ManVeer Short Scenes - *Short Update - page 25** - Page 16

Originally posted by: poulomi12

waaah! Just as i had thought in my head!<3

Well its way better actually!

Man! i could feel the heat on my skin! Uff i am missing these types of scenes so much!

It was so UV like. The dialogues are so apt, and UV-Manyata Chemistry is as usual crackling...Muah!

I wish CVs had played with UV's razing uncontrollable emotions in the episodes. it would have been a good watch.

Thanks yaar Polo, I started this off in a very good mood by towards the end...GAH!! It turned out so crappy! You are so sweet to say that you liked it...I personally hated this. What's wrong with me? I can't seem to write anything good anymore! 😭

very nice.. i loved it.. n its really good, dont think its not good short but very well written.. thanx for the pm .. plz continue wen u have time :)

Originally posted by: OmaRamdass

omg how intense - my imagination went into overdrive

Thank you. You are sweet! 😊

Originally posted by: arryline

This is waht you call creepy😡GOSH it was freeking awesome Mousie⭐️KUDOS TO YOU .👏It reminded me of the hot and sizzling Manveer😳

Creepy nahin crappy! I hate it yaar! It looked so good in my head 😭 I am glad you liked it!! 😳

Originally posted by: nasghar

very nice.. i loved it.. n its really good, dont think its not good short but very well written.. thanx for the pm .. plz continue wen u have time :)

Thank you so much! 😃

Awesomeee job

Wowww that was just outstanding!!! Gr8 work!! Keep it up!!:)<33

Fizza!

awesome update