PRINCESS DIARY- MY FIRST FF chapter 11 on page 26 - Page 17

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😃That was simple AWESOME
looovedd it
Cant wait for the next part
Pleasee update sooon
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awww Shradha this was such a cute update.I had a stupid grin through out while reading this chapter.It did not disappear even in the J-Vijay bhai scene cause I do enjoy their dialogues in the show.
your dialogues were so good I could imagine them saying those lines👏
Coming onto UV and M-that was a sweet scene.UV knows how to make her do stuff na.I loved the way he made her take the tablet and that Diary and Cheesy wala dialogue and Vihay bhai's chotu brother ko kya ho gaya-that was my fav.great going.
Now What is Jbhai going to do?jaldi se update kar please and next time bada wala😃
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nice part...loved manveer chat...wondering whats going on in jays mind...update soon...thnx 4 the pm
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Lovely, thanks for the PM :D xxx
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Tht's a very sweet scene.. 😊

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H Shradha am sorry for coming late
Sweet update love it UV taking care of M it's too good
And usual J and VB and scenes are something but I love VB😳...tho J is busy with her evil plans to separate ManVeer
Thxs for the pm🤗 and update soon
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Chapter 11

Peshwae palace, 11 am Sunday

Akash was waiting at the entrance gate of palace , when one of the guard came towards him.

Guard: aap andhar jaa sakatein hai

A: thank you.

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Akash entered inside the lavish guest room of palace, where jainandeni was already waiting for him.

J: good morning, akash sir . I was waiting for you anxiously! Aapne humare hindi tuition class ki offer ko accept kar liya aur humari bahut badhi pareshani dur kardiye. Kya hai na meri hindi thodhi weak hai.

A: aap humein sirf akash bula sakatein hai. Waise aapki hindi itni buri nahi lagati hai.

J: lekin phir bhi exams mein humein acche marks nahi aatein hai!

A:ek swaal poonchu aapse ? agar aap bura nahi maanoge toh!

Jainandini noded yes in reply.

A: aap koi bhi experienced, well qualified tutor apne liye rakh sakate thi, phir bhi aapne mere jaisa mamuli teacher kyun rakha? Main toh sirf Liberian hoon aur BA tak padha hoon.

J: itna experience aur qualification humare liye kaafi hai Akashji. waise humari manyata jiji se humnae aapki bahut taarif sunni thi, isslye humnae socha ki aapko hi apna tutor bana doon! Akash was surprised to hear this.

A: kya moniya'.. I mean rajkumari manyata humare baarein baat karti thi aapse!

J: sirf baatein! Woh tumhe bhi bahut yaad karti hai akashji. aapki kavitayein neend mein bhi badbadati hai. Woh humse kuch nahi kehti hai, lekin woh aapko bahut pasand karti hai akashji. Aur humein pata hai aap bhi meri jiji se bahut pyaar karti hai. Usse manyatajji ke accidental waale din ,jab aap humare guards se andhar aane ke zidd kar rahe thae, tab humne aap ki saari baatein sunn liye thi. Aur yeh tution ka bahana karke hum aapko yahaan lae aaye, taaki aap aur manyatajiji phir se ek ho sakein.

A: aap sach keh rahe hai! Aap kitni aachi hai jainandini ji.

J: woh toh mein hoon.chalo aapko manyatajiji se milwati hoon.

A: lekin aapki class.

J: woh next time se shuru kardena ok! Aab chalo bhi! And she dragged akash in manyata's room.

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M: akash tum! Yahaan pe kaise? I am so happy to see you here! Baaki saab kaise hai? Chikki , soni , amma.

A: kitne swaal moniya'..err ' I mean manyata. Hum yahaan jainandini ke wajah se aaye hai.unhe ki wajah se hum tumse mil paayein. Kitni sweet hai woh.

M: akash tum mujhe moniya keh sakate ho, tum mere dost ho na! Aur woh jaighamdini tumhe kaise jaanti hai? Aur tumne usse Sweet kaha! Tum shyad Kissi aur ladki ke baarein mein kehna chaatein thae na?

A:nahi moniya hum toh'.

J: rehne do akashji, jiji ko mazak karne ki aadat hai. After all I m her younger sister. aap dono baatein karo hum aap dono ke liye servants se juice mangwate hai.

Vijay bhai was hiding behind one of the pillar in the corrioder, as soon as jainandini came out of the room he suddenly jumped in front of her.

V: jai bhai , aage kya plan hai?

J: thoda wait karo bro, abhi main character ki entry baaki hai!

Udayveer could hear manyata's giggles and also soft laughter of a man from manyata's room, while he was walking in the passage. "vijay and uncle are in the hall, then who could be inside the manyata's room?" he thought to himself. He opened the door and was stunned to see manyata engrossed in talk with unknown young man. He was staring at manyata intensely and also patting her hand in between. Uday started to fume in anger, How can anyone dare to touch his manyata like this, how anyone can have guts to stare at her like this! The sight of that man provoked his anger more and more, he wanted to punch him and give outlet to his emotion. But he is prince, he had to control himself. It took few sec to unruffled the storm of emotion in his mind. He looked at manyata , who too was staring at him in confusion.

M: uday andhar aane ke liye tumhe special invitationki jarurat hai! Tum darbaan kabse bangaye haan! She chuckled at him and then turned to akash , " akash yeh prince udayveer hai , tumne isse tv par toh dekha hoga aur uday yeh akash hai mera dost , aur aab jainandini ka hindi tutor bhi".

Uv: toh jainandini ke naye tutor aap hai! Bhai kuch toh baat hai tummein jo jainandini ne AS se zidd kar ke tumhe apna tutor banya. akash gave faint smile to him.manyata tuitions se yaad aaya , ki kal se tumhari rajkumari banne ki training shuru hogi,aur hum hoge aapke principle.

M: ji udayveer guruji , jaisa aap kahein. Lekin tumhe isske badlein mein , meri har choti badi baat maan ne padeinge!

Uv: manzoor hai.

Akash felt little uncomfortable with , udayveer's presence and uday was smart enough to notice that. He also could smell intrigue by jainandini. He turned towards akash " aarey main tumhe batana bhul gaya, jainandini tumse kuch important baatein discuss karna chaatein hai! Tab tak manyata ko lekar hum hospital ho aatein hain. Thodi dair mein tumse miltein hai , zara hum bhi toh dekhe ki aap ki class kaise hoti hai.

Akash stood from chair , " accha manyata hum jainandiniji ko miltae hai, tum jaldi se check up karwake aana." And he went outside the room .

frns i m extremely sorry for updating the chapter late so made vm in the form of compensation. plz forgive me🤗😳
concept is that of ddlj, where brij becomes amrish puri for manveer whn he has fight with uday's father.
Edited by Kesarmania - 13 years ago

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