OS: Adjustments and Engagement [Udayveer-Manyata]

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: tanya.dsouza
that was awesome.. i loved it..!

Thank you! Im so glad you did.

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
so this is where you disappeared to from the Saathiya forum? (no I didn't stalk you. *cough*cough*)

brilliant OS. not watching the show yet but my cousin follows it and fills me in. if you're going to be writing on it, I'll definitely be visiting the forum more often!

Oh, my own personal stalker. How do you manage to find me?

I hope you start watching the show because Yuvraj Udayveer is simply sinful.

[I also wrote a two-shot for ehmmbh - just to help you stalk further😉]

Thanks for the review love!

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: minizz
I was waiting for the next installment😭the first one was really good.enjoyed reading it😊

This is an OS, or a One-Shot. Meaning that the story is just one chapter long.
Sorry to disapoint you but I wont be continuing

Im so glad that you have liked it

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: -Ridzzi-
Yuks 🤗
Its an Awesome OS.. Best OS i have read on any couple.. Writing Skills are just fab darling.. and yes, I have read a few Parts of ur FF, So I actually should have no complain.

Love it,
Love u.. 😳

Thanks Riddz. You flatter me too much.
Thanks for liking this

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: Brklyn_gal
Wow awesum
U did such an awesum job
I loved it
I read it 3 times mostly cz of udays attitude

Thanks so much! Im so glad you enjoyed it

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: gohem123
Amazing OS Yuks...I liked the way you portrayed the characters without losing any essence...

Good writing as always...Do write more...

Thanks so much. I am so glad you liked it

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â™ªáƒ¦â™¥Jazzy..!â™ªáƒ¦â™¥

@thejazzgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

nice OS.. amazing one.. :)

wanna read more from u :)

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lamz325

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

oh my gawsh! i just loved it! i love how uday makes her feel! do you think you could write a sequel to your os! it would be rlly cool if you just jumped to the day of their wedding and wedding night! :D