The Sand Princess...Maanveer ss part5 pg8

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hey pple this is akki ...I have written few fics but some other couple ..but alas never completed as it was quite lengthy...but when this idea hovred over my mind ...I jus cud nt stop myself for posting ...comments can be eagerly awaited ...n yup Its a short story ..at max 10 parts not more than that ...first I thought of writing an os only ...but the idea got bigger n it wud have taken ages for me to post it all in jus one part ..hence in fragments ...hope u njoy the thoughts that cossed over my mind ...for my dear Maanveer
Yeah if u like it ...pls buddy me ..I jus cant pm individually...
with love
akki
CONTENTS
part1...pg1
part2...pg2
part3...pg4
part4...pg5
part5...pg8
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Part 1

Devgarh Province''Rajasthan

The sun was shining in full glory which made the sand dunes around Devgarh palace dangerously hot. On those heated dunes stood a fierce masculine figure with a blazing sword in his hand fighting the heated wind with lightening speed and a force that promised disaster. It seemed that air was cut into several thousand pieces in a matter of just a few minutes. Maharani Saheb when experienced this sight 'she was amazed as well as worried for the brave hearted man with whom her granddaughter and heiress Maanyata was going to be engaged this evening '.. Something was just not right!!!

A day before yesterday, Maanyata was declared the new Maharani of Devgarh province and on this occasion daadisa announced the wedding plans of her granddaughter with Prince Udayveer. Maanyata was thrilled that finally she was going to marry the love of her life. Yes , she used to despise him n despise him a lot but these 3 months just changed the course of her life. She cud hardly imagine her life without him'.first as friend 'then as a soulmate''. Daadisa was right!!!! These 3 months made her understand the true calling of her life. She was meant to rule and there was no running from this fact anymore. The earlier she accepted her life , the easier her trainings became. They made her life full of purpose'. A purpose to serve those for whom she was their Rani sahib'..the people of Devgarh who fully trusted the decision of Daadi sahib that Maanyata would be a better queen ' she had to prove her right!!!

In those 3 months she got her lifetime companion who stood by her no matter what 'never questioning her decisions and just abiding by them. She just wanted to stay holding his strong arms till the world around her would stand still or may be not even then'. if spirit is really immortal '.Her soul was entwined with his'' Forever

Aaakash was a long lost memory in some side of her brain 'not even in the heart anymore '.why wud he be '.he never accepted what she actually was 'The Queen'.he just wanted a loving housewife nothing more '. she wasn't just that anymore!!!Aakash used to be the purpose of her life, her destination but when he didn't trust her anymore, the very purpose of her life seemed fake. Her world broke down in front of her eyes n she wud just sob for hours unable to get over her first ever Heartbreak. She dint even have the strength to continue with her life anymore ' she still clearly remembers the day she called it quits 'yes she cut her wrist with knife to close her eyes forever '.. somebody died that day '.that was Monia 'for once and forever 'the girl who opened her eyes on the hospital bed after 2 days was Maanyata '.

>>>>>FLASHBACK<<<<<<<<<

As she painfully opened her eyes '.they met those soulful helpless eyes of a man who seemed weak enough to collapse that day'. Her pain seemed to deepen manifolds seeing him in that state'a melancholy shadowy figure of the man who was once the vintage prince known for his gruesome interior and soft spoken cold-blooded exterior'

"Uday!!!!"'she painfully managed to speak with question in her eyes asking him what he did to himself'.

" How dare u princess !!!!! how cud u punish urself for something u weren't responsible!!!!"

Tears started forming in his eyes n she cud jus do nothing but quietly stare in those deep dark eyes for which she meant the WORLD'' she felt pierced by the intensity of his gaze and at the same time amazed by the fact that behind so many layers this man put on '.there was this discrete personality who cud actually love somebody like nobody can '..nobody can !!!!!

" What's left in my life to live Uday'tell me???" 'she begged 'and warm tears ran through her cheeks.

He silently looked at her face n rubbed her cheeks tenderly'.

" Ab mujhe Aakash kabhi nahi milega Uday'.even if I become a princess '..tab bhi nahi!!!!!!!"

" You never belonged to him!!!"

And he silently retreated from her hospital room for her to process what he had just said in the most unromantic way.

>>>>>>> FLASHBACK ENDS<<<<<<<<<<

A blush appeared on Maanyata's face remembering his most unromantic declaration of love for her 'though he said quite a few words that day 'his eyes meant a lot of things and they slowly guided Maanyata for the purpose of her being ''What she is today was never possible without this one man '' the prince with the sword on those sand dunes.

Slowly Maanyata made her way towards him''something inside him was just not right. Wind was a mere excuse ''. He was fighting with himself all this while''. His inner soul confessed to him

" What will happen to your Sand princess when she knows that it was you who plotted it all '' this relationship is a lie '.for what she thinks of Udayveer ''you are not even close to that'.Can you ever forgive urself for what you did to that pure heart'. She will never accept you 'YOU COLD BLOODED MONSTER''Can you ever show ur true self to her 'Be a man '.. Go tell her"

" Nooo"'.Screamed Udayveer thunderously and he started to fight the wind with his sword with all his might''.

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well this is it...love u all...bye
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awesome start loved it can't wait for more please pm
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loved it
really superb
pls do continue soon
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amazingly written!!!!plz continue soon...and do PM me if u can❤️
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superb concept...do continue soon :)
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Awesome start ...plzzz do continue soon
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akiii it is so good to see you here yaar...you know right, i used to read your ff's earlier too...good start to the fanfic...very interesting yaar akiii, please update soon..😊
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I am really thrilled by the replies ...hope my readers will increase after reading this part ...please do comment and never refrain urselves from pushing the like button ...this really encourages the writer...so here it goes

Part :2

Maanyata stopped in her way hearing his screams but cudnt stop herself from admiring this royal bloodline of Jaigarh '. The movements of his slender and masculine existence was nothing but pure art'but this time the aggressive fighter looked like fighting to defend himself ..wat was the matter after all'.Maayata discovered a strange discomfiture in his body language 'it somehow spelled something really terrible '. What's it that is making the crown prince of Jaigarh so harsh on himself that he is literally burning himself in this terrible noon of Devgarh!!!!!

" Sher Singh!!! Humein humaaari talwaar pesh ki jaaye"''ordered Maanyata to the royal guard of Devgarh standing next to her'..

" jee Hukum!!!!"'.bowed the royal guard and went inside to get the royal sword which belonged to the heiress of Devgarh.

Within minutes the guard presented her with her sword''and swiftly she made her way towards the sun-kissed sands around Devgarh palace where the warrior prince stood so much engrossed in himself that he didn't even acknowledge the scent of his queen even when she stood just few centimeters away from his back'but suddenly as if sensing some trouble'his reflexes reacted to this unaware presence and within a moment he moved his sword towards the enemy with a powerful thrust good enough to take his enemy off guard 'one blow and the game ends'.. but he was taken by surprise because his sword was swiftly caught in the middle and pushed away beautifully '.. Master Stroke'' first time his sword missed its prey and flew away with the strong wind'.He turned to see the person''..

" Maanyata!!!!! '' It was u '.. oh god!!!! I cud have hurt you"''he gave her a very embarrassed look''

With her head held high 'Maanyata placed her sword on his neck

" But why it seems that there are chances of you getting hurt if u dun pick up ur Sword right now'.. Never underestimate ur enemies your highness!!!"

Udayveer sat on his knees and looked at the angelic queen with long wavy dark brown tresses''

" Your highness !!!! I am all yours'.you can do whatever u want" ''and he bowed his head to the queen

"Hum Rajwaade hain Yuvraaj'.. Nihatthon per vaar nahi karte!!!!...Go get ur sword"'.pat came her reply

" Gustaakhi maaf ho'.but Maanyata '.Ye humse nahi hoga!!!!" ''.. said Udayveer ''after all how cud he imagine something as rough as a sword fight with his delicate angel

The sword stiffened on his neck

" You are inside the boundaries of Devgarh Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh'.and it's the order of the queen that you pick up ur sword 'I am challenging you for a duel "

And then the trademark smirk of his adorned his face '.he was surely upto something mischievous'.

" But u will have to promise me a reward ur Highness if I win this duel"

Maanyata reading the mischief gave in ''.

" But If u lose 'you will have to answer a question'..but tell me first what do you want as your reward "''. A naughty smile played on her face

" A kiss from ur highness right here on these sands of DEvgarh'' u still want this duel Raani sahib????" '.. he winked at her making her blush deep red''

Controlling herself'.she gave him a fake annoyed look'.

" Tharak-e-paper Udayveer'.u brat!!!!!!"

Laughing he stood to get his sword and thus started the first ever duel between the queen of Devgarh and the future king of Jaigarh'.both opponents matched neck to neck in every blow '.while Udayveer was playing it safe keeping in mind not to hurt Maanyata in the process 'on the other hand Maanyata was fierce and unstoppable 'hence Udayveer's defending acts were not helping him much'he has been always an aggressive opponent 'but for Maanyata 'this jus dint seem right''how could he even think of hurting his queen'..

As this thought of hurting her crossed over his mind ''. Those images of betrayals and his self centered inactions and manipulations came back to haunt him'how cud he forget that due to the misunderstandings he created between her and Aakaash 'he almost pushed her to death'.if something happened to her that day!!!!! 'how much blood she lost!!!!! '.suddenly Uday was unable to see anything except that unfortunate evening when Maanyata was found in the pool of blood fighting for her life'''

"AAAhhh''.."

"UDAYYY!!!!!"

She never in her life expected this scene to be something like this ''.a deep cut appeared on his arms and blood oozed out severly 'making Maayata panic ''she knew that she cud never out do The Udayveer in an art he mastered 'but she ended up giving him such a terrible wound '.a game for fun led to an unexpected accident ''Maanyata threw her sword away and ran towards him ''for the first time in 100 years of these kingdoms being friends 'the Royal sword of Devgarh bathed in the blood of the Jaigarh Royalty

" Oh god !!!!! 'What I just did to u"''. she held his wound strongly to stop the flow of blood and tears automatically brimmed in her eyes.

Uday sensed the panic and composed himself so that Maanyata felt alright ''.then trying to add humour to the situation he added

" So Maanyata '.u finally got back ur revenge 'dint u '.I gave u that scar on ur back n today u give me this!!!!...Hisaab Baraabar haan nahi toh!!!!!"

"Shut up u idiot!!!!...Bohot dard ho raha hai kya '..main bhi na bilkul paagal hun'I shouldn't have instigated this ''.today is our engagement ''and see what I jus did '..please somebody call Doctor uncle 'its really severe"

" Its ok Maanaa'..it will be alright '. But seriously today u truly look like The true Rajput queen '. I never knew that uncle Brij taught you so well that you could disarm The Udayveer!!! Mind you!!!'Seems like I l have to take few lessons from Uncle Brij myself"

Seeing that nobody's gonna come any soon''.Maanyata tore the corner of her white cotton robes and tied them on his wound''so that blood clots fast. As she was done with tying the piece of cloth 'Udayveer was observing her closely ''.her innocent face was so engrossed in his pains that it was certainly impossible to figure out who actually was hurt in the duel'..if the wound dint stand out due to the blood stains on the white cloth tied in his arms '..

He again knelt down on his knees to bow to her highness''

" So I lost ur highness '..ask me whatever u wish!!!!!"

" Look at me Uday!!!!!"'.oh the intensity with which she called him Uday ''

He looked up to face Maanyata who was standing very close to him ''she made her way towards his lips and slightly kissed the corner'. biting his lips teasingly in process ''.as he opened his mouth she giggled and placed her mouth on his surrendering herself to her man to guide her further''he cupped her face in both his hands and tenderly sucked those delicate rosy wonders '..never for a moment letting her go'..while she completely submitted herself between his strong arms slightly caressing his neck all this while '..but suddenly the kiss broke ''because by now 'they were out of breath

Maanyata blushed beetroot red while breathing heavily while Uday seemed completely dumbstruck '.she is always so unpredictable '.. he never gets her right 'but whatever it was '..it was hotter than even the hot noon of Devgarh '.

" Even if I lost'I was rewarded with the kiss ur highness????"'.he asked while looking at her dreamily as if this was not for real

" How cud I ever win Uday ''WHEN U LOST'.u and I can never be on the opposite sides'.your loss is mine as much as your win is '.. and for that matter the sands of Devgarh should know that the queen always keeps her promises!!!!"

Udayveer was awed in the magnificent love his lady showered on him ''.without waiting for a moment he again pulled her close kissing her deeply 'and when the kiss was over '..

" For that matter 'the sands of Devgarh should also know that THE Prince is worthy enough to never let down his queen no matter what '..and stand by her forever"

And they made their way towards the palace''. Dadi sahib smiled seeing them both coming back lost in each other''

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PRECAP

" Was this all a lie 'a political game '.TELL ME !!!!!"

"Yes!!!!!"'.he replied while his face sunk

She threw the ring on the floor '.the ring that was someday adorned by his mother '..but this was going to happen ..now or some other day '..it just had to happen'At least he was free from those lies

Maanyata sat on the floor crying ''somehow she got over her first heartbreak 'but what now?????

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I hope u guys like it more than the first part...comments are eagerly awaited

loveya

akki

Edited by akkiiiii - 13 years ago
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awesome update loved the duel poor uday his guilt is eating him alive and now when he tell her the truth it will separate them finally when thing are good with them this will break them apart
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Wow Akki kya baat hain awesome update love it love it love it⭐️⭐️...what a passionate kiss☺️☺️ the duel fight was beautiful described but the precap makes me😭😭 but as it is said distance only makes heart grow fonder I guess this separation will find its own way to bring Manveer together at least UV is free from the burden of lies
Plzz update soon and thxs for the pm🤗

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