OS: Adjustments and Engagement [Udayveer-Manyata] - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW..WOW..WOW..WOW..This was sooo good!very well written :) Great piece of work :) :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOW!!! loved the OS so much... it was really really Awesome fantastic...



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Yuks.! that's ur name SERIOUSLY *shrugs*

Awsum OS had me glues.! Please write some more. Check our mty first fanfoc on ManVeer "THE GIRL BEHIND THE THRONE"

Spread the love

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Kiara!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os...good job...plz do write more
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Loved it totally. It was very very interesting. I loved the presentation of present day and flashback scenes.

Was so engrossed in reading and then that end definitely left me begging for more.😛

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great OS...loved ur style of writing! Loved how u detailed Moniya's emotions; Hope CVs take some ideas from this piece.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: storybooksgd

Love it! Love it! Love it! I mean, really dude, is there even a POSSIBILITY of hating a MaanVeer OS on a weekend? No! No! No!!


I liked the slightly cruel behavior Uday showed to Aakash, I do believe that he would react in a similar way when Aakash stops being an amusement and starts becoming a nuisance.

Interesting back story, the thought that the Bua and Murari could be in love NEVER crossed my mind! But I like this possibility, it means Murari isn't evil and I would like that to happen in the show too.

The ending...what can I say? It completed the OS but also left the reader (a.k.a me!😆 ) wanting more. Sort of like what Maanyata was feeling.



I have to agree with you. MaanVeer OneShots on the weekend can never be bad.
It helps feed the obsession when we cant see the real thing on screen.

I hope that someway, somehow, Udayveer manages to oust Aaskash from the picture. And considering his ambitious plans, he might just be able to do so.

I dont think Murari could be evil. He cares for Muniya so much. Such a loving father can't be so evil. Im sure there has to be some explanation

Thanks so much! Im very glad that you liked this.

Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

that was amazing Yuks keep it up!👍🏼



Thank you so much! Im very glad you thought so

Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: AmishiE

wauh... it was amazing 👏...please write more OS❤️



Thank you😊

Manyata-Udayveer are so inspring, Im sure there will be more in the future

Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!

PLZ DO CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME !!!



I wont be continuing this. This was the end.
Thanks so much for liking though. Im very touched

Yuks

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