The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137

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@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

This was the perfect birthday gift! A looong update, that established Moniya's transformation to Manyata, her remembering Tom, getting rid of Akash, etc.

Amazing! Reeha you've done a wonderful job. There are one or two grammatical errors, but in the scheme of things, it doesn't matter!

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salekh1

@salekh1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

😃reeha...k, you are amazing

I loveeed the update

It was so mesmorizing and so full

It was just so good!

Loved how you expressed Uday's feelings and Manyata's transfomation

Awesomly written like always!!

Great job

Reallly loved this one!

Thank you so much for the PM

Please, please.. update soon😛

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Shalala

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

i am dead😉

awesome OS👏

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Nakita19

@Nakita19

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Oh...My...God! I think I stopped breathing while reading the entire update....SO AWESOME!!!!!! Excuse me while I try to calm the jitters.☺️ Really appreciate the extra effort by making it longer. 🤗

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Aradhna

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

yay thank god you gave her a makeover! the show is taking way too long to do that. I love how long this part is. it's so well done - Manyata remembering Tom and calling Komal 'Ma' were probably the sweetest things ever. And Uday milking his injury for all it's worth? Priceless.

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KSG_luv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

Omg just amazing
M speechless no words
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Saba Sheikh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

wow Reeha another fab update its so much better than d serial...
i m lovin it... n Manyata's dress looks amazing...

do continue soon ...

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Manasi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

How I wish there was an option of 'LOVE' instead of 'LIKE'!!!!!!!! Like is so small & inadequate to describe my feelings...I guess this reply box is meant for that purpose😳

LOVE LOVE LOVE completely...I was so completely lost reading the whole update😉

Love you gurl...you are a prolific writer👏👏👏👏👏

Do post the article Brij was reading😛