Until I have your Heart - OS

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please ignore the spelling errors
Really horrible at writing in Hindi



----Until I have your Heart----

It was a silent night the trees were asleep the wind began to die down the roads left covered with dirt but what grew within the closed walls of Udayveers room was anything beyond calm. He lay in a dark corner; with only a small beam of light resting on his stoned face. The only sound that filled the room was his thoughts and the tick of the clock.

Manyata, a thought would silently whisper, Manyata a name, a face, the reason that had ripped him of his sleep and left him restless night after night. There wasn't a day when the thought of her wouldn't enter, there wasn't a moment when her name didn't echo in his mind or was it his heart?
Not the heart, certainly not my heart, the heart is irrational it doesn't reason it knows no logical, it weakens and confuses, it drifts you of your path , my path is the thrown and Manyata you are the key to that thrown. Udayveer tried to give himself and his thoughts some assurance; no he wasn't going to drift of his path so easily surely not a girl. But for some reason he could not get over the incident of today, watching her standing so close to him, so close that they're lips nearly met, the thought would live him burning. He did not love her but his body ached to touch her he wanted her just once-

Udayveer, a voice arose from one corner of his drained room, UDAYVEER, there did you hear that he thought immediately rising from his chair. His eyes caught a beam of light which he followed spellbind; the beam of light came from his mirror, though when he looked it wasn't him that appeared it was her. She stood there looking back at him wide eyed, was it really her?
Veda, why did you take so long? Kaha hai hearing aid use kara karo but no you can live in such a huge house but you can't use 4 rupees to buy yourself a hearing aid, question answered, yes it was really her. Udayveer stood there stunned, he had spent many sleepless nights lost in her thoughts but never had this ever happened. She was in front of him though he couldn't touch her, he could feel her presents she was his mirrored reflection.

Oii, hello, Manyata snapped her fingers in front of him, tum kaha kho gaye ho? Stop day dreaming!

Day dream? Udayveers snapped out from his thoughts, Dream, yeh spana hi toh ha.

kya , tell me how much have you had to drink? She singled through her eyes towards his right hand, which was holding on to a glass of rum perhaps. He gave a smile and instantly tried to hide his glass behind him; he clearly knew how much she disliked alcohol. Don't try to hide, you've been caught, she called out as Udayveer took out his glass again, tumhe sharam nahi aati ladki ke samne sharab peete , specially at this time of the hour when no one's around?


Udayveer looked down rubbed his hair and looked up with a confident smirk, kya kare princess, jab aap paas nahi hoti toh iss se hi kaam chalana parta hai lekin hum appse wada karte hain once we're married you'd be the only Jaam (alcohol) in my life, he raised the glass towards her in toast, but for now tum nahi toh yeh sahi, taking a sip of ,...plus abhi humne tumhare sath ki he kya hai, a naughty and seductive smile carved on his lips, remember one thing princess once I start to stop me is impossible.😈

Tharki, khuta, suvar tumhai sharam nahi aati-

Ab princess aap se kya sharamna after all tum meri hone wali biwi joho

Oh god not again,
rolling her eyes than folding her hands together, I asked you to give Udayveer some brain but you NEVER listen to me...tomorrow I will call a tantrik baba, he will definitely get rid of your hone wali biwi ghost and hopefully you out of my life.

There is no one in this world that can change my mind from marrying you, not your tantrik baba , not you. And no one princess in this universe can separate you from me for a second time -

Monyaia, Monyia, where are you , hurry up,
another voice cheeped into the room, Manyata shined with joy, her face would glow only on the sight and thought of one person, Askash, it was his very voice that called out for her.

Don't go Manyata, Udayveer's face darken, his eyebrows clichd he felt a rush in his veins.

Askash ' the mirror lights began to faint as she turned to the side ready to follow Akash's voice whichever way it led her.

Manyata, don't go, Udayveer moved forward, reaching out his hand to hold her before she walked out on him again. As he leaped to hold her his hand did nothing but hit the mirror, the room once again turned darken , he knocked on the mirror in frustration hoping it would let him in as he tried to go beyond it, he finally realized it was nothing but just a dream an illusion.

Akash , had found his way into his dreams ,even in his dreams, his thoughts, Manyata could never completely be his. On this thought the grip of Udayveers hand tighten, Akash not only stood between Manyata and him but he had managed to create a glass wall between them though it wasn't visible it was there every time they , he got closer to her he would end up smashing into the wall. With that thought there was another smash; Udayveer raised his right hand, to find his glass crashed into pieces and blood flowing of his veins.

As he looked at his blood covered hand, flames arose in his eyes, he faced turned determined his head held up high, inn ragon( vein) ki khoon mein ab bas tumhai jeet ne ki chahat ka junoon hai, haar na toh humne kabhi seekha nahin aur jo hume harra de kisi mein itna dum nahi. I won't stop, I won't bow and I will never give up until I have your heart Rajkumri Manyata.
He looked at the crashed bits of his glass, As for the wall that stands between us...don't worry princess, iss tuta glass ki tarah mein deewar ko be tod do.




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..Ananya.. thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Woha..That was one hell of an OS 😃 Loved every bit of it ⭐️ That idiot Akash comes everywhere 🤢 even in UV's dream 😡 I just wanna kill him Beautiful OS 😊
As for the wall that stands between us...don't worry princess, iss tuta glass ki tarah mein deewar ko be tod do. awwie..UV I'm with you 😳 He's so sweet 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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cool... shows Udays possessiveness...great job!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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GR8...loved possesive uday very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesom.. I was literally dying to read an OS.Keep up the good work
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Ananya-kmh..

Woha..That was one hell of an OS 😃 Loved every bit of it ⭐️ That idiot Akash comes everywhere 🤢 even in UV's dream 😡 I just wanna kill him Beautiful OS 😊

As for the wall that stands between us...don't worry princess, iss tuta glass ki tarah mein deewar ko be tod do. awwie..UV I'm with you 😳 He's so sweet 😉


i know right ! i dont know y the cvs are so hell bent to show M and A's crap ...lol...
thanks so much for reading 😊
Udayveers gonna win her over sooner or later :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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This was such a deep and touching os. it was faNtastic
I loveeed each an every word..
you are an amazinggg writter
this was awesome
Pleaseee contiue this..or write more..Pleaseee
and Please PM me you future ManVeer work..Loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its just freaking awesome...
really liked it...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow, that was a beautiful OS.
I would love it if Uday's realization is something like this.
Please write more :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: prc_fan1

wow, that was a beautiful OS.

I would love it if Uday's realization is something like this.
Please write more :)


hey thanks for the wonderful comment 😃
but udayveers realization is so faaarrr away :(
never-less m loving this tom n jerry game 😛
btw i just LOVE ur dp 😈 sexy ;)

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