PRINCESS DIARY- MY FIRST FF chapter 11 on page 26 - Page 16

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chapter was very nice do write m0re bt plzz fast :)
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OMGGG LMAOOO UV CRACKED ME UP WUTH HIS DIALOGUES LOVE YOU SOOO SOOO MUCH FOR SUCH AN AMAZING PEICE OF WRITING. I LOVED IT TO THE DAMN CORE YOU R SUCH AN AMAZING WRITER. LIKE REALLY THIS WAS THE BESTTT THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUCH AN UUUHHHMMMAAAZZZINNNGGG PIECE OF WRITING LOL
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Amazing
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please contniue soon😳
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Nice update👏👏...

Would love to see it onscreen as well... But I guess will have to satisfy with your FF..

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Shradha🤗sorry for the late comments yaar.thodi busy thi.I loved this chapter a lot.my fav bit was "mere size pe mat jaao"that was funny😆and Uday turned out to be the Knight in shining armour though our Manyata is no damsel in distress😃and yeh kya kiya Uday you compared her to Sultan,a horse in front of her.tho gussa tho aana hi tha na😆 and wonder of wonders Manyata blushed...that was so cute😳I am looking forward to the drama in the hospital which I feel will involve some colourful language and some fireworks😳
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aaahhh!!! I got a lot of catching up to do!! Shraddha!! Will do that !! right now I am writing my update!!
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Chapter 10

Uday helped Manyata to shift from wheelchair to bed and adjusted the pillows so she could sit comfortably leaning backward. He took tablets out of the box and extended his hand towards her,

Uv: "yeh tablets khalo, tumhe har 6 ghante mein yeh khani hai"

M:mujhe nahi khani, abhi -abhi toh hospital mein injection lekar aaye hoon. First of all, I hate injection. Lekin tumne mujhe pakad kar rakha aur uss nurse se zabardasti injection lagvaya! Main toh malam aur tablets se hi thik ho jaati.

Uv: gussa mat ho princess, injection tumhe lag raha tha aur dard mujhe ho raha tha.

M: tum kya kisse dairy mein paida hua tha? Main isselye poonch rahi hoon kyun ki, I m really impressed by your new cheesy dialogues. She said in very sarcastic tone,

Uv: main sach keh raha hoon, dekho na mere dono hathon pe tumne 5-5 injection jo lagaye uss time, apne sharp nails se! dard nahi hota , toh kya gudgudi hoti? Seriously , your nails pierced out the flesh from my hands. Just look at my hands princes.

M:toh iss mein meri kya galati hai? Tumhe dekhte dekhte uss vedi nurse ne mujhe zorse injection lagaya.

Uv: omg! I never knew that you are so possessive about me! Waise itna insecure hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai, ek saath dus injection lagane ka talent sirf tum mein hai princess.

Manyata frowned at uday, who was standing at the edge of bed chuckling to himself.

M:oh really, aur kaunsi khubiyan hai mujh mein?

Uv: tumhari awaz bahut acchi hai! Itne acchi ki gaaliyan bhi sunne mein mithi lagathi hai.

M: accha, aur ?

Uv: aur tumhari billi jaise ankhein, kitni pyaari hai! Jab bhi unhe dekhata hoon, toh unnh mein mera hi chera nazar aata hai.

M: what a joke! She pouted her lips and her eyes were wide opened like two sparkling stars.

Uv: lekin tumhari nose... thodi jyada lambi nahi hai?

M: what nonsense! She touched her nose with both hands. Meri naak bilkul thik hai, lekin tumhar nazar kamzor hogayi hai.

Uday bent down near her face and lightly clipped her nose. " lambi aur badi bhi hai". Manyata opened her mouth to yell at him but before she could utter anything; he quickly put the tablet inside her mouth.

M: yuck! kitni kadvi hai.

Uv: aab jaldi se yeh kesar-badam milk peelo, warna tablet gale mein attak jayage . isse peenae se muh ki kadvaahat kam hojayage.

Manyata drank the milk reluctantly, she always hated milk. But at that moment when her tongue had become bitter due to medicine, it tasted like . favorite cold drink to her.

Uv: very good, hum AS se milkar aatein hai.

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Vijay looked at jai, she was smiling to herself while driving.

V: jai bhai, itnae khubsurat chehrae pe itni evil smile! Baat kya hai? Hume toh batao!

J: ek baar chawl mein toh pahuchane do, sab pata chaljayega!

V: hum chawl ja rahe hai! Nahi! Don't tell me , tum manyata ke chawl mein shift hona chati ho! Omg. Mere chotu brother ko kya hogaya? Kanhi who pagal toh nahi hua!

J: stop that nautanki vijay bhai. Aisa kuch nahi hai bas humein naya mohra mil gaya hai, uday ko manyata se dur karne ke liye.

V: . yeh uday bhi na humesha uss jungle queen ke aas paas mandrata rehata hai! Isse plan mein hum tumhare saath hai! Tume tumhara sacha pyaar jaroor milega jai bhai.Vijay bhav!

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Edited by Kesarmania - 13 years ago
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