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Simran234

@Simran234

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Oh wow! That was so good that I wouldn't mind if you continued it! Loved it!

Simran :D...

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Rida

@FleetingWishes.

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#192

The great Mais look whose here?😎 🤣 🤣 🤣

OMG YOURE A PERFECTIONIST. I LOVED EACH WORD YOU WROTE.

When you write, every word is like a diamond, gleaming so beautifully to form meanings and depth. I love the way you write. Youre like one of the finest writers ever, and mashallah, may Allah enhance your skills more and more. You are like a perfectionist. You always make me love UV more, its the way you pen him down. In each OS of yours, there is mystery, there is beauty, an impeccable touch, a magic that you weave with words. How you start your OSES, with either a simple sentence or question or quote. ITS BEAUTIFUL, ITS PERFECTION. <33

I CAN READ ANYTHING YOU WRITE FOREVER :$ ITS T E R R E F I C. You are an amazing wirter. So i loved How UV was roaming through the corridors, lost indefinitely?🤣

"Na banda hai naa bande ki zaat."🤣🤣 OMG I LOVED THIS WORD, you make him seem so amazing to me always, how his character stands up, is amazing <3

And ahh the description WAS UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL YOU MAGICIAN. You are an amazing writer <3 And I loved how he called to Manyata, and she didnt repsond. It was simply Amazing, and AWW OMG HOW SHE HID BEHIND THE CURTAIN :O :$ From where do you come with such amazing ideas? It made me have so many thoughts, blush, and how then you portrayed his reaction hers, it was all so beautiful. I LOVED IT PARTNER KAMEENI🤣

YOU ARE BRILLIANT. How UV left with her thoughts wandering in his mind. His mesmerised state written SO PERFECTLY, SO WONDERFULLY, I could feel the intensity of attraction, faint but present😳 And how you ended it, beautifully, mysteriously, letting us want more.

YOU ARE PERFECTIONIST. ILY <3

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180506

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

Maisy dear,

Love is not strong enough of a word for what I feel.

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

You really live the moments so well Maise,

if only you ever compile and connect them long after in your leisure time may be some years after ,u may end up writing a good novel with standards of emily bronte and jane austin the writers I so heartily miss 😊

Edited by shana0127 - 13 years ago

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: shana0127
You really live the moments so well Maise,

if only you ever compile and connect them long after in your leisure time may be some years after ,u may end up writing a good novel with standards of emily bronte and jane austin the writers I so heartily miss 😊

Oh no. That is...umm...wow. No no no! The biggest compliment I've ever got! Emily Bronte and Jane Austen?! Are you kidding me! I am not THAT good. I am not being modest but seriously, that's too much. Ab isse zyada kya kahun? I am speechless...

Well, I do plan to write in my future but this compliment has given me the shivers 😆 Thank you is all I can manage. Seriously, thank you.

*faints*

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: reeha...k
Maisy dear,

Love is not strong enough of a word for what I feel.

Oookkkay? 😆 I guess I'll say, "Sentiments understood" 😉

Love ya! 😳

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: -Mais-

Oh no. That is...umm...wow. No no no! The biggest compliment I've ever got! Emily Bronte and Jane Austen?! Are you kidding me! I am not THAT good. I am not being modest but seriously, that's too much. Ab isse zyada kya kahun? I am speechless...

Well, I do plan to write in my future but this compliment has given me the shivers 😆 Thank you is all I can manage. Seriously, thank you.

*faints*

Dont faint I said u may reach there level if u carry on like this,that to may be after ten fifteen years 😉

So carry on and keep becoming better evryday

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: shana0127

Dont faint I said u may reach there level if u carry on like this,that to may be after ten fifteen years 😉

So carry on and keep becoming better evryday

yeah yeah, i know you said i might reach that point, but even that might is enough to make me faint. Cuz my mother thinks i cant write :p when you hear such things from your parents, then these "may" compliments are enough to make you faint :p

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

Originally posted by: -JEHAN-
WOWWW...JUST WOOOWWW...AMAZING...LOVED IT...awesome work...what a OS...ufff...amazing...👏👏

awww!!! Thanks!

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SHANA

@ShanUlas

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

seems like u'r mom is a good critic...good the day u'r mom says u write good u sure will equal these ladies as parents r our best critic

My dad used to say i will never do good in studies and today I am a phd and he is proud of me,but keeps yelling at me that I spend more time in fairy tales rather then my further research😆

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