~Yaddein~ Short Story siggie added first page - Page 28

Hey, I just read this short story in a go and I need to tell you that You are an amazing writer girl...👏
The emotions you have displayed, the mental turmoil of Manveer, and the LOVE you expressed in this SS is just beautiful, awesome, I just am speechless 👍🏼... and such a sweet ending...😍
Please PM me whenever you decide to write anything next...😊

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omg...i loved it...it was awesome...never read any story like this...u r a awesome writer...awesome...out of the world...loved it...👏

wow it was such a happy endin i loved da last part :))

Omg omg omg omg omg omg this was freaking BRILLIANT!! 😲
I read it all in one go and my og my I loved every bit of it.
It was so beautifully written and the plot was just amazing!! 👏
Great job. Loved ManVeer in this story. You made them look like such a dreamy married couple 😍 . Wish to see something like this in the show too!!

awwsssmmm i read it alll todayyy jsttt fantasticcc mind blowinggg👏

wow can't believe there were more comments for this story glad you all liked it!

Just read all the parts...its awsome...

a very nice story...i read all parts...awesome

OMG! that was truly phenomenal how come i never read it! i am such a fool!