The Sand Princess...Maanveer ss part5 pg8 - Page 8

Originally posted by: dumas

awesome update loved it ...Thanks gurl

that was so intense poor uday he has slipped in to a coma...hmmm😭😭...but dun worry for him..m thr😊 and maayata realizing her sister might be part of the conspiracy ...yeah thats pretty sad what jay did

and jai very dumb...seriously 😡...she was so blinded by the dream of getting Uday one day

being played to put their lives in danger how will she get him if dead...yeah ..but she isnt totally evil ..u will get her side of justification too in the upcoming parts😊

maanyata just started her first move can't wait o see what she will do ...lets wait n watch ...that wud be interesting to watch

loved the update well written and perfectly describe the emotions where perfectly done thanks for the pm...thakns for liking it sweetheart ...will put in more of the hard work so dat u guys keep on loving it

Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Akki one word awesome ...what a trilling update love it ...thakns Pri

So J is involved in all this😡...hmmm ...but thr is more to the story...jai cudnt harm him ...can she ??😉

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm...yeah m working on the update ...it will be up soon

Originally posted by: MsLuscious

Akki ths part was s0o s0o s0o g0od dix part w0rth our waiting i mean u explaind evrythng so beautifuly it seemd lyk m watchng a m0vie evry em0ti0n wax explaind beautifuly l0vd it al0tt plx plx update s0on dix tym n u r amazing writer:)hatts off

Originally posted by: fatima4a

Akki!!!!!!

Amazing, awesome, basically: LOVED IT!!!!!!!...oh fati ..really was it dat good???...me toh read it dubaaraa reading ur comments 😆😆

yaar, yeh tumne kya jadoo kia hai, I was sooo in the story...ab yaar inna bhi chane ke jhaad per mat chadhaa ...gir gyi to bums swell ho jayenge ..lolozzz

hope to see manveer reunite soon....wohi to story hai ladki ...jus keep tuning in ...u will surely get what u wnt

can't wait to read more...bas thoda aur intezaar baby

update soon honey...working on it ...if nt tonight then surely by tomo morning ..but yeah sometimes I suck ..so after writing pages delete them...so if dat wud be the case ...u will have to wait longer...I have the things well constructed in mind ..but mishaps do happen on paper😭😭

Love(L)

Fati

Originally posted by: janeniroopa

awesome update but i feel sad for uday's condition hope he recover soon and manveer unite😊

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

what a thrilling twist!!

continue soon :)

Originally posted by: chitra_rao

this part was just out of the world, the whole twist was awesome and so innovative, absolutely shocker 😊..wats in a twist when it doesnt shock 😉...really appreciate ur comments when u urself are too good ...I hv read ur fic ..i dun remeber the name but the revenge story ...its really awesome too...n thank u jee for finding it innovative ...I myself wasnt sure that it will be so much out of da box ...it jus turned out to be ...yayyy

but was awesome, update soon