Medha's Story Corner - The Child's Secret Last Part - Page 16 - Page 2

Good promo @medha...best of luck for ur story...👍🏼

promo is very is very interesting medha...!!!

yep will b bck wid my story in 1-2 days tym...

Please continue Medha😃

Hey guys,

In the dead of the night, a young girl walked down a dark road. She had a parcel, wrapped in brown paper in her hand. She held it tight to her chest. She seemed scared and she quickened her pace. Just then, Purvi drove down in her car, on her way home from the Bureau. She saw the young girl and was surprised. She got off the car and went near the girl.

"Beta, aap itni raat ko is sadak par kya kar rahe ho? Mae aapko kahi chhod du?"

The girl just stared blankly at Purvi for a few seconds. Then she turned and ran down the road. Purvi started after her but the girl disappeared into the darkness...

The next day Purvi arrived in the Bureau after a night of unrest. She still was lost in thoughts.

"Purvi, tum theek to ho? File khol ke baithi ho lekin tumhara dhyaan to kahi aur hai!"ACP broke in.

"Kuch nahi, sir. Voh mae bas kuch nahi..." Purvi replied hurriedly.

"Purvi, theek se batao. Kya baat hai?" ACP commanded.

Purvi knew when she was beaten and related the entire incident the previous night.

"Raat ko ek akeli bacchi parcel pakde hue... Vo tum se bhaag jaati hai... Kuch to baat hai!" ACP said with a definitive air.

"Zarur Purvi ne use daraya hoga," Pankaj broke in.

ACP shrunk him with glance. "Purvi, tumhe kuch pata hai us parcel me kyat ha?" he continued.

"Nahi sir... Lekin sir ek baat to dhyaan me aayi. Us parcel me se kuch ajeeb si bu aa rhi thi. Gun powder jaisa..." she said thoughtfully.

"Bacchi ke paas gunpowder ka packet! Zarur kuch gadbad hai. Kahi vo ladki kisi terrorist ke liye kaam to nahi kar rahi!" the ACP exclaimed.

"Sir, ek aur baat. Uski haalat bahut bari thi. Uske kapde maile the aur uske baal bhi kange nahi the. Aise lag raha tha jaise voh kuch dino se sadak par bhatak rahi hai," Purvi said.

"Accha, to ek kaam karo. Jaldi se pata karo ke pichle 1-2 hafte se kitni 9-10 saal ki umar ki ladkiya gayab hui hai," he directed Purvi.

A little while later, Purvi returned with the details. Only 3 girls of that age had disappeared in the last fortnight.

"To un sab ladkiyon ke photograph le lo aur dekho ki koi match karta hai ya nahi." Abhijeet told her.

"Sir, mae abhi check karke aa rahi hu. Unme se ek ladki ki shakal kaafi milti julti hai us ladki se." Purvi told him.

"Accha, to chalo uske ghar pe. Uske maa-baap se milke dekhte hai," Abhijeet said.

At the child's house, they met the girl's parents.

"Lekin Asha to ghar 3 din pehle hi laut gayi hai! Aur hamne police ko notify bhi to kiya hai. Kya bol rahe ho aap?" the mother said.

"Accha to bulao Asha ko," Abhijeet requested.

The young girl came out.

"Ha sir, ye to vahi ladki hai!" Purvi said, " Ise hi maine sadak par kal raat dekha tha."

The girl's parents were astounded.

"Lekin ma'am, ye kaise mumkin hai? Kal raat ko ham teen ek party me gaye the. Asha bilkul mere bagal me khadi thi. Maine use door jane hi nahi diya. Aapko zarur koi galat faimi hui hai," the girl's father insisited.

"Nahi, sir. Mujhe pura yakeen hai ki vo yahi ladki thi. Uske baal, uski ankhein, sab kuch... Vaha itna bhi andhera nahi tha. Aur agar aapko fir bhi yakeen nahi hota to vo sketch to isi ka hai na." Purvi protested.

The girl's mother requested for the sketch. Nikhil brought it from the car and gave it to her. They were totally astounded.

"Ye.. ye... ye... to Asha ka hi sketch hai. Ye namumkin hai. Ye...ye...ye kya ho raha hai?" they stammered.

"Dekhiye aap shant ho jaiye. Aap bas yeh bataiye ki aap kisi ladki ko jante hai jo bilkul aapki Lata jaisi ho dekhne mein?" Abhijeet asked.

"Kahi... kahi... ye hamari Divya to nahi!" the mother exclaimed.

"Parineeta, chup ho jao! Divya mar chuki hai ek saal pehle. Tum pagalo wali baatein mat karo," her husband reprimanded.

"Divya? Kaun divya? Aap please hame sab kuch bataiye. Hame case solve karne mein har choti si detail madad karti hai," Abhijeet said.

"Sir, Divya hamari Asha ki judwaa behen thi!" the father said.

"Judwaa behen!" Purvi exclaimed.

"Haa, lekin uski maut ek saal pehle fever ke vajah se hui. Sirf das saal kit hi hamari beti... " the mother broke down.

"Hame bahut afsos hai. Kya aap thoda aur bata sakte hai uske bare mein?" Nikhil requested.

"Sir, ek hi baat. Divya ki laash hame kabhi nahi mili. Hospital walon ne kaha ke voh uski body kuch formalities ke karan nahi de sakte," the father said.

"Kya? Aapko laash nahi mili! Yeh bataiye ke aapne use kis hospital me admit kiya tha aur konsa doctor uska treatment kar raha tha,"Purvi requested.

They took all the hospital papers, thanked the couple and left.

Yo pc kya baat just read ur first part
Do mention to be continued ;)
Mein itni aachi writer nahi ki critical comments de sakun but i must say good attempt
Intresting concept with a FWish touch ;). The part of the hospital not giving divya's body due to certain formalities is a bit unapropriate u could have mentioned some other reason but yes it is possible that maybe because divyas family is uneducated they did not realise maybe that they should have asked for the body n all.
But i must say ur story had me hooked and was intresting. U should have written a bit more. I know u have a busy schedule so its ok u can gave this as introduction
Overall its a gud attempt and the way ypu write is good.
Pardon me for not being able to say much will do once d story is completed.
Complete fast eagerly waiting ;)

thanks pc... :)

Originally posted by: medha99

thanks pc... :)

n no u r a great writer... :)

n I included d hospital not giving divya's body because I had read in anewspaper that a hospital had done so with some poor people.

ya I know it could have been a bit longer... but kya hai na I wanted to push out d first part as soon as possible so posted this much.

n m so glad u enjoyed reading it.

ya I hope to post the next part tomorrow... 😃

Arre nai nai mein kahan!
Oh i c. Intresting do mention it
Arre araam se post kar jald baazi mein gadbaad ho jaati hai always

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

Arre nai nai mein kahan!
Oh i c. Intresting do mention it
Arre araam se post kar jald baazi mein gadbaad ho jaati hai always