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Binita

@...Binny...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#161

Sonali..another awesome update.. Loved it.. we got another hint as to what has taken place.. and you know I loved the ending..😳😆.. Update soon..!!

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Niha

@-Niha-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

amazing update. thanks for the PM, cn't wait for the next update 😊

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@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Woo hoo! I am loving this! I can't believe you ended it on such a hot note! I'm left fanning myself. More please!

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Ask me (;

@Hot.Pink.Heels

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

super cuteee!

why did u stop soo soon? 😆

continue soon :)

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Somia3

@Somia3

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

i love your work.

thank for update when we ask

just love your work.

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Jyoti

@bl.drama.lover

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

hey sonali my love...🤗 sorry for the late reply i was caught up with college n on top of tht i was updating my scenes as well but i finally read it n this is wat i have to say:

OMG OMG OMG i cant believe u yaar itna hot scenes of Manveer☺️ haayyyeee sachi i'm in 7th heaven right now😍😳really too goood my love seriously awesome n sweeet love..

these hot sizzling scenes of Manveer☺️ r nicely n brilliantly written sonali..👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ 5 stars for an awesome writer..😉

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#167

😳AWSESOMEEE JOB

loooveddd it

looveed the cute Mnaveer scnes..

Awsomw job😃

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

thanks girls, soon all will be revealed then since it's a short story maybe it will end by next week

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shivani

@Miss.Colorfull

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

awesome update and everytime i read it it leaves me craving for more😳

love this part n thats exactly how i feel about akash too😆

He wanted to scream how much he loved her and how he just wanted them to live their lives to the fullest. He never wanted to hear or see Akash again. That scoundrel had tried to take Manyata from him even after he had discovered she was his since his childhood. No matter before he fell in love with her or after. Whatever was his should remain his.