Medha's Story Corner - The Child's Secret Last Part - Page 16

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@RatiTheAngel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

cannot wait plzzz we want part2

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@.KupKakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ratitheangel
cannot wait plzzz we want part2

sure dear... will write soon... :)

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Promo sounds interesting!

Didn't read the part because i don't like to read the story in parts but will definitely read this story once it gets complete. 😃

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shehneer khan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome story medha👏

waiting for the second part😛

jaldi se likho aur post karo😊

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rishabgosavi

@rishabgosavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome promo n 1st part chutki plzz give next part

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Wow Medha, this was great. Well-written and crystal-clear narration; you're really talented! The story looks very interesting. Looking forward to the second part. Best wishes! 😃

Edited by DemonStar - 12 years ago

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@.KupKakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

thx a lot guys for reading my story and commenting...😃

@snehal di - ok no problem... but do read it... 😊

@neer di - thx... :) i'll write the next part soon

@rishab bro - thx... will write soon

@ravi bro - aww bro... you've got me blushing! that was a frightful lot of praise for my modest amateur attempts... :) thanks a lot!

@chand_hp - thanks! will write soon...😃

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Gamayun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

It looks very interesting Medha. Do continue soon! 😃

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

MEDHA Baccha, First of all Welcome of Our World...😉😆

As Being a Story Writer, U really Started Ur Plot with a Good Pace...👏👏

the Nice Narration, Good Discussion and Investigation too...👏

Somehow try to add some More Clearity like the Area where PURVI look at Girl, if the area was Sunsaan, why PURVI take that Lane in Late Night, She has a Car so why She did not move behind Girl either there was a Jungle or anything else...😕

Not Be Directed with Victims family, Little Soft with them...😉

I Like the Flair in Ur Story...👏

Hope U continue it with Great pace...👍🏼

Thank you so much Baccha...🤗