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I'm done with funny part- included apt songs/ dialogues 😉😆
Avi- go ahead girl, edit this! 😎
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I don't we use emoticons in the thread..😕

Originally posted by: shayranahui.

I'm done with funny part- included apt songs/ dialogues 😉😆
Avi- go ahead girl, edit this! 😎
*Tags we need in red.
Include: Crazy Creatives- Birthdays Subteam

Originally posted by: FrozenSnow

Believe in the Well!

It was, undeniably, a cold and chilly on the mountain region. The sun had already set on the horizon and with each passing minute it was getting darker. Despite the freezing weather the location was essentially the definition of beautiful.

Reet: Come on girls, what would Milkha say!

Avani: I can't move any faster. My legs are tired and I'm dying of exhaustion!

*Iss Punjabi de battery discharge hoge ha! *

Amy: OK how about we find a place to camp at for the night?

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After a short time of searching the girls found a perfectly comfortable place to camp for night. The trio decided to split up their work. While Reet decided to stay and put up the tent Amy and Avani decided to bring some wooden logs from the forest for the camp fire itself.

*e well layii duniyaa nu chadeyaa, ve well lyi Amy dur kari *

After finding some logs the girls were heading back, only to spot a mysterious looking well a little further away.

Amy: Don't go any near to it. It's already dark. Just don't go there.

*ve chandri raat muk gayi *

Avani: Pshh. I doubt it'll be of any trouble.

*ki akahaan main tenu kudiye samjh na aawe mainu kudiye*

Avani cautiously, yet curiously, approached the well- the cold and dark just foreshadowed a fascinating outcome. Yet her joy knew no bounds after reading something on the board attached to the well.

Your presence here is flattering, your arrival fascinating

Yet you remain unaware, so oblivious to this well's power

So dear visitor, I take away your confusion

All I can say is dream of a dream...

and watch it occur

Avani: OH MY GOD! I get this...it's a wishing well! We dream a wish and it happens!

*kehndi main taan raati baithi chete bhangda payeyaa*

Before Amy could say anything, Avani had caught her hand and was moving fast to go tell Reet as well- they had found a wishing well, talk about exciting! All traces of exhaustion had vanished after seeing the well.

*saadi Chanel baby kehndi hor ghumna, oh tod tad ke border ohne jungle ghumna*

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At the camp site, Avani came shouting holding Amy's hands, due to all this Amy lost her balance and BANG! She collided with Reet.

Reet: Avani have you lost it, all my efforts are gone in vain. Oh Amy are you okay.

*Jehdi bomb sut maardugi baliye, eh Avi hai Laden taan nahi 😳*

Avani: Reet leave it all aside. I HAVE BIG NEWS! We've found a wishing well!

*Marjaani paundi bhangdaa!!!*

Reet: I don't believe in such things Avani. These wishing wells, fairy tales etc... its all fiction.

Amy: Reet, don't disappoint her. Let's give it a try. But first let's relax and have some food. Then we'll move forward.

*Surya ast, Punjabi mast 😎*

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That Escalated Quickly...

After having a glorious meal the girls still had butterflies in their stomach, yet Reet still possessed doubt that remained quite strong.

Reet: So this is the spot where your dreams become reality hey? I can totally see the magic *rolls eyes*

*Oh bari barsi khaten geya si khat ke liyanda shehna *

Amy: Let's give it a try Reet! Now who wants to try out first.

*mainu dar taan ohdon da lag reha si, jad vekheya pehli vaar ainu.*

Avani:I will go first- my wishes are very important!

*Disco Singh tut paina mela lut laina 🥳*

Reet: I will go at last, let Amy have the second chance. This is going to lead nowhere anyway...

Avani marched towards the well- she was going to make the most important thing in the world happen.

Avani: Dear Wishing Well. From the bottom of my heart, all I really do want, is endless rows and closets of Chanel, Guicci and Dior. Maybe even some Stella Mccartney please!

Despite the rolling eyes of the girls they listened and watched- And voila!! Her wish came true.In front of them a key was made, one that gave Avani the location to all her new closets filled with designer everything.

*Chanel products hove palle taan hai teri balle balle *

Yet Reet was fighting of some flies and branchers, therefor missing the occurrence and not believing Avani. Now it was Amy's turn.

Amy: May I get the worlds most precious diamond of the world.

And the same thing happened. A beautiful, shining diamond was placed in front of Amy, yet Reet still believed the happening to be a joke by the girls- oh how wrong she was!

*goreyaan pairan de vich chandi diyaan jhanjaraan*

Finally Reet's turn came and since she doesn't believe she hastily and of course sarcastically made a laughable wish.

Reet: I want to become a Lion. The Queen of the Jungle

*Sheraan di kaum Punjabi 😎*

Amy and Avani could not believe the wish Reet asked for yet within a blink of their eye Reet had became a fierce lion, ready to pounce upon anyone.

Amy: OH My God! What do we do!

Avani: I cannot be murdered by my friend! Especially not now- I just got a closet of designer- Amy!

Meanwhile Reet ran in the forest. And just like a lion she roared at the top of her voice which shook the whole forest.

*aisa na mileya sheesha hun tak saanu 😭*

As you can see...that escalated quickly...

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NEXT POST

A Dream or Nightmare?

Avani: Amy wake up!! Look what Reet is murmuring in sleep.

Amy: Let's wake her up. It's near 12:00 am. Do you have the cake ready?

Avani: Yes, but due to our trek it's a little messed up. Just wait a bit; I will make some tweaks in it.

Amy: We don't have much time. Light up the candles, while I go and wake up that lion.

Amy and Avani: Reet wake up!! Wake up!! Wake up lion

Reet: Oh God!! Where I am? I was a lion after making wish. Avni didn't you go that wishing well.

Avani: WHAT?! A wishing well- when, where how WHAT! I need some Chanel, maybe the well could get some for me!

Amy: Reet what are you talking about?

Reet: I don't even know anymore...I think I had a dream. Or was it a nightmare?

Amy: Well whatever it was enough of our talking, Reet do you remember what is today.

Reet: Uhhh...

*excitedly both girls look at each other*

HAPPY BIRTHDAY REET!

Happy Birthday Reet Tag!

CREDITS

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OH MY GOD. That Punjabi f**ked my over. Like bad. W*F- IM THE WORST EXAMPLE OF A PUNJABI OUT THERE but Idk how I edited a language I don't even know and yeh it was baddd.

But I kind of set it out differently to make it more clear and after the dream sequence thought is was better to stick with mostly English :P

I have added the required graphics- someone PM the graphicer :P Have we got a CC guys?

PS- The write up was awesome! Espcially for a first time- like seriously hun, hats off. Only thing- when you write dailogues you write the name and the add a ':' and then write the dailogue. don't add a '-' as well cause its a pain in the already tired ass to edit. The write up was damn good though- like well done <3

What graphics you need & tell me color codes & other specification soon!

No one has pmed me...probably pmed to Baki 😕 Baki is inactive!

Was going to send you, Deba. Got busy with exam preps. :P Anyways, you're here now! 😃

Originally posted by: shayranahui.

Was going to send you, Deba. Got busy with exam preps. :P Anyways, you're here now! 😃

Its okay Amanat...no problem at all...i m trying to do it within tomorrow as tomorrow is the due date 😛