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Yuvika

@Yuvika_15

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow poco it was amazing...no words 2 describe it...ur very talented...

UV won n manyata tried 2 put up a fight... it wud b gd 2 c her b as bold as he is in ur nxt OS...lol...

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

loved it..

damn! All your OS make me wish that the CVs would actually incorporate your OS into their script. It would be awesome!

You understand the characters so well. You write with such detail & beauty :)

Your OS is really a treat for boring weekends. At least, i can imagine ManVeer while reading your OS😃

One last thing : regardless of whether you continue watching the show or not, don't ever leave writing. I think it's in you, you just got the flair for writing :)

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-scarlett-

@-scarlett-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

SPEECHLESS! I love your representation of UdayVeer!

Edited by -Vishwa- - 13 years ago

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@--ANGEL--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

awesome os...loved to read it

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

good one

r u continuing it?

if not then plz do so

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salekh1

@salekh1

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

WOOOW

awesomeee

"I will but before that register this thing in your cute little brown head……When am loyal to people, I guard them with my life . But when people betray me, I ruin their lives…… "

lOVED THAT LINE!

pLEASE IF YOUR WRITIN MORE. PM me pleaseee,,

And amaazingly written and protrayed...

Please conitnueee😃

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

lovely job Poco that was amazing!

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utopia88

@utopia88

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Awesome OS! I enjoyed reading it! 👍🏼

If only you were one of the DEK CVS! Sigh!

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Jyoti

@bl.drama.lover

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

thnks for sharing... u did really awesome n good writing of both characters it felt like i was actually watching an episode of MANVEER... really good should write more its really enjoyable to read... man how i wish the CV's u some of the ideas tht have been written here in IF... it would be really awesome if they did use this idea it be dream come true but these CV's jus do the opposite n give us something we dont want well anyways enjoyed ur Manveer OS is was really well done...😉⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ five stars for the writing n many more...

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minizz

@minizz

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Pink,I loved it.This was very entertaining.I did not feel any sympathy for Manyata here.UdayVeer ka mast reaction tha👏I don't want Uday to turn into a Devdas for Manyata.I want him to behave the way you portrayed him.I just hope the CVs take note.Thank you for this😃

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