 😳...oh ...sure darling ...I have taken it really seriously ..to have some serious flashback moments but dun be so sure of no Maanveer in present...haan nahi toh😉

I love the way you have shown Manyata's and Uday's feelings and inner turmoil so far in the story...aaahhh love u darling ...feels like my hard work really dint go in vain

Love Moni...love ya

keep reading n loving my fic ...ur comments did give me a high ..that wat m doing ..its really good ... next updates are going to be all the more interesting ...so be thr n never forget to comment n give constructive feedbacks

love

akki

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: jazzthakur
i have one request
yeh dark love story ko aur dark mat bana...not at all darling ...it can be more passionate n intense ...but yeah lil bit dark ..not to worry ...each charactyer has dimensions to it ...n pple are nt always in black n white ..keep reading ...u will understand ...as the dimensions will be revealed with each part

already ye kaam cvs kar rahe hain show mein

u know u really write cool!!!!!!!!!!!!...aaahhh thanks for the compliment

so plz hopefully aise heart attack mat de yaar...I cant promise on this ...hehe...thode to attacks dene padenge na...but not like the CVs 😡...dat I can promise

thnks for liking the thriller ..

love

akki

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Surya.Ravi
woaahhh..thrilling & nail biting akiii..just too good...update soon..😊

thanks a lot suriii di ...will update soon...dun worry😛

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: akshi_t
just one word for your update AMAZING!!!! 👏...totally HATS OFF 👍🏼...loved it...can't wait for the next update...plzzz update soon 😍

thanks for all the love n appreciation swtheart ...u dun have to wait ..its coming right away ..TODAY😊