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aww...that was good...i was hoping for a little more...umm...how do i say it...gore...lol...like...Manyatas saree ripping and Uday covering her with his jacket or something...he he...beating the guy to a pulp...im sorry im all for Uday's rage!! he he...but great piece! =)
JAZ
Hahahahahahah! I might write another ManVeer story, and shall include some gory/steamy scenes in them for you ;)
I was going to make it more fighting type, but thought that of playing it down a bit :p
Plus at that time Akash and Manyata were making me kinda sick :p Anyway! Glad you like it! Thank you for commenting!! :D
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