The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137

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Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Hi Reeha 🤗 I fall short of words to describe how much I enjoy reading the update. Just one word

While reading the update I was visualizing the scenes they are so beautifully described👏👏❤️❤️

Guess UV gifted M something from their childhood that they have shared. Hey I like the dress it's lovely

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm 🤗

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Troll Master Gogo!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

LOL! My name's actually , not TC (which stands for Take Care. Too lazy to write the long form 😆). But you can call me . I prefer it that way. 😃

The marriage proposals BAHAHAA. I can pretty much imagine myself in that crowd too
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The car banter was adorable. 😳

I loved this entire para: "And for a moment...the world as I'd like. " It deserves a ⭐️ Marvelous perception, really.

"Me: Really can't princess, driving. App hamre hisay ki kah legiya.

Now, if she were a sweet girl, she would offer to feed me but she isn't."

And M eats it! Bahaha 🤣 Well, it is expected. I am totally like her as well. I do not care when someone eats or not but I have to eat and if you do not want to eat, great! More for me! 😆

Dupatta moment! OMG! I love it! One of my favorite romantic props! 😆

Over all, a great chapter! Loved it, the dress, too. Maybe I should buy one like that and possibly end up with a U... 😍 😆

TC.

Edited by tvlover92 - 11 years ago

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
keep writing dear even write after you write their marraige scenes later on, we want post marriage nok-jok more Tom and Jerry fights!

Haha! Will do, although I haven't thought that far ahead, it's obvious that Manveer NEEDS to get married: there is no other option!😉

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

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Originally posted by: pri01

Hi Reeha 🤗 I fall short of words to describe how much I enjoy reading the update. Just one word

While reading the update I was visualizing the scenes they are so beautifully described👏👏❤️❤️

Guess UV gifted M something from their childhood that they have shared. Hey I like the dress it's lovely

Plzzz update soon and thxs for the pm 🤗

Hi Priya! thank you very much!

I always look forward to your input! No worries about the PM, it's part of the job discription😆

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Saba Sheikh

@shona_123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

hey reeha, tht was a gr8 update thx 4 d pm ur styl of writin is amazin i felt like i ws wtchn it happeen...
waitn 4 more...

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sweetieangel

@sweetie_angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#226

hey sorry reeha was busy with college n then typed u the pm n had to rush out for some work so couldnt comment earlier

do i need to say it was a fab update

loved the way manyata grew worried for UV

aww he returned her tom back😍

loved the way u described manyata in her new look n UV's confused state

aww i so want this to happen in the serial

but nai the serial is stuck up with manyata running behind that idiot akash

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: tvlover92

LOL! My name's actually Lamia, not TC (which stands for Take Care. Too lazy to write the long form 😆). But you can call me LRC. I prefer it that way. 😃

The marriage proposals BAHAHAA. I can pretty much imagine myself in that crowd too

The car banter was adorable. 😳

...And M eats it! Bahaha 🤣 Well, it is expected. I am totally like her as well. I do not care when someone eats or not but I have to eat and if you do not want to eat, great! More for me! 😆

Dupatta moment! OMG! I love it! One of my favorite romantic props! 😆

Over all, a great chapter! Loved it, the dress, too. Maybe I should buy one like that and possibly end up with a U... 😍 😆

TC.

Baahhahaa! I obviously don't know my Abbrehviations very well!😆

Thank you Lamia, for your feedback! Always look forward to it!

I agree with the spontanious proposals! As I was writing it I thought:

PICK ME!!! PICK MEE!😆

to be honest, I really wanted her to feed him: but it's too soon, I don't think one should run before they learn how to stand up first🤔, so I thought her eating it was the more viable option 😛.

the Dupatta thing I LOVE! Seriously, KZK, Prerna and Anuraj made me FALL IN LOVE with it! And then Prem and Mukti's moments with the watcha and duppata! I seriously think every great couple needs one of those moments! I don't care if its overused😃

Thanks for the input LRC! 🤗

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Sarah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#228

rehaa ur awesome really ur a born writer!!! i cant describe in words how much i love ur work really u r miiind blowing and every time i see ur update it brings a smile on my face ur update makex ma day! n this time u were really quick..! i loveee u! 😳😳😳 plxx update ax soon ax possible😃

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Ziva01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: reeha...k
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Hi Priya! thank you very much!

I always look forward to your input! No worries about the PM, it's part of the job discription😆

Hey Reeha I have fallen in love with your FF ...kash you were the CVs tho show ka maaza kuch aur hi hota

Love ya 🤗

Edited by pri01 - 13 years ago