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@thejazzgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#271

Beautifully written reeha... loved it :)

do write more

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meerakhan45

@meerakhan45

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Posted: 13 years ago

#272

First of all i wanted to apologize that i didnt gave u feedback...

Okay now to the FF... Seriouly every time i read ur FF i also think that one is the best one, but... But you proof me wrong again and agin...
Now why, becoz u do better and better FF Next time.. I meant it from the deep of my heard... that you are the best writer i have known...
I really have no word for how beautiful this FF was.
I love the way you descrieb the emotions and feeling M And Uv have for each other. Like i have mention it before, that whenever i read your FF, it feels like im reading a book. Maybe one day when the show is finish or you got bored of dekha ( I Hope not), then print this ou to a book.
I know that soon i im going to write a novel to you, to explain what think about this FF...heheh
Anyway i loved this whole FF And i lovvveeeddd the Dress... It was a really nice choice...And the color of dress was very unusual color... nice choice..
Okay now im tied of writing...
Last i have one request... Plzz give us a date when the next FF is coming!!! heheh
Love Meera...😃

P.S. i heard that people give stars from 1 to 10... Im giving you

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️... You need to make a littel more efford which will defitnily give 10 on 10... Plzz dont mind..

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#273

Originally posted by: limbu.simmy
Reeha 🤗❤️ No words to express this part.. Its just SUPERB ⭐️ ⭐️⭐️

The emotional bonding with Tom, Komal and Pictures were simply great.. 😊 Only you could put it in the most appropriate words to express the emotions.. Well done.. 👏 👏 😃.. Media being Media 😉 😉.. Thts the reality and you have managed to explain every thing in details... Hats off.. 👏 👏

Overall great Part.. Luvd the shopping bit and the Ending ❤️ ❤️.. Adored it.. M actually caring abt UV 😍and his bruised Back ☺️ ☺️ (This is me blushing, while reading the ff).. The Anarkali suit is just GORGEOUS (Purple one of my fave colour 😊)..

Thanks sooo much for the awesome part.. Can't wait for the nxt one (I knw m being Cheeky as you've just updated one.. But tht's just me 😉 )

Simmy 🤗 🤗

I'm happy you enjoyed it! I'm trying to use the Media as a helper in Making Akash move on and away from Manveer- at least for now. At the same time I'm soo happy you liked her outift! I'm glad that I choose your colour as well😆.

Don't worry, I'll post the next part within a week, promise😉

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: shrarrti
This was the perfect birthday gift! A looong update, that established Moniya's transformation to Manyata, her remembering Tom, getting rid of Akash, etc.

Amazing! Reeha you've done a wonderful job. There are one or two grammatical errors, but in the scheme of things, it doesn't matter!

FIRST OFF:

🤗

It wasnt planned! But I'm glad I was able to give you something😆

Plus, I fixed up the big ones: I was re-reading and was like "Oh god, theres another one"

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
yay thank god you gave her a makeover! the show is taking way too long to do that. I love how long this part is. it's so well done - Manyata remembering Tom and calling Komal 'Ma' were probably the sweetest things ever. And Uday milking his injury for all it's worth? Priceless.

I had to take into consideration about her remembering Tom- to be honest I initally wanted her not to remember- but I thought about what you said, and how you and others really wanted her to remember (Preet has said it in the past as well) so I decided that its the best thing to do. Excpet I made it a "kind of remember" 😆

And Yes, I think it's very much like UV to use things to his advantage, so I couldnt help myself but letting him milk the injury!😉

Thanks for the input!😊

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: srishaa16
One word WHOOPEEE!!!Sorry had to do that manyata ban rahi hai Uday ki
Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika Dhinkachika
Re e e e Re e e e

🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

I started picturing Manyata dancing to the song!

Thank you for reading Srishaa, I'm glad you enjoed it! 🤗

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#277

Originally posted by: IndigoBlues
amazing chapter yaar..😲 i mean what a pov of uday...how can you write so freaking in-depth...plus, i felt like skipping majnu parts but the sadist in me wanted to know he felt on seeing manveer so close.😆😉

waiting for 11!😳

hehehe! The sadist in me wanted him to realize that UV and M are meant for eachother, and feel their connection😆😃😉

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Adden

@Add123

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#278

Okay, so those were 30 mins of pure heaven (Yes, I'm a slow reader😳) , but girl that was just BEAUTIFUL, it felt so real, for a second I thought this all was actually happening in the real world ... and all the media fiasco, the romantic pictures in the news paper, believe it or not I actually felt like I was seeing them infront of my eyes😍, that's how good the writing was !!! Ohh and I absolutely love the whole hatred being chucked at Akash indirectly and in the sweetest manner from you 😉 The update was soo realistic... I was completely lost , unaware of my surroundings, and then my screen saver went on, distracting my world of ManVeer, and yep that's when it struck me ... that this was a FanFic. 😃 Loved It ❤️ ... I hope my comment isn't too long, but then again you work so hard with fantastic updates, this is the least I can do to thank you 😳 Continuee Soon xxx

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Sarah

@MsLuscious

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#279

hayyye wot a update yaar loveddd it it was so0o0o0o0 magical avani part was funny! bt the rest was awesome ax always n thnk u so0o0o0o0o0o much for such a long update... love u loads do write more😊