The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137 - Page 54

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrarrti

Reeha! Maar dala yaar! I don't know how you can say people won't like this update. They kiss,which will never in a million years happen on the show, so this update definitely stands out.


I don't even think you need to edit it at all. It's a masterpiece as is!

The single red rose, the chest full of gifts, the romantic dinner on the yacht, and THE KISS!

I'm still fanning myself to cool down and still smiling the goofy smile I got when Manyata started looking around for Udhay. It didn't go away for the rest of the update. Woman you are something else! 🤗 Tons of flying kisses for you!

Aw! Thanks! <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was definatley slower and less action packed then the last, and I felt as if I could have written it better, but I had a deadline!😆 this is why I should be allowed to take my sweet time people!😉- and yes, a kiss would never happen onscreen, so this is where I can make things happen😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Reeha...Amazing part. Loved the whole concept of wooing with red roses. Love the way Brijraj and M are bonding. Its so endearing. I really liked the outfits. Its amazing how you make it so lavish and still simple.

Great Part

I am living my indian clothing dream vicariously through M in this FF.
I would love to have a closet full of sarees and sarees and more sarees. but where the heck would I wear them?😆 thanks for reading and commenting Amnu! <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: dimpzz

OMG REEHA!!!!!
I soo LOVED it!!
the whole valentine thing was just so cute!!
i mean i just couldn't help smiling in the entire update, be it brijraj teasing manyata or Udayveer giving a rose to manyata daily or the whole evening they spent together!
it was so beautiful! and who said the updte wasn't good?! it was great!
AND they finally kissed!!😃😳
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hahahaha!! but in the end after it rained SHE kissed him!😆
i sooo sooo loved the update!
thank you for such a beautiful update! 🤗

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Navpreet

Navpreet! 🤗 I'm glad you've liked it- I'm sure that part was everyone's favourite😆😉Embarrassed. I firmly believe sometimes a girl just has to do things herself, and after being interrupted so many times (I think there were about 5 almost kiss moments) M decides to do it herself.😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
Reeha Another SUPERB update..

Brij Raj and M's bonding is too good.. You've done an amazing job to describe the father and daughter connection.. 👍🏼

Regarding ManVeer as always ELECTRIFYING.. Valentines celebration on Yatch 😍 😍 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ (Five Stars) For the fab idea.. The unwrapping of Presents was soo emotional.. I truly Loved it.. In addition Tom and Jerry was the perfect combination ..

The Last scene ☺️ ☺️ ☺️.. They Finally KISSED.. ❤️ ❤️.. It came as a surprised for me as M was the first on Action Here.. Well I Tell You this was the BEST..

Ohhh How can I forget My Vijay Bhanna.. His sweet antics in the dinning table..😆 Bang On for the touch of Humor in this Part..

Lastly.. I Luvd the Saree.. Its sooo Elegant.. Perfect for the Princess.. Thanks for Putiing up the Pics as well..

Massive Hugs Simmy 🤗 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
this was minddd- blowing reeha!
enjoyed it thoroughly😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved it Reeha!Amazing(as usual).Thank you very much for the PM.
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Posted: 13 years ago
i loved the update...it was just so beautiful..the bod Uday, Manyata share is getting stronger by every minute...& i'am completely loving it...the end of part 14 was just perfect...i wonder what Akash would do if he sees them like this...i don't mind Manyata giving a piece of her mind to Akash... & whatever Uday did for Manyata was just so sweet...memories beautifully woven... superbly shown...awesome update...continue soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi Reeha sweetheart thx u a lots for this awesome update love it and enjoy reading it
Finally ManVeer first kiss☺️ what a magical kiss and M makes the first move as per UV wish it's beautiful.
Love the outfits the saree is superb
Thxs for the pm 🤗 and plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reeha...k

What would it feel like being with Uday?
The question every UV lover asks around here🤔, about time M started asking it too, don't ya think?😉 I think the question fans mostly ask is "Why won't he be MINE?!" I know this, because that's what I whine to my sister. 🤣🤣🤣

I was expecting to get killed after the stunt I Pulled: TWICE. Trust me, I was getting excited and while typing was thinking "Just do it Reeha- Let them kiss you b*tch!" but I took a deep breath *be patient Reeha, be patient, not yet, not yet* and controlled myself! It was difficult, I tell you.😳 Oh, trust me, I was going to rant big time. But then I was pacified by the end. "I love you, Manyata." It still is so 😍😍

And oh, "the meatball headed girl" - Niiice! 🤣 Hey! I gotta give my girl a shout-out ya know? 😎 Oh, I love you for that! 🤗 🤣🤣


ink LAWLS. For a moment I didnt see the "not" between the words "could" and " have" and I thought to myself...oh crap what a Fail. Too soon, he shouldnt have said I love you if that's what is saying. THEN I re-read it a couple times and give myself this: LOL. Thank you- I think UV realizes he loves her...and willing to say it. Manyata can't but UV is intutive enough to read her face.

Thank you for your LOVELY analysis, and I look forward to the next one!🤗

And psh, as if I will ever be disappointed by you! 😲 Like I said, I loved the ending. After the day they had, it deserved that ending. 😳


Time for my favourite part: REVIEWING! YAY!

UGH! Roses! Worse, red roses! 🤢 I do this every single time I see it - whether in TV, in movies, in real life, in books... 'YUCK! YUCK! YUCK!' Sorry, Ree, but I won't spare this scene either with the same reaction. 😒 It is very cliched. -___-

But at least you made it up with Brijraj teasing her! ❤️ I love family bonding! 😃 I am totally the type of person who can watch Hum Apke Hai Kaun, Hum Saath Saath Hain without getting bored. Ever. Plus being a pampered daughter and sister myself, these type of scenes are so relatable... to an extent. 😆😆

"Vera Wang" Indian Princess! 🤣🤣🤣 GREAT shout out to your Royal Chronicles! 😉

Vijay: She's looking, She's not looking, She's waiting, She's not waiting, It's Uday, It's not Uday. 🤣🤣🤣

Komal: Mahraj, bas ke jeeya. You're embarrassing her.
Brijraj: No I'm not Komal! She's fine! So as I was saying, when you were kids-
Oof! Fathers, I tell you! My Dad never leaves a party without sharing all of my (embarrassing) childhood stories to anyone and everyone. *facepalm slap* I can so relate to Manyata's flushed face situation.
Aww and she calls him "Papa" - I hope that's what she calls Brijraj in the show! I don't want this Dad or Daddy business.

She smiles at our timeless tradition: It's a Cadbury Milk Chocolate Bar.
ROFL! Good marketing tactic 😛

Ahh... The ship dinner... Typical Manyata. Cranky because she's hungry, indeed. 😆
I love how you brought in the innocence of child Udayveer back again. I can still remember the update where he tried to find her midst the rain and with few things in his backpack... 👍🏼 The gift scene was just too sweet.

Tom and Jerry - ahh, I love the cartoon series. Classic even till date.

I grin and reach out to push away a strand of hair, only to notice, she's already tucked it back. Oh well, next time Udayveer. 😆😆 He really loves doing that, doesn't he? 😆😆

Manyata: You know, the news columnist that's obsessed with you. She calls you Princey.
I LOVE how you mention the Royal Chronicles every now and then! And calling yourself a Udayveer obsessed columnist - classic! 🤣

UV: You smell so nice all the time, so clean, soft, and ...I don't know. I just don't think you need to worry about those things.
Manyata: Shut up and dance Udayveer.
Exactly, that was very cheesy, UV. 😆

Manyata: You're so damned slow Udayveer, it's about time you know.
O.M.GEEE. THEY FINALLY KISS! She initiates it! P-E-R-F-E-C-T! ❤️

Amaaazing update. You are too complain-y, complain-y about your work! 😳 IT ROCKS, all right! *shakes head at you*

Anyways, looking forward to the next update! Will promise to read the Jay Chronicles later! 😃

TC.

P.S. CONGRATULATIONS on being Rajkumari of the week! Too lazy to write in that thread 😆
Edited by tvlover92 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Gahhh! I will reply to you guys soon! And I must ask you to read J's story as well, because I have some progress up my sleeve!!! GAHHH so excited! Bye bye writers block!

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