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Benzaiten

@Minionite

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 11 years ago

#611

Will read tomorrow on the bus. 😉

And hopefully this time you aren't fooling us. 😛

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Forfriend

@Forfriend

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Posted: 11 years ago

#612

Ohhh BH You made me cry with this... Daya sir ki woh halath... uff I can't even imagine...

I am just crying from start till end when Daya hit Abhijeet and saying that Battamiji ke dialog... Most touchi part is The letter wrote by Daya when he is feeling hungry...

The way he shown his anger on Abhijeet uff so much realistic... Thanks you did not make all things goddi goodi just after they meat in that Shaitan Choiki...

But you made me smile with the soo thing words of abhijeet... when he is handling his younger brother not a cop... Abhi ganda baccha hai... uff what a sweet dialog...

I found ACP sir totally different... the way I always imagine him...

the last scene in ACP sir's cabin... wow... jaan dal di aane iss story me BH...

Its dilse likhi story dil ko chu gayi...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#613

Awesome ending. So emotional. Daya sir ki wo halat dekh kar to rona agya tha 😔 par jais Abhi sir ne unko handle ki wo kafi touchy tha. Bt most beautiful scene which i lovd d most ws last scene. ACP sir taking care of his son. CID team is really a family, onscreen n offsceen n in our imagination, evrywhr.

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#614

This time only thank you? No comments?

Anyways will read this at night before sleeping 😃

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#615

So, finally the story is complete, and finally I get the time to read all the chapters and to review now.

GD nd neeme, sorry for being so late, but I was too busy in past few days.

about the story, your combined works always amaze me. very nice plot, very well-written.👏👏 Daya sir making plans, his behaviour towards his team-members, especially ACP sir and Abhijeet sir, was shocking, but the incident in Juhu Chawk, makes me horrified. and the emotional trauma of CID team brings tears in my eyes.😭 but ultimately things are clearly explained, and I was relieved.😃

the second last chapter was like some emotional attyachar! thinking Daya sir in such state is heart-breaking. and demoting a senior inspector at constable's rank, yeh kuch zyada ho gaya!😆 but as a fictional work, chalta hai!😊

for the last one, words are not enough, so... 🤗🤗 nd

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Benzaiten

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 11 years ago

#616

Uff so emotional!!! Why is it that I always end up reading the emotional stories on the bus?!! 😆

God everything about this last chapter was so emotional that I don't know what to say! 😭

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pinky118

@pinky118

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#617

mein ne prh li...nice one...detail reveiw baad mein do gi 😉

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Soni.

@Soni.

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#618

GD and Neeme ab mein chapter 5 and 6 review karugee. After reading i think that GD and Neeme you both are amazing seriously...aap ki har writing itni kamal hai ke poocha mat. I simply love the way u showed each and every move of Daya and his gang it is just amazing i was imagining while reading it i loved this chapter to core of my heart. itne sare questions ka aik jhatke main answer mil gaye. It was really nice to see Daya in this new touch. And seeing him investigate and enjoying everything in it was really really soothing. Though Daya shooting Abhijeet seemed really shocking but till then the story had reached the limits of infinity and I said loudly This is a plan.. and so it was...6th part mein dhadkana ruk gaye par kaye. Mera dil mein bhi yahi sawal hai ab kya hoga. My poor Daya got hurt bichare ko kitani mar padi hai. Ye galat baat hai GD and Neeme and Abhijeet firse angry young man again. Loved how he shouted out his frustration. Abhijeet sir with fiery attitude was just simpy great to imagine all the events. I could visualize it perfectly. The way the whole plan was brought up too amazing. Abhi & ACP sir's emotions, anger, hurt... All portrayed very beautifully... I loved each and everything Neeme n GD Hats off. You girls have created super awesome story with super fantastic plot this time!! You both are stars!!!! Will read the last 2 parts soon

Edited by Soni. - 11 years ago

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misha.as

@misha.as

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#619

Finally read 1st and 2nd parts GD And Neeme di...😊
U both r wonderful writter...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
Super and lovely starting.⭐️ 👏
The suspense was mindblowing.⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
What wrong with Daya sir. He changed.😲 😲 OMG, I am
shocked at Daya sir's behaviour
towards Abhi sir,😲 Acp sir😲 and teammates, 😲 killing a girl...😲 😲
U both give me Electric Shock 😆 😆
👏 👏 👏
will read the next part soon... 😃