Chasing Love ~ A Jaidev-Jaya SS | Chp.8 Pg.20 (June 5) - Page 2

Originally posted by: angel6599

Nice story👏. At last Jaya spoke up would love to see something like this in the show. It will be nice if you come up with a flashback of their marriage or both of them working as a team help a adarsh out n thereby at least becoming friends. If u have already planned something then go with it.continue soon I am eager to read ur take.

Thank you. :) I think Jaya's patience will eventually break, but the question is - what will happen after that? I find Jaya and Jaidev to be an intriguing pair and just couldn't help writing about them. I do intend to give a flashback into the circumstances of their marriage and why Jaidev hates her so. Whether they will work together to unite SwaDarsh, I can't comment on it as of now. 😉

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Great story and very well written. Would love to read further

Originally posted by: JazzyM

True a nice start...

Loved Jaidev's feeling toward Ardash but the way you described the last part (conversation) between Jaidev and Jaya...superb/

Because of the way he taunts her always, and she takes it all in, I have made up this theory in my head that he had warned her about his displeasure and dislike with this wedding, may be even asked her to refuse and back-off because he was incapable of doing so... but is now angry with her because she went ahead with the wedding anyway. This is the only scenario that explains their present behavior to me.

Originally posted by: xxSomeonesLuvxx

Aww, Jaidev is concerned about Adarsh ❤️

This is so different from any of the stories on this forum.

Wonderful! Hats off to you! 👏

Thank you for the pm.

Do pm me again if you write any story.

Or just if you want to talk. 😃

Tani.

This is great! Loving it. Please keep writing. I really like this couple and would like to read your take on them.

I really loved the story. I found there story interesting from the start. It's awesome that you are writing about them. Already sent you a request so pm me.

Liking it. Haven't made up my mind about Jaidev in the serial but maybe you can change my view.

Originally posted by: Soapoperasrfun

Because of the way he taunts her always, and she takes it all in, I have made up this theory in my head that he had warned her about his displeasure and dislike with this wedding, may be even asked her to refuse and back-off because he was incapable of doing so... but is now angry with her because she went ahead with the wedding anyway. This is the only scenario that explains their present behavior to me.

Great story... It will be very nice to see them mend their ways...

I am no writer, but I would also not mind reading a story where Simi has a little bit more matter in her head... anyone want to write about her? 😆

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

This is great! Loving it. Please keep writing. I really like this couple and would like to read your take on them.