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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#501

oohh this was so cute. I love the idea of Uday wooing her with roses, and the significance of a single red rose! *swoon* So romantic. And the date? Perfect.

I feel a little bad for Jai though. She deserves a happy ending.

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

that was beautiful and great choice of outfits! Udayveer wanted her to make the first move and she did! That was really well done! I kept checking for the update and it was well worth the wait! Just adored the date and whole scenario! Keep writing Reeha! Just loving this!

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udaymanyata07

@udaymanyata07

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

👏love it...great job...and the red rose part amazing..i just can;t wait for part 14...thanks...👏

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Preet

@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Reeha! Maar dala yaar! I don't know how you can say people won't like this update. They kiss,which will never in a million years happen on the show, so this update definitely stands out.

I don't even think you need to edit it at all. It's a masterpiece as is!

The single red rose, the chest full of gifts, the romantic dinner on the yacht, and THE KISS!

I'm still fanning myself to cool down and still smiling the goofy smile I got when Manyata started looking around for Udhay. It didn't go away for the rest of the update. Woman you are something else! 🤗 Tons of flying kisses for you!

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

😊😛😳IM JUST LEFT AMAZED

Reeha.. THAT WAS sooo HOT AND SENSOUSE!
i loooved loveD LOVED there date, and the ending was just WOAH😳

Awesomey done!!
Please pelaseee continue and keep writing! Really bring Hapiness to this forum!!

Awesome job like always😃

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Amnu

@Eternized_Blues

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#506

Reeha...Amazing part. Loved the whole concept of wooing with red roses. Love the way Brijraj and M are bonding. Its so endearing. I really liked the outfits. Its amazing how you make it so lavish and still simple.

Great Part

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Cytherea

@Cytherea

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#507

OMG are you kidding..it was definitely one of my favorite parts!! And i absolutely adore Uday in your FF!! We should forward your FF tot the CVs :)

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Antara Mazumdar

@dmg_roks_antara

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#508

OMG u r AWESOME!!!!!!! loved ur ff...plzzz cont soon n pm me on d next part

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Amrita

@Maahzabeen

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Loved it Reeha...Wish this happens in DEK too😉Add me to your PM list😃

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Navpreet

@dimpzz

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#510

OMG REEHA!!!!!
I soo LOVED it!!
the whole valentine thing was just so cute!!
i mean i just couldn't help smiling in the entire update, be it brijraj teasing manyata or Udayveer giving a rose to manyata daily or the whole evening they spent together!
it was so beautiful! and who said the updte wasn't good?! it was great!
AND they finally kissed!!😃😳
and the part -
Damned stubborn woman. I give in. I'll do it. I'll kiss her. Screw her doing it first, because she obviously won't. She notices me leaning in, and I know she knows what's going to happen, her eyes close, lips part, and finally I can do what I've been waiting to do ...iterally- forever. Kiss her.

hahahaha!! but in the end after it rained SHE kissed him!😆
i sooo sooo loved the update!
thank you for such a beautiful update! 🤗

love
Navpreet

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