The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137

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suha

@suha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

hey amazing post...but you forgot to PM me 😔...update soon😊 and please pm me

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Last post on page 67 is edited for Simmy. <3

PS on that note- if you have reserved a place to comment, please post and let me know that it has been edited and on which page, so I can read it- simply because the thread is so long now. Thank you <3

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NightStarr

@NightStarr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Awww 😍 Another perfect chapter about our favorite royal couple!!!! I just everything about this FF everyone is so consistent and great in their own character. I just loved all the teasing done by the family I cant wait to see that happen in DEK because i think something like that has a very big potential to be on the show. I think no matter how much I say I love love love love love this story its still not enough as I have become a stalker of this tread and even though I know you pm everyone when you post the chapter I still check the thread to see maybe you have posted a chapter 😆 My favorite part Vijay Bhair teasing her and seeing that I feel like if they became friends it would stronger and MUCH MUCH MUCH more fun to watch!!!

Patiently (or not so patiently lol 😆) waiting for the next chapter!

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meerakhan45

@meerakhan45

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

OMG..OMG..OMG...

Only these word can come out of my mounth... ufff im lost.. totally lost...Where the hell do you get alll those beautiful, romantic thoughs from??????

Im still in shock... ufff okay let me just take a deep breath before i write more...

Okay...
It was beautiful FF ever... I loved the rose scenes and the dinner scene where Brijraj tease M. And the most beautiful scenes were valentine date between UV and M. When i was reading about UVs thoughts and suddenly when he mentioned The Ship, i was sooo exited...
I think it was the most romantic, beautiful and sooo sweet and adoroble date ever... Any girls dream...
Okay seariuly the way u desreib every single detail make the FF perfect... i could see every thing through my imagination...
I loveeeddd the dance... Whenever i read ur FF i always guess something and it always turn out like i thought... U surly read my mind heheh
Still OMG... i dont know how to decreib my feelings right now... Im spechless and at the same time i want to say sooo many things...
This time i wont give u any stars... becoz u are wining 100 stars out of 100... Love u and plzzz keep doing it...
You are gifted writer...:D Love love love Meera

P.S. i know its tooo soon, but plzzz update part 15... cant wait anymore... and plzz send me messege whenver u update a new FF... Becoz u didnt do it last time...

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Somia3

@Somia3

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

I Love It. 😊

when will the next part be

i can't wait!

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Raunika

@rsk16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

just loved the update.totally amazing.the kiss was magnificent.loveed it

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
oohh this was so cute. I love the idea of Uday wooing her with roses, and the significance of a single red rose! *swoon* So romantic. And the date? Perfect.

I feel a little bad for Jai though. She deserves a happy ending.

Anhdara- this is something you will enjoy. And SERIOUSLY, no joke, right after I read your comment, that night I have the dream which sets this all into place:

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Be sure to tell me what you think! 😊

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

reeha it was amazingo it wa so well written loved it so much best prt uptil now n my fav plx plx plx update soon is baar mat tarsana late update de kar;)

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: manveerlover
reeha it was amazingo it wa so well written loved it so much best prt uptil now n my fav plx plx plx update soon is baar mat tarsana late update de kar;)

😛 LOL, I think I can get away with it, don't you? There were two updates this week😉.

JK, I'll do my best. To be frank Sareh, I actually havent thought of what I want to happen next- I'm kind of going through writers block.

Till then enjoy this:

https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2793147

I know you're a "manveerlover" 😉 like me, but still, try it out and let me know if you like it or not.

Thanks!🤗