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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

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OK..

I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO SAY

that was just mindblowing

Best OS i think i have read today!!
awesomeeelyy written

So well thought out

So amazingly expressed

and AWESOMEE storyy

And UDAYVEEER😳 I lovedd his angerrr

it was HOT

please pleasee please do continue writing..

Pleaseee😳

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LD-Radha

@LD-Radha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Aww this was a really nice concept! Loved it😃

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: salekh1
😳
OK..
I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NOTHING TO SAY
that was just mindblowing
Best OS i think i have read today!!
awesomeeelyy written
So well thought out
So amazingly expressed
and AWESOMEE storyy
And UDAYVEEER😳 I lovedd his angerrr
it was HOT
please pleasee please do continue writing..
Pleaseee😳

Awww!! 😳

Thank you so much for such a lovely comment 😃

I will definitely keep writing more one-shots, or fan fictions! 😊

Thank you once again for liking my work!

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: DilDostiDanceD3
Aww this was a really nice concept! Loved it😃

Thanks for liking it! And thank you for commenting! 😃

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: manveerlover
i loved it

Glad you loved it! Thanks for commenting! 😊

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Neema

@N33MA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

aww that was really cute. loved it please continue if possible.

👏

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Krani

@Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: N33MA
aww that was really cute. loved it please continue if possible.
👏

Awww glad you liked it!

Hahah there are no plans of continuing as of now, but you never know! I might get a sudden burst of inspiration, and I'll continue 😉😆

Thanks for commenting!

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

awesome os that would be great if something like this happened well written loved it

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

aww...that was good...i was hoping for a little more...umm...how do i say it...gore...lol...like...Manyatas saree ripping and Uday covering her with his jacket or something...he he...beating the guy to a pulp...im sorry im all for Uday's rage!! he he...but great piece! =)

JAZ