The Udayveer Chronicles| NEW UPDATE|PART 26 PAGE 137

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-Misek-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Reeha.. Firstly a round of appaluse for such a great part 👏 👏

Just luvd everything..😊 From UVs reactions to his emotions and Manyatas sudden feelings.. Its just sooo lovely.. And luvd how you've actually potrayed the media..😊 Thts just reality.. I simply adored it.. ❤️

Can't wait for another part.. This part actually made me jump out of bed, Open my lappy and comment it.. As i was reading frm the cell and found it taking ages to type the comment.. 😉

This part is simply great.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 ..You sure have got perfect writing skills😊 unlike me.. Can't even write during my exams.. But thts just me 😆..

Overall a great part..⭐️Keep up the gud wrk..👍🏼

Simmy

Edited by limbu.simmy - 13 years ago

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Preet

@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

How can you say there isn't excitement? You have Udhay and Manyata questioning what it is they are feeling, and you don't consider that exciting! I was so hooked! You are just so talented! 😊

Please, please, please, put part 10 up soon! I wonder if Udhay's gift will revive some of her childhood memories?

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meerakhan45

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Tollay crazy... ufff im gonna die soon.. heheh

Okay like i have said before... im tottaly crazy about the detail u write... it feels like im reading a book.. OMG i love it like alllways...
When i read this i smile, laugh and blush hehehhe
Ur stories have every "Masala" that a story needs...
Its beautiful how u desreib the feelings for each other.. I salut u fur this👍🏼

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Preet

@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

And the suit you pictured Manyata wearing is beautiful! It suits her perfectly, because it's simple and elegant yet still beautiful! Nice choice!

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Sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

thanks for update loved it!

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: shrarrti
How can you say there isn't excitement? You have Udhay and Manyata questioning what it is they are feeling, and you don't consider that exciting! I was so hooked! You are just so talented! 😊

Please, please, please, put part 10 up soon! I wonder if Udhay's gift will revive some of her childhood memories?

😆Well, it wasn't as err...romantic? as number 8. I'm glad you liked it Preet! I try to make it as animated as I can, but I end up having more discriptive and internal dialogue😳. Thank you for reading! I always look forward to your advice and feedback 🤗

Originally posted by: shrarrti
And the suit you pictured Manyata wearing is beautiful! It suits her perfectly, because it's simple and elegant yet still beautiful! Nice choice!

Thank you!!!! I loved this suite when I saw it! I was actually looking at some for myself to show my mom what I wanted; and I saw this and said "Well, I want this one, but wouldn't Manyata look awesome in it too"😉. Personally I'm a big fan of white clothing, and I'd love to see Manveer match it out for an episode after the makeover!😃

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-Misek-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: reeha...k

This is what I imagined in my mind!😊

This Salwaar Suit is just perfect for M.. Me luvin how you are actually putting your time and effort even to put the image of the dress tht you have imagined in the part...

Hugs 🤗 🤗

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: limbu.simmy
Reeha.. Firstly a round of appaluse for such a great part 👏 👏

Just luvd everything..😊 From UVs reactions to his emotions and Manyatas sudden feelings.. Its just sooo lovely.. And luvd how you've actually potrayed the media..😊 Thts just reality.. I simply adored it.. ❤️

Can't wait for another part.. This part actually made me jump out of bed, Open my lappy and comment it.. As i was reading frm the cell and found it taking ages to type the comment.. 😉

This part is simply great.. 👍🏼 👍🏼 ..You sure have got perfect writing skills😊 unlike me.. Can't even write during my exams.. But thts just me 😆..

Overall a great part..⭐️Keep up the gud wrk..👍🏼

Simmy

Thank you Simmy! 🤗 And yes, commenting from Cell phones is difficult: I can't format the colours and font the way I want!

First off, I appreciate it that you always take time to tell me what stuck out with you most: It helps me point on scenes for the next one! Trust me, this is a nice break for me too! ..

I should have been writing my psych and business notes...but I didnt feel like it: I felt like writing the next part instead!😳.

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180506

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Originally posted by: meerakhan45

Tollay crazy... ufff im gonna die soon.. heheh

Okay like i have said before... im tottaly crazy about the detail u write... it feels like im reading a book.. OMG i love it like alllways...
When i read this i smile, laugh and blush hehehhe
Ur stories have every "Masala" that a story needs...
Its beautiful how u desreib the feelings for each other.. I salut u fur this👍🏼

well, Meera this hug is for you then: 🤗

I'm glad you enjoy reading this; its only worth writing if someone other then myself and my sister enjoys it😆

Edited by reeha...k - 13 years ago