The Sand Princess...Maanveer ss part5 pg8

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akanksha

@akkiiiii

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

So after so much time ...I present u with this thrilling and chilling update ...dun thro ur jootas on me for making Uday's condition pitiable ...just enjoy the story guys ...ur in for a ride ...I tell u

Buliding mysteries is a very difficult task n I ve always written comic stories ...light hearted romance ..this is the first time ...m totally into serious no non sense story ...so it really takes a lot of effort and I hope you people will appreciate the hard work I ve put in ...

Well I dun reply u all individually ...but I want to convey my deep regards to the ardent fans who actualy keep waiting for the update n dun mind spamming my thread ...Nabigha and Jazzthakur I love u gurls(m nt being partial ..they actually are waiting very anxiously)

thank u all for all the motivation and encouragement ...I am in to give u nerve chilling dark story u would love...I was really in second thought if I cud be really able to pull this up ...but thanks to u all ...till now I am good ... I hope this part keeps u on the edge...happy reading

love ya all

Bye

akki

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

wow that was thrilling keep writing please!

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Moni

@-Moni-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Hey Akki :)

I just read all the parts in one go...And I must admit I m so hooked to the story...the mystery and suspense is killing me jaldi update karo😆...with Uday being in come I doubt we will get any ManVeer scenes in the next update but you can throw in some flashback for the diehard fans like me 😳...I love the way you have shown Manyata's and Uday's feelings and inner turmoil so far in the story...

Love Moni

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jenny

@writerjenny

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

it was a heart triller

jus freaking awesome

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jenny

@writerjenny

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

i have one request

yeh dark love story ko aur dark mat bana

already ye kaam cvs kar rahe hain show mein

u know u really write cool!!!!!!!!!!!!

so plz hopefully aise heart attack mat de yaar

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

woaahhh..thrilling & nail biting akiii..just too good...update soon..😊

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Ziva01

@Ziva01

Achiever

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Hi Akki one word awesome ...what a trilling update love it

So J is involved in all this😡

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm

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akshi_t

@akshi_t

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Posted: 13 years ago

#58

just one word for your update AMAZING!!!! 👏...totally HATS OFF 👍🏼...loved it...can't wait for the next update...plzzz update soon 😍

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

awesome update loved it that was so intense poor uday he has slipped in to a coma and maayata realizing her sister might be part of the conspiracy and jai very dumb being played to put their lives in danger how will she get him if dead maanyata just started her first move can't wait o see what she will do loved the update well written and perfectly describe the emotions where perfectly done thanks for the pm

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

Akki ths part was s0o s0o s0o g0od dix part w0rth our waiting i mean u explaind evrythng so beautifuly it seemd lyk m watchng a m0vie evry em0ti0n wax explaind beautifuly l0vd it al0tt plx plx update s0on dix tym n u r amazing writer:)hatts off

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