Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 60

feeling like seating in a roller coaster 😉

First of all a big Thank you to you Bhaijaan for continuing this... I didn't expected seeing you continuing with this but all is well if the end's well... so...😊😊
Now coming to the story.
The whole plan was superbly described as well as greatly penned down. I don't know how to appreciate your writing skills Bhaijaan but you have this power of making me make every expression while reading your work.
The whole plan of Bhai was really good you made everything clear to your level best.. I was expecting the suspention order for Bhai and here it is... but this time it's more worse.
I really liked Rahul in this whole story and aww I liked him even more in this part... I just loved that line he said...!!
Liked how Bhai tried his best to clear his position but yeah Badey Bhai is right on his own place... Loved the whole process you described of Bhai's departure from hospital and then from home. Still Badey Bhai packed his bags... awww.. he truly loves him...
I just wanna kill DCP..!! how dare he... hmpf... that all was really really heart tearing to read.
I really laughed loudly after reading how everyone was ready to give resignations... hehehe... I was like😲 what's going on... and then I read that part again and was 🤣
And the incidents happened in Shaitan Choki... (Waise boch naam bada chaat kr rakkha h...😆)... I seriously was unable to read that... that was so saddening... and OML... lalchi buddha ni to, battameez... jootey shirt sb le li.. gosh.. even I felt embarassed after reading that Bhai had to take his shirt off... phir bhai kya haal hua hoga.. hena..
I really loved Misha and her little efforts... aww how she made Badey Bhai have his dinner.. so cute... Basically I loved the care and concern of everyone in the team to make Badey Bhai feel comfortable and to make sure that he's taking his good care.
Oho... Chotey...!! he's so cute.. loved his character too... chalen atleast Bhai got someone with whom he can talk and someone who can talk with him respectfully.
Thank you for this great and super long part Bhaijaan..
Thanks to you too Neeme di.😊
Can't wait for the next part.
God bless you..😊

wonderful chapter
beautifully written, dhamakedaar plot..
zordaar todtaad cheedphaad katam kaat story
🤗👏
wah kya baat h tum dono ka jawab nhi
yaar i m so sorry mai detaild review nhi de parhi cz fursat hi nhi mil rhi
bt i cn say 1 thng
"beta Qamat teri toh shamat h
tu janta nhi tu ne kisse pnga liya h"
ek jhapad padega na toh muhn se piyano bjne lagega😉

Hey bhagwaan!!





Aur ye konsi shart manvayi abhijeet ne sabke resignation ki dhamki de ke? Muze laga tha saja me kuch choot milegi or smthing like dat. Hope u clear this in next update.

Ye part mujhe BOHOT ZYADA PASAND aaya 👍🏼 Daya sir ke emotions aur Abhijeet sir ka concern aur ghusa kamal ka tha👏 lekin wo dcp aur wo inspector😡 man ker raha tha k dcp ke saath uss inspector ka bhi upar ka ticket katwa doon And as always Daya sir ka bacche ke liye concern bohot acha tha ❤️⭐️ yani k kamal dhamal chapter tha😃👍🏼

Superb...thumbs up yaar👍🏼

Will read after exam 👍🏼. Hope by the time everything will be perfectly fine 😉 😈.

DADA APKA JWAB NAHI...

Originally posted by: Forfriend

So here is my review showing all my emotion while reading

DCP - Mardalo usse - 😡

The whole resignation scene - Inspired By FW - 🤣

Daya and ACP convo - 😭😭

Doctors last line- Acha hua me doctor bana - 😆

Abhijeet and Daya convo and Daya left for SAZA 🤗🤗🤗 - aap ke liye nahi hai TRIO ke liye hai...

Whole Instances in Shaitan Chouki and that Goan... 😡 😔😲

Misha and Chotay... 😳

and For last Laugh - 🤗-- haan haan aape liye hai yeh BH...

ab detail comment toh story puri hone to bad hi milegi...

acha haan Bhul gayi one for Rahul also 🤗

Originally posted by: ..Candy..

Awww...
Bechare mere Daya sir..
Iss DCP ko toh sacchi marne ki iccha hoti hay..😡
but kaise maaru..Daya sir ki tarah masoom jo hu😉😆
N wo Inspector QAMAT..Inspector hay ya chor??
Haye mere Daya sir ki T-shirt n Shoes...
Ek ek ka Hisab chukta krna hoga usey😡😉

Rahul's care,Abhi's atyachar😉,that resignatn scene,Chotey,Misha dear...Lovved evrything...❤️

I m waiting more deliberatly fr nxt part...
Keep coming..
Take care..!!!!
Lovvve ya..(Dnt wry,no bone breaking dis tym😉)