The Jainandini Chronicles| NEW UPDATE| PART 9| PG. 45 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aawww you nearly made me cry!
poor jay 😭
Please make yash understand soon and not make him stay mad at jay for long!!
I Love the way uday was trying to get yash to understand and there friendship!
Jay and yash in the bed was a bit fast!
But it still loved it was a stunning update definitely worth the wait!
(Thankyou for making it super long!!😃)
Please update your UVC and your next JNC soon aswell
xxx


Edited by cutiepiexox - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing!!!! I really felt bad for Jay first time in your story...hope every thing will be sorted out for her...loved it.., but please update soon dear..,thanks for this update..,
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Posted: 13 years ago
will read and comment .. seems long and intresting.
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was absolutely amazing Reeha!!! Loved every bit of it...really got tears for Jai😭 Esp the last line...he left her with nothing but tears streaming down her face & broken dreams...I have never felt so connected to Jai before...she has been hurt & rejected time & again...I hope Yash understands her and forgives her soon!

Also LOVED the Jai & Manyata bonding...hope to see more of that! Its only natural that now these 2 sisters get over their differences & support each other. Manyata is the one who will empathize most with Jai right now...she will be able to relate well since she also kinda lost Akash.

Its time Jai got her share of happiness & true relations

Loves it very very much Reeha...looking fwd to the UVC's now!

Any pattern that you maintain when updating JNC & UVC?
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Jai. REEHA HOW COULD YOU DO THIS TO HER?? But I am so glad she's got Manyata on her side. I'm going to adore their friendship/sisterly relationship if you keep writing them like that.
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG , J made a mistake by changing her clothes and not confronting him there and then as J . Now shes in trouble.
I have no issues with them going all the way ...this is the way id expect them to be ... but being caught so bad ... is bad and embarrasing.
And I somehow feel Yash will come around soon.
But if he does whers the twist ...?
And their love story is going too sweet already .. need some twist in that .
And oh .. its bhindi and not pindi sweety !.
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Posted: 13 years ago
ouch !! wahi hua jiska darr tha !!
i feel j is d unluckiest char in dek...wen m was missing, she was always compared to how m shud be...wen m returned all forgot her !! poor girl...
hope m n uv will help her...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wat a punch!uv deserved it this time...nd poor jai😔if only she wud have told yash the truth before! all of his worries abt not being able to rule ravgadh wid nandini wud have got relieved!but now he is angry!!😔hope his anger will cool quickly...nd finally manyata-jai r bonding!tats gr8!nd jai is maturing so much!!its so hard to imagine shritama here..
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Posted: 13 years ago
BHINDI!! nor PINDI!!! Pindi is what you call Rawalpindi, a city in Punjab (Pakistan). Or Pindi is a plate made of wooden sticks on which you put the rotis (in Sindhi culture i.e. ME!!!). YOU DO NOT MAKE ANYTHING OUTTA PINDI! It's always a BHINDI!! LADYFINGER!!

Now that I got that out of my system, lemme get to point:

You freakin' witch! You cruel, cruel WITCH! Did ya HAVE to do it?! Did ya HAVE to make them have sex?! Did ya HAVE to make Yash know the truth from TV?! Did ya HAVE to update JNCs before UVCs?! (the last one is pretty personal!)

Well, I won't be throwing rotten tomatoes at you, I love you too much to do that :P Didn't expect this. When the Gala was brought up, I had a feeling that he might see her there but definitely didn't guess what you wrote. Though during the garden scene, I did feel strange that how come no one walked on them :P It was a grand event, in a grand hotel full of people and they were in the garden, not that hidden if not completely exposed. Nice touch to it when the media exposed it all. All I can say is ha ha JN! You should've told him the truth before.

LOVED how the sisters bonded! IN KITCHEN! It was cute. Reading that part I was smiling non-stop, like a Cheshire cat :P And the visions of UVC circling in my head when M brought UV the parathas :P So funny! Loved the way you wrote it down. The date was cute-ish. Yash is nice but I still have a bias for UV. When Yash hit UV, I didn't hate him but still...loved UV's attitude. Poor UV, first he made Manyata understand the duties of a royal and now Yash!

I would love to see M-Y bonding because essentially, they both have been thrown into the world of Royals. The background is different, so are the circumstances but one thing is same - it was all sudden. Way too sudden! M learned her stuff and she is still learning. She has gone through the phase that Yash is going through. Oye! Ree! I demand a good Yash-Manyata scene! YOU BETTER WRITE IT SOON!!! Thinking of your UVC bomb, M might be broken like Yash (I am sensing that Mina got pregnent :P) so two broken hearts can seek console in one and other :P

Waiting for UVC kudiye! That better be goood! :D

Love ya! <3 and thanks for telling me about the update on FB :D Next time, also post the link if ya can -____-'' :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hi reeha,
It was good,but I feel the same way as Mais and it has now come off more like the tv soap with all the drama. I realize there would have hardly been a story if Jn had told Yash the truth before but sometimes that is also really nice to read too...sterling effort so far though! Although I am a teeny bit disappointed...:(
Edited by DEKfan2012 - 13 years ago

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