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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: duoa

feeling like seating in a roller coaster 😉

itne sare twist and turns uff maar dalaa😭😭
itna bara india aur koi gaon nahi mila bechare daya sir k liye siwae dcp 😡 k goan k
sari team ne hi taqreebaa resignation type kar k rakha hua hai😲
Acp sir , Abhijeet sir , Rahul ,whole cid team , Misha🤗

GD and Neemee di hats off to both of u just amazing 👏👏👏
lots of love for u😛




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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

First of all a big Thank you to you Bhaijaan for continuing this... I didn't expected seeing you continuing with this but all is well if the end's well... so...😊😊
Now coming to the story.
The whole plan was superbly described as well as greatly penned down. I don't know how to appreciate your writing skills Bhaijaan but you have this power of making me make every expression while reading your work.
The whole plan of Bhai was really good you made everything clear to your level best.. I was expecting the suspention order for Bhai and here it is... but this time it's more worse.
I really liked Rahul in this whole story and aww I liked him even more in this part... I just loved that line he said...!!
Liked how Bhai tried his best to clear his position but yeah Badey Bhai is right on his own place... Loved the whole process you described of Bhai's departure from hospital and then from home. Still Badey Bhai packed his bags... awww.. he truly loves him...
I just wanna kill DCP..!! how dare he... hmpf... that all was really really heart tearing to read.
I really laughed loudly after reading how everyone was ready to give resignations... hehehe... I was like😲 what's going on... and then I read that part again and was 🤣
And the incidents happened in Shaitan Choki... (Waise boch naam bada chaat kr rakkha h...😆)... I seriously was unable to read that... that was so saddening... and OML... lalchi buddha ni to, battameez... jootey shirt sb le li.. gosh.. even I felt embarassed after reading that Bhai had to take his shirt off... phir bhai kya haal hua hoga.. hena..
I really loved Misha and her little efforts... aww how she made Badey Bhai have his dinner.. so cute... Basically I loved the care and concern of everyone in the team to make Badey Bhai feel comfortable and to make sure that he's taking his good care.
Oho... Chotey...!! he's so cute.. loved his character too... chalen atleast Bhai got someone with whom he can talk and someone who can talk with him respectfully.
Thank you for this great and super long part Bhaijaan..
Thanks to you too Neeme di.😊
Can't wait for the next part.
God bless you..😊





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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosepink.

wonderful chapter
beautifully written, dhamakedaar plot..
zordaar todtaad cheedphaad katam kaat story
🤗👏
wah kya baat h tum dono ka jawab nhi
yaar i m so sorry mai detaild review nhi de parhi cz fursat hi nhi mil rhi
bt i cn say 1 thng
"beta Qamat teri toh shamat h
tu janta nhi tu ne kisse pnga liya h"
ek jhapad padega na toh muhn se piyano bjne lagega😉



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehal.

Hey bhagwaan!!

Ab dono ki punishment shuru ho gayi!!
Ye DCP aakhir hai kya cheej? Kaha kaha se punishments dhoondke nikalta hai?

Loved the gussa but the care hidden within which is much visible to other but not to duo towards each other..

Rajveer n Misha now two little angels to care for these two best ever persons in the universe..

Par 3 months?? OMG!! Matlab ye story aur bohot khichne wala hai.. Well we are not complaining as far as you update it sooner..😉


Aur ye konsi shart manvayi abhijeet ne sabke resignation ki dhamki de ke? Muze laga tha saja me kuch choot milegi or smthing like dat. Hope u clear this in next update.



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Originally posted by: start1234

Ye part mujhe BOHOT ZYADA PASAND aaya 👍🏼 Daya sir ke emotions aur Abhijeet sir ka concern aur ghusa kamal ka tha👏 lekin wo dcp aur wo inspector😡 man ker raha tha k dcp ke saath uss inspector ka bhi upar ka ticket katwa doon And as always Daya sir ka bacche ke liye concern bohot acha tha ❤️⭐️ yani k kamal dhamal chapter tha😃👍🏼



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky118

Superb...thumbs up yaar👍🏼

i really liked that gussay mein chupa hua pyar❤️
SHAITAAN CHOWKI😆...intersting name..
mai aur kuch nahi kahun gi...
awesome Dada n Neeme😉...as always😊..



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SHERYU, SONI and RANJU...😊😊😊

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The Darkest Hours

(Sig Credit: Demostar)

Here MISHA grabbing ABHIJEET Wrist and Telling Him to lay down on Bed after changing His Cloths... VIVEK packed the Empty Container... ABHIJEET Excused and after 5 minutes coming out after changing His Cloths and lay down over Bed... MISHA sat over bed and pressing His Forehead with Singing a Poem, how many Tears absorb ABHIJEET Pillow nobody knows and after 10 minutes, the Snoring Voice filled inside the room...

DAYA after Laughing Keep that ASH and SAND inside a Shopper which arranged by CHOTAY from Surroundinds for Him and telling Him that use that during Dish Wash so the Wooden Smoke does not Black the Utensils and arranging all items in that Small Cubical Kitchen and then fell on His Bed with a Big Scream as He forgets the Bed does not have any Heavy Mattress with Rectangle Hollow Frame, it's consists of Bricks Frame now with light Mattress and that Falling Hurt DAYA Body a loud...So many Tears fell after that After Shock...

MISHA after finding ABHIJEET Sleeping, tell VIVEK that they would move now, who move His head in Yes, Look at ABHIJEET who moved His Head in Yes, so VIVEK turned off Lights and after pushing ABHIJEET room door a little, takes MISHA on His Lap, Locked ABHIJEET Residence Main Door as it have Automatic Lock and drove away in His Bike although ABHIJEET sitting on His Bed after hearing the Bike sound...

The Next Morning comes on ABHIJEET little Late as He Doesn't know that His Meal contained Slipping Pills which VIVEK added on ACP Sir call which He had done when VIVEK went to His House on SALUNKHY Suggestion so ABHIJEET feels Little Relax Physically and starting His Preparation to get Ready...

DAYA morning comes Very Early due to Dawn as well He did not want any kind of Mess again about DUTY TIMINGS so be at Early Hours rather being Late after taking Tea and Crackers and His Medicines too...

ABHIJEET reached at Bureau with RAJAT, ACP Sir engaged Him to Pick ABHIJEET at Morning on Regular base while Anyone Dropped Him too and if No One would be Available, it's CID Bureau Driver who Dropped Him on His Residence, On SALUNKHY query about that PICK and DROP Service, ACP briefed as...

ACP: SALUNKHY, Mazboot Nazar aana Ek Alug Baat hay aur Mazboot rehna Dusri... Kuch bhi ho... ABHIJEET chahyey Kitna Mazboot dikhayey Khud ko... Hay tou Nahi na... Main bus Us Mazbooti Kay Khool (cover) ko Tootny say Bacha raha hun, Ta Kay kal jub DAYA aayey tou Usy ye Nahi lagay Kay Hum nay Us kay sath sath Us Kay BHAI ko bhi Tanha chor diya...

RAJAT feeling Happy after seeing ABHIJEET much Better than Yesterday day so after Greeting, He rushed towards Bureau talking about the Recent case reported...

Days Passing On... DAYA really feeling Quiet as He can't Merge with them, the ABY TBY Irritating Language really Raising His Anger Bar Every time... Inspector QAMAT and His Sub Ordinates mostly Humiliating Him, He tried a lot to Ignore but Obviously it's Hurt Him and making so many Big Harsh Holes on His Heart... still He was Taking Care of Himself with Proper Meal and Rest with Medicines, He knew He does not have a Caretaker named ABHIJEET here if He fell Ill...

The First Month Completed with Happiness, Village started NAVRATRI Celebration before Time... DAYA feels Sad after seeing that but tried to be Compose... When the 31 touches the Calendar... DAYA's Happiness at its Peak... He murmurs after seeing the Date at FIR register as...

DAYA (happy murmur): bus Boss, Do Maheenay aur... Phir Main aur Tum Sath Sath...

ABHIJEET was at Peak of Anger without any Reason, All Officers bore it Quietly as all knew NAVRATRI coming and it's First NAVRATRI during 14 years which He would celebrated without DAYA...

Here DAYA shocked after hearing the Order from Inspector QAMAT, He became Angry... Inspector QAMAT ordered...

Inspector QAMAT: haan Bhae, NAVRATRI ki hui 8 Chuttiyaan.. (to DAYA) O bay Hero, Tu kya karay ga Chutti lay kr... Teri Koi Chutti Nhai... Thana tou Band rahy ga... Pr Teri Hazri idhar lagni chahyey...

DAYA (confuse): magar jub Thana Band rahy ga tou Main aa kr kya Karun ga..?

Inspector QAMAT: Saaly, Duty dena aur kya Teray ko Bhashan denay rakkha hay...

DAYA boils in Anger but trying to be Compose... here Inspector QAMAT Pinching Him with...

Inspector QAMAT: Wesay koi Chamak Challo Nahi Bhagai Tu nay... (wink) suna hay bhae, wahan Anath Ashram mein tou Baray Mauqay miltay hain...

DAYA who was cleaning Tables and Chairs stand up in Peak of Anger grabs Inspector QAMAT Collar...who first tried to taking it Out but after Failing, Seasoning it's Pinch as...

Inspector QAMAT (luster): kahein Us ABHIJEET ko tou Wahein say Bhaga Nahi laaya...

It's the Height of Anger for DAYA, He grabbed His Neck after Leaving His Collar and Pressing it, DAYA's Eyes fills with Blood in Anger while His Hands Grip doing work of His Tongue...

Inspector QAMAT comes in Dead mode with the Pressing and Passage, His Subordinates comes towards Him and trying to take out His Neck from those Iron grip and after Punching over DAYA body, take Him Out from those Grips... Inspector QAMAT was really Lucky to come out in One piece from Death mouth...

Both Jerked their Head, One in Anger while other in Scare and turned to the Opposite sides with Low and Strong Steps..

Here NAVRATRI Celebrations on Peak... RAJVEER showing so many things which He purchased for His Siblings to DAYA who Appreciated them and Wishing them...

ABHIJEET did not want to Excel Himself in this Phase of Life, He totally Boycott NAVRATRI and DUSHERRA this Year either Missing so much DAYA as DAYA was doing So much Fun and how many time He reminds Everyone about any Coming Ocassion and Celebration really Stayed Him in Pools of Hurt and Tears...

Here CHOTAY was coming to biding GOOD BYE to DAYA as He was going to His Village for Celebrating NAVRATRI with His Family, He suggested to DAYA after seeing Him Sad as..

CHOTAY: Master Jee, Aap bhi chaly jao... Apnay Baray Sahab say Chutti lay lo..

DAYA (with sad smile): Nahi ja sakta Baccha...

CHOTAY: kyun.. Tehwar mein tou Sub ko Chutti milti hay...

DAYA (murmur): pr Saza mein Nahi milti...

CHOTAY can't get Him so DAYA Relaxes Him that He can't get Vacations due to Extra Work... CHOTAY nodded in Yes and after Hugging Him which was really Sooting for DAYA left as He will have Next Morning Bus... DAYA after His Exit look at the Moon from Door and say after seeing Him...

DAYA: ab kya Mujhy Tum say baatein Karni parhein gii...

Today after biding GOOD BYE to MISHA and VIVEK, ABHIJEET was about to enter inside Residence, look at Sky, found a Big Rounded thing and saw a Cute Smily Face on that White Milky Round and reminds something...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, Tu ek dam na Chand jesa hota Ja raha hy...

DAYA (shyly smiles and say): itna Pyara...

ABHIJEET (naughty): Nahi, Mota, Gol Matol aur Takla..

DAYA look at Him in Shock and after that What a Rushing Ride Both had done trying to grab each one in that Full Moon Night...

The NAVRATRI Morning faced by Both with Wishing Each one in Dream and Memories...

DAYA obviously moving towards Police Station, when He was taking a Turn, found Some Unusual Voices... He turned His Neck and feeling Some Moving Legs... he rushed there and found a Young Girl who was trying to Pull the Water from Well, which was New for DAYA as He move from His Path to this side First time and with the Weight of Water Bucket, She Slipped and Her Body fell into the Wall...

DAYA instantly Grab Her Leg and after little Pulling, He make Himself Protecting Her Safely... before He tells any thing or Girl Thanked Her, He turned His head after feeling so many Rashes Voice from His behind... He feels a Mob coming towards them, He straight His Body and be Ready to telling them the Whole Incident as He thought that Someone seeing the Girl Falling and went to take Help from Villagers and Now they all be there...Mob reached at Spot and start to Beat DAYA without giving Him any Minute of Clearification...

PEOPLE: Saaly, Humari Larki pr Buri Nazar rakhta hay...

DAYA (protecting Himself with): Nahi Nahi... Main tou Isy Bacha raha... (look at Girl) Batao...

PEOPLE (beating): Aby Wo kya Batayey gi...

DAYA tried to Tell them either He look at Girl during Saving them from those Chops and Slaps that She told Something but the Girl Attitude as She trying to Pretending that She was Assaulted by DAYA as She was Crying Badly and Wrapping Herself inside a Chadder giving by Someone and People Connecting the Conversation which stunned DAYA as...

People: Wo Bachari tou Janam sy hee Gongi hay... aur (hit DAYA) Tu, Us Bechari...

DAYA (backing and protecting Himself with): ahhh.. Nahi... Aisa kuch Nahi.

Suddenly they all Hearing a Scratch Voices with a Call and all Beating Hands Freeze at their Place... All moved Head to that Direction including DAYA..

PEOPLE (call): Inspector Sahab aa gayey... Hato... Jagah banao...

Inspector QAMAT and His Subordinates coming at the Middle of the Rounded Mob and find Injured DAYA wrapped in Wounds, Blood, Dust and Dirts... Inspector QAMAT Growl after sitting on a Chair just provided by any Villeger to Him...

Inspector QAMAT: haan bhae, kyun Zulm Dha rahy ho (chewing) Is Shehri Babu pr...?

PEOPLE (rash voice): Sahab, is Shehri Babu nay Humary Gaon ki Larki pr Doray daalny ki Koshish ki... Bechari ko Badnaam karny...

DAYA (cutting with loud and angry tone): Bakwass band karo... samjhy... main bus Is Larki ko Bacha raha tha kyunkay ye Kunwein mein Gir Rahi thi... Poocho (signal to girl) is say...

Inspector QAMAT (standup with): Wo tou Gongi hay, wo kya bataye gi..?

DAYA (rash): tou Isharay say tou bata sakti hay na...

Inspector QAMAT hit a Hard Slap over DAYA Right Cheek which totally Stunned Him and added...

Inspector QAMAT: Saaly ye Ishq-o-Aashqi Kay Isharay na, Tery Mumbai mein chaltay hon gay.. Ye Humara Gaon hay... samjha...

DAYA Ruffled His Collar and People and Police started to Beating Him in Rash as How Dare He touched their MAI BAAP...

People and Police: Saaly Sahab Ka Collar Pakarta hay (DAYA obviously Weak, He can't handle such Big Rash Mob having Sticks and all with Harsh Comments and Abusive Terms as) Kameena hay... Jis Thali mein Kha raha hay... Usi mein Cheed Karta hay... aisay Ghatya Aadmi ko tou Gaon mein Rakhna hee Nahi chahyey...

Inspector QAMAT (raising hands with): Bhae, Gaon say nikalny Humari Reet Nahi... hum Saaly Mehmaan kya, Shaitaan ki bhi Pooja karnay Waly (wink DAYA) Saaf Dil Kay Log hain... baaqi Jo Karna hay, karo... Bus (moving with) Marnay Na dena Saaly ko...

People again start Beating, DAYA really in Peak of Insult, Embarrassment, Humiliation and now taking Revenge from His Ownself so just Quietly Beaten by them... Here Inspector QAMAT sat on His Jeep, look at DAYA, Smiles and Murmur after Signaling Driver to move with...

Inspector QAMAT (murmur): yahan sirf Inspector QAMAT ki chalti hay... buht Shauq hay na (pressing His neck still Paining) Gala Dabany ka...

Jeep Rushed in a Minute, People and Police really Beating DAYA badly but with Care that He should be Alive either after seeing and feeling that Now DAYA was just Beaten by them, Lower their Anger and after Some Last Kicks, they Leave Him at the Ground...

Officers one by one entered inside the Bureau and Greeting each one with HAPPY DUSSHERA with Slow tone as found ABHIJEET lay on His Chair with Closed Eyes meant He was taking a Little Nap...

Now adays, He was coming to Bureau Very Early without any Reason, He avoid to spend Time with People, Friends, Colleagues or even in Residence... He really Enjoyed His Own Company where He found His BHAI at every Second...

DAYA with Extreme Difficulty and with High Pain, Stand up and Dragging His Injured Body, Heart and Soul towards His RESIDENTIAL BARNYARD...

It takes Him too much time to be there like this as He was feeling Extreme Pain... Tears rolling over His Cheek which He tried to Wipe and as a Result it Falling with much Speed... He be at BARNYARD and entered after taking Help of Walls and when about to Enter, His eyes Spread at Last in Shock...

ACP entered inside and after seeing His Right Hand little Lying on His Chair in Relax mode feeling Sooth, He feels Officers doing their Regular Task with Slow Voice either they Switch Off Extra Lights to giving the Atmosphere just Not to Disturb their Senior little Sooth which were totally Absent from His Mind, Heart, Body, Soul and Routine after the Absence of His Soothing Partner... ACP smiles and move towards RAJAT desk to discuss something after taking and giving DUSSHERA Greetings...

For a Moment DAYA forgets the Pain, Hurt, Humiliation as He found a Junkyard at that Room which was Allotted to Him for Living... He move inside in Hurry and checking things after looking Anxiously and Desperately around, His All Cloths were Burnt at that Kitchen Stove, the Medicine Bottles were Broken down either Capsules and Tablets were Squeezing by Shoes Soles... His All Accessories were Missing, He roaming around and find the Only Important thing inside this BARNYARD other than Him, His Bag which was Completely Missing... A loud, Painful Call coming Out from His Throat wrapping in Tears as.

DAYA (teary scream): ABHiii...

ABHIJEET standup in Jerk, ACP and all others who were discussing something in Slow tone moved to Him who Desperately Replying that Call as...

ABHIJEET: DAYAaa...

DAYA sat on that Brick Bed and Crying Loudly, even His Voice was Tearing and Throat have Scratching from the Loudness but He still Crying with Pain and just Calling His BHAI...

Here ACP and all Grabbing ABHIJEET who was Not in His Senses as still calling DAYA, DAYA in Extreme Tension and Tears... ACP jerked Him with...

ACP: ABHIJEET, ABHIJEET... hosh mein aao.. (jerk him) Hosh mein... (feeling ABHIJEET stopped so added) kuch Nahi hua... Haan...

ABHIJEET (in tension): Sir, DAYA Mujhy Bula raha hay... sach Sir, Main nay Suna... buht Zor say Us nay Mujhy Aawaz di...

ACP (patting on His Shoulder): ABHIJEET, Tum nay Sapna dekha hay...

ABHIJEET (still convincing Him): Nahi Sir, kya Main Sapnay aur Haqeeqat Ka Farq Nahi jaanta... Us nay Mujhy Bulaya... (dreamy tone) Buht Dard tha Us ki Aawaz mein... buht Say Aansoo... (look at ACP and adds) Sir Main Sach keh...

ACP just Patting Him while giving Him the Water Glass which brought by VINEET for Him and just Realizing Him that DAYA would be OK...

DAYA laying On Bed due to Pain, still His Eyes having Tears and Whenever in Crying, calling ABHI to be there and Wishing to be in His Arms went to Unconscious mode...

The Whole 24 Hours were Critical for Both Buddies as they are in Huge Pain, Worry, Tension... There Emotions are Same but in Different Places... DAYA completely in Semi Conscious State, Some time He comes to Little Conscious and just Some Voices coming from His Throat as ABHI, PAANI, AHHH, ABHI...

Here ABHIJEET was in Complete Silence, His Heart beating Fast and Tension was at its Peak but He can't be able to Sooth His Tension... ACP Sir be there and after seeing Him still at Bureau went to His Desk as mostly Officers leave the Bureau after completing their Tasks... ACP Sir dragged DAYA chair which is beside ABHIJEET one, sat on it, ABHIJEET be Alert after finding Him near who asked...

ACP (soft tone): Buht Yaad aa Rahi hay na...?

ABHIJEET (trying to compose): Sir, 14 Saal guzar gayey... koi bhi Occassion ho ya Celebration, DAYA Kay bina Nahi Manaya... Buht Khalipan lug raha hy... Aajeeb Bechaini hay... khauff hay... (smiles with) Humari Duty mein in sub Ka Waqt hee Kahan milta hay... Pr Wo Koshish zarur Karta.. Gany he ga leta, Steering Baja kr GARBA Ka Maza lay leta... Kisi na kisi tarah kuch NAYA Mujhy Dilwa bhi deta aur tou aur kuch Ghar mein Bana bhi leta... Aur ab...

ACP (with sigh): haan Apnun Ka Na Hona Tehwarun ki Ronaq bhi Pheeki kr deta hy...

ABHIJEET (asking tone in Hesitation): Sir, Ek Baat poochun Aap say (ACP nodded in Yes so He asked) Aap nay DAYA ko itni Jaldi Maaf kr diya...?

ACP look at Him while ABHIJEET little Explain His Query by adding Some Observations as...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Mera tou Samjh aata hay, kyunkay Mera aur Us Ka Rishta hee kuch aajeeb sa hay... sach kahun tou Hum Dono Majboor hain Kay Humein Hanse Kay bhi Sath rehna hay aur Lar Kay bhi... Kyunkay koi aur Option bhi Nahi hay aur Na Choice... pr Aap kyun..?

(added again) DR. TAREEKA Ka Rawayya DAYA say Khich gaya hay aur kahein na kahein Hum Us Kay Rawayey ko Saheh bhi kahein gay... bhaly Plan he kyun na ho pr Wo sub Sehna aur phir ye Umeed rakhna Kay Bhool jayey ya Maaf kr day, Bekaar ki Baatein hain... Us Hospital Waly din Kay baad Us nay kabhi DAYA Kay baary mein Nahi poocha, yahan tak Kay Us ki Saza Kay baary mein bhi koi Baat Nahi ki aur Na koi Interest liya...

Isi tarah VIVEK Kay Rawayey mei bhi Thora Khichao hay... Wo DAYA Kay Sath tou raha magar Duty jesa aur DAYA nay ye Baat Mehsus bhi ki, is Liyey Us nay kisi say koi Sawal Nahi kiya...

RAHUL tou Crack hay... Us Ka bhi Wohi masla hay Kay DAYA kay Us pr Baray Ihsaan hain, aur Wesay bhi DAYA nay Usy kuch Kaha bhi Nahi tha...

FREDDIE tou Hamesha say Masoom aur Man Ka Saaf raha hy, yahan Narazgi.. Ek pal baad Dosti... Aur SALUNKHY Sir Ka bhi Samjh aata hay Kay DAYA nay Un ko kuch Khas Nahi Kaha tha... Magar Aap kyun Sir..? DAYA nay Aap Kay sath kitni Badtameezi ki... Aap ko NAKUL Kay Hawaly say Kitna Tease kiya aur Aap nay Ek Pal mein Sub kuch Bhula diya...

ACP (with smile): ABHIJEET, Tumhein Malum hay, Haq dena aur Haq jatana ye Do Kaam Insan Buht Qareebi logun ko deta aur Karta hy... Tumhein Yaad hay DAYA ko Tum nay 2 Thapper Maaray, kyunkay Us nay Tumhein ye Haq diya tha... Isi tarah Mujhy miltay sath DAYA nay Lipat kr Kaha, SIR AAP MUJH SY GUSSA TOU NAHI HAIN NA... isy Haq jatana Kehtay hain...

Insan itnay Maan aur Wishwaas ko Do tarah kay Logun pr Zahir (show) krta hay.. Aik STRANGERS, jis say baad mein Us ka koi Lena Dena Nahi rehta aur Dusra APNY, jin pr Usy garv hota hay kay Wo Un ko Mana hee lay gay aur wo Maan hee jayein gay ya kum az kum Wo Usy Khuly Dil aur Zehn say Qabul karein gay...

ABHIJEET (added): isi liyey shayed Us nay Un 5 logun say badtameezi ki jin pr Usy itna Maan tha kay Wo Us kay Khilaf apnay Dil mein Keena ya Nafrat nahi rakkhein gay... haan Narazgi Alug Cheez hay...

ACP: haan isi liyey Meray aur Tumharay sath Us nay Badtameezi ka margin Buht Zyada rakkha kyunkay Us ka Maan, Wishwass aur Muhabbat Hum say Zyada hay...

ABHIJEET: aur FREDDIE, VIVEK aur SALUNKHY Sir pr Hath halka rakkha... (ACP Nodded) (ABHIJEET again) mager Sir TAREEKA..?

ACP: TAREEKA koi Pehli baar Kidnap nahi hui hay ABHIJEET, haan bus Us nay Khud kay Chehray ko Samny rakkha...

ABHIJEET (included): yahan tak kay Us nay TAREEKA ko hath bhi Nahi lagaya aur is baat ka Poora Dihan rakkha kay Us kay sath koi Mis Behave na ho...

ACP (smiles): is say kya Pata chalta hay..?

ABHIJEET (naughty): yehi kay DAYA, JAGYA ko Rat kr gaya tha aur usy malum tha JAGYA ko ye Sub Pasand nahi hay... magar Sir phir bhi aap ko thora tou Usy Daantana ya Apnay Dukh ka Izhaar karna chahyey tha... kya Humein Nahi malum kay aap kay Dil ko kitni Chout lagi...

ACP (soggy tone): ABHIJEET in Khardaar Taarun Kay Tany Bany mein Main nay Apna Ek Beta Kho diya... Dusray ko Khony ki Himmat hee Nahi thi... Jub DAYA phansa na Un Taarun mein tou Meri Rooh Kaanp gayii... Mujhy Us Kay Lafz Yaad Nahi, bus Ye Khauff yaad hay Jo Un 20 Dino mein Main nay Saha... (Teary voice) Ek aur Betay ko Khony Ka Khauff...

Jitni baar bhi Us nay Mujhy NAKUL ki Yaad dilaii, Utni baar Meray Dil say bus yehi Aaawz Nikli Kay kahein Kal koi Mujhy DAYA Kay Hawaly say bhi isi tarah Na kahay.. Kyunkay (look at Him Straight while ABHIJEET was in Trance) Is Baar Meray Hath Kaanp Jaantay ABHIJEET... zarur Kaanptay... EK Aarthi kay bojh nay ACP PRADYUMAN ko Zinda Laash bana diya hay... Aur Laashein Khud Apna he Bojh Utha lein Kafi hay... Kisi aur Ka kya uthayein gii...

He left the Place to Sooth His Heart while His Right hand still at His Chair with Hurt and Proud too...

A Painful AHHH coming from His Mouth when He was trying to Wake Up and feeling Pain, Fever and Blur in His eyes... By any means He standup with taking help of Bed and went towards Washroom... He did not have anything to Wear so takes Bed Sheet with Him, He takes a TAP SHOWER either Washed His Cloths to Wipe Blood Stains and Dust...

His Wound again started Burning with Running Blood so after Wrapping Bed Sheet around Himself which He found Spread on that Mattress from the day He came here...

He found Everything Mess, the RASHAN was completely Spreading at Floor, Some Food mixed up with Ash of Cloths so Waste, He picked all and found TURMERIC and mixed it with Water and Spread it on His Wounds as its the Only Remedy He used Now...

After losing that Bag, He did not have anything... No Money, No Prescription, Medicines already Messed up, No Foods, No Cloths as well No Shoes as during that Incident where He had Saved that Girl, He taken Off His Shoes to Protect Himself from Falling as the Place was Very Slippery...

He placed His Cloths Outside for Soaking while started to Clean the BARNYARD with Quietness either after Every Minute His Eyes fixed to Door to Wait for ABHI...

ABHIJEET Heart still Pinching but He can't get the Reason of that Pinch, He wanted to Sooth His Heart by saying that Everything will be Good and Fine with DAYA but still something Hurt Him Deep down...

DAYA after Cleaning all, move towards inside again after taking His Dry Cloths and agin taking a Hot Tap Shower which Realaxes His Intense Emotions as well Sooth in His Pain as the TURMERIC Remedy really Helped His Wound in Healing... He was moving towards DHABA without Slippers and Shoes to tell the Man not to Purchase RASHAN for Him for Next Month as He already used One Month RASHAN for One and Half month and Now He does not have a Single Penny... He reached there and found the Dhaba was Closed, He looks here and there and found a Young Guy so asked about Dhaba as...

DAYA: ye Dhaba Band hay kya..?

Guy: haan Sahab, wo Dusshera hay na tou Dhaba tou 3 Din Band rahy ga...

DAYA was Shocked as What He have to be Eaten in those 3 Days... He thought He took Some Foods in UDHAAR from Dhaba and after getting His Salary, Payed back but Now... He looks at the Guy and asked again in Tension...

DAYA: wo BHAI, koi Kaam milay ga kya..?

GUY (in confusion): abi kya Kaam Sahab... abhi tou Chutti Ka Waqt hay na...

DAYA eyes fills with Tears, He feels that He went to His Childhood and those Painful days Repeating or Revolving around Him... in just few hours He turned to a 8/9 Years Kid having so many Scare, Fear and Pain inside His Heart.. He moved to His BARNYARD again...

ABHIJEET was really Busy in Solving a Reported Case, they completely Dipped on it and during these He feels the Same Pain which He was Bothering to Ignore from Morning...

On Returning Journey, DAYA feels Piercing eyes of Villegers which Pinching Him and in that a Man who was passing beside, look at DAYA and Spit... DAYA was at Peak of Rash so Grab His Collar and gives a Tight Slap with...

DAYA: kyun Thook raha hay Mujhy Dekh Kay... Haan...

MAN (taking out His Collar and tell in Complete Hate): kyunkay Tu Ganda hay... Ek Dam Ganda... Humaray Gaon ko bhi Ganda...

Before DAYA again Slapped Him, He rushed away and DAYA was moving towards Police Station which was already Closed, He was Crying in Whole Journey, His Feet Soles Absorb much Heat but this Heat is so Less than the Heat moving in His Blood...

He reached there, CHANDU was Waiting for Him, He Signed on Register as He was Late but CHANDU have a Hurry to went to His House... He did not say anything to DAYA and went with that Register, DAYA sat on Police Station Stairs...

ABHIJEET Stepping Down from Bureau Stairs and Suddenly Slipped but Saved from Falling after Gripping the Side Grill, FREDDIE and VIVEK Supported Him but He Relaxed them after sitting there and taking off His Shoe with...

ABHIJEET: lagta hay Jootay Ka Sole Nikl Gaya... Ohhh...

He was taking His One Shoe at Hands and covered up the Rest Stairs with only in Socks at His Right Foot...

DAYA sitting there till 7 PM, He knew that Inspector QAMAT should engaged any of HisCHAMCHA to keep Check on Him so just taking out 2/ 3 Register from Dustbin Outside the Police Station, He did not do any thing...

ABHIJEET take His Shoe towards Cobbler during way to Bureau after Investigation Spot but Sad as due to DUSSHERA, No Shop would be Opened so taking Off His Both Pairs and He done all His Work in Socks...

DAYA went to His Barnyard and after Reaching there, feeling that His Left Hand was Swelled Up, already He was in Pain so can't able to Distinguish about the Old Health Problem and Now He just want to take REVENGE but from Whom, Nobody Knows..!

He was Freshen up and now Tearing the Register Outer Hard cover which He brought from Police Station Dustbin and with that He Torn Bed Sheet Long Strips, make a Hole over those Hard Covers by Nailing over His Ball Point Head which He found under His Bed and His Watch Back cover as its Front Glasses and Needles already Rest their Lives in that Battle...

He made Two Pairs of Chappel by that but only for moving Out as inside He was Barefoot which He Hates the Most... He looks at Moon, Door and Tears which Falling at Regular Intervals and just whisper...

DAYA (whisper): Buht Bhook lagi hay Boss...

He looked around and Picking those Papers, DCP making Fun about Writing Letters before coming here... He started to Write...

Boss, Aaj bhi Wesi hee Bhook lagi hay, jesay kabhi Orphanage mein laga karti thi... Aur Khany ki Hasrat mein kitnay Saaray Kaam karny ka Josh Dilati thi aur aakhir mein Jub Pani pii kr Sona parta tha na tou Buht Rona aata tha...

ABHI, Tum kehtay ho na, Main Buht Mota hun... Sub kehtay hain Main buht Khata hun... haan Yaar, main Pait Bhar kay us Bhook ko khatam karna chahta hun, pr wo Mitti Nahi... najnay kesi hay...

Tum aa jao Yaar. Acha Kuch Khany ko mut Lana pr aa jao ABHI... Main Ye Saza Nahi jheel paon ga Yaar... agar main Bhooka Mar gaya tou phir Teri Maafi ka kya ho ga...

Aa ja yaar, Mujhy sub Buht Yaad aata hy... Mujhy Tum Buht yaad aatay ho... Apna Ghar, Shehr, gari, Rishtay... Sub..

Is baar Navratri ki Shopping nahi ki na... Paisay Khatam ho gayey yaar... Mujhy Buht Bhook... Tu aa ja ABHI... Mera sar daba day Yaar... Teray DAYA ko itnay Zakham lug gayey pr koi Marham lagany wala Nahi hay yaar...

Tu aa ja... Mujhy BhooK... ABHIii...

So many Tear Drops fell and suddenly a Knock Scared DAYA Badly so the Pen was Slipped from His hand, He went to Open Door...

ABHIJEET was Jerked Badly, His Fingers tingling and the Sign which He was doing at Case report completely Messed up, He feels a Sharp Pain in His Heart...

DAYA Opened the Door and found the Same Guy He met at Dhaba today, who had a Plate with Some Food and say...

GUY: Sahab ye lo, Aaj Dusshera hay na tou Maa nay bheja tha Gaon say... Meray ko MAAN SINGH boltay hain, Main wahan Dhabay Kay pass waly Bus Addy pr Kaam Karta Hun... Aap aa Jana kal Subah... Saaf Safai Ka Kaam hay...

DAYA (gripping plate with): pr Main Subah 8 bajay say Shaam 7 bajy tak Thany mein Naukri Karta Hun... tou Us samy aana...

MAAN SINGH: Thany mein... (shock) Wahan kya kartay ho..?

DAYA (feeling hurt but say): Main wahan Jharoo Pocha Karta Hun...

MAAN SINGH look at Him from Head to Toe, it's Difficult for Him to Digest that News but He added after a while...

MAAN SINGH: Theek hay Subah 4 bajy aa Jana, Busun ko Dhoona aur Saaf krna hay, pr Paisay Kum milein gay, haan Do Waqt Ka Khana bhi...

DAYA (in hurry): Chaly ga...

MAAN SINGH: Theek hay, Main Subah 4 bajay wahein Dhaby Kay pass Milun ga...

DAYA look at the Sky after Closing the Door, the Food consists of Mix Platter having Roti, Chawal, Gravy, Sabzi and Sweets too... DAYA was engaged in Eating...

RAJAT instantly grab ABHIJEET Arm who was taking out it Softly after rubbing His Forehead and sat on chair with...

ABHIJEET: kuch Nahi hua RAJAT... shayed... Chakker aa Gaya ho...

RAJAT (little sad): Sir, Aap apna Bilkul Khayal Nahi rakhtay... DAYA Sir ko Dukh hoga na jub wo aayein gay...

ABHIJEET look at Him and a Sad Smiles comes on His Face with a Painful Sentence from His Throat as...

ABHIJEET (standup with): DAYA ko already buht Dukh ho chuka hay RAJAT... Kya aur Dukh Sehnay ki Gunjaish reh gayii hay Us mein...

After that He Left the Bureau and Somehow Now His Heart comes on Normal Beat, the Tension and Un easiness He felt from Morning Lower down...

DAYA did not Sleep for a Minute due to Pain, Swelling and all either the TURMERIC Paste really gives His Wounds a Sooth Heal up but it can't Help in Swelling and now that Brick Bed really Hurt Him to lay down... He feels His Dislocated Shoulder Bone more Dislocated Now so feeling Pain too... He did not get any Pharmaceutical or any Local shop to get some Local pain Killers or Some Sprays..

He got up or said standup and then moved out after wearing His Only left Cloth consists of Black Jeans, Black Inner and that MUNNI WARDI... He wore those DABBA SLIPPERS He made Last day with the Help of Register Hard Cover, Bed Sheet Stripes to at least protect His Sole from Heat...

He be at Dhaba, give back that Plate to MAAN SINGH who already presented there and from there MAAN SINGH takes Him to Bus Stand... DAYA taken out His WARDI and Inner with those DABBA SLIPPERS and engaged in His Work either His Body was Burning like a Fire but His Will have More Fire than that...

MAAN SINGH gives Him the Cloth, Sponge and Washing Powder and after Hectic Hard work of Three hours, He Cleaned all 4 Buses stand there... MAAN SINGH giving Him Money... A 50 Rupee Note... DAYA was in Shell Shock mode so in Rash...

DAYA (rash): bus itany say... Kya Mujhy Pagal...

MAAN SINGH (about to snatch Note with): Lena hay tou lo, Warna...

Before MAAN SINGH snatched that only SURVIVAL from DAYA Palm, He instantly Closed His Palm and moving after picking His Inner and Wardi and wearing those Slippers and hearing a Smily Teasing tone...

MAAN SINGH: Dono waqt Ka Khana Dhaby say Kha Lena... Hisaab mein likh lay ga Malik aur haan 50 Rupay Kay ander Ka he khana...

DAYA left and moved towards Police Station... He was really Eager to have a Cup of Tea... He reminds that He drank Tea at whole Bureau way and for that Purpose ABHIJEET bought a Cup having a Cover for Him which always presented at Quillas Deshboard... He opened His Palm and some Tears fell on that 50 rupee Note, He pushed it inside His Jeans Pocket...

ABHIJEET did not Sleep for a Minute at that Night, After Biding Goodbye to MISHA and VIVEK as today RAHUL and AMAN also be there and all in Silence just feeling the Presence of DAYA, AMAN came on little Quiet mode after that either He knew the Truth and DAYA met Him before going for fulfilling this Punishment... He was still in that Pain...

At Morning, ABHIJEET taken out Another Pair of Shoes and after getting Ready, Skipping Breakfast leave the Residence and move towards Bureau...

DAYA be at Police Station, the way His Colleagues Welcomed Him was really really Painful for Him as today He first time Realize that CLAPPING and WHISTLING are Not only raising Happiness, sometimes it raises PAIN as well, which He just Understands after Entering as He found Smirky Smiles, Teasing Style from their Looks to Style...

Inspector QAMAT Welcomed Him with a Funny Line as He feels DAYA was looking like a Clown in those Weird Outfits and Dabba Slippers...

Inspector QAMAT: Manna paray ga bhae... Hero hay Tu... itni Maar khai, Zaleel hua, Seeny pr Daag bhi laga Betha pr Gaya Nahi...

DAYA (look at Him and smiles with): Ek baar Jo Main nay Teray Baap (QAMAT comes in Anger) (wink) DCP CHIROLY say Commitment kr li na tou phir Main Apni bhi Nahi sunta... (comes near) ye mut Soch, Teri Laash aisay Gar dun ga na... (far) Dhondtay reh jao gay...

Inspector QAMAT feeling little Scare, He knew now DAYA have Less time to be here and After all at the End He went to go Back to Mumbai... He jerked His Head and DAYA picked the Jharoo and starting His Work with...

Coller ko thora sa Ooper carha Kay
Cigerrate Kay Dhuwein Ka Challa bana Kay
Sochna hay kya, Jo hona hay hoga
Chal paray hain Fikr, Yaarun Dhuwein mein Ura Kay

Inspector QAMAT was in Shock phase after finding such Sweet Voice in these Painful moment and reminds Some Lines of DCP CHITROLY as..

DCP: QAMAT, Usy Jazabati tour pr Maaro... Koi bhi Kaam Khud Nahi krna... Haan Karwana Tum Achi tarah Jaantay ho... Usy Jazbati tour pr Kamzor kr do Ta Kay Kal Toot Na bhi saky tou Mur Zarur jayey...

Inspector QAMAT (obeying tone): Jee Sir, ho jayey ga...

DCP (strong): Dihan rakhna, jis tarah wo aaya hay, Usi tarah wapis bhi jayey... koi Haddi Waddi Mut tour dena aur Na koi Bari Injury...

Inspector QAMAT: Jee Sir...

DCP (cut the call with Laghing Murmur): Main na Kaha tha na (chewing tone) ACP PRADYUMAN, DAYA Kay Liyey Main Acha Lollypop ban Sakta hn...

Inspector QAMAT after DCP Order made that Plan, Blackmailed the Family of that Girl as taking Her Father to Jail without any Reason, She accepted the Plan and Portrayed the Role of a DUMB girl either She and Her Family in whole Pitty over DAYA but...!

Inspector QAMAT back on Current as feeling Some Tension from that Scene, He feels He saw an Emerging Hero He mostly watching in Bollywood Movies and He knew well that at the End, Hero won the War... DAYA sweet Smirky tone still Echoing inside His Ears while He Left the Station...

DAYA (smiles and engage in KATKA as): jaany kya hoga RAMA ray
jaany kya hoga MAULA ray...

He feels after leaving the Station at 7 Pm that His Pain was Lower Down as well His Angry Emotions bit Happy now and the HORNS (SEENGS) which was buried inside of His Head Skull now again Protruted Out... A DareDevil smile Glows His Face with some Bluish and Reddish shades...

A Loud Laugh coming from ABHIJEET mouth which Scared and Tensed His Team mates at Bureau... ABHIJEET checking His Cell and got that GOGA CHACHA Picture...

He Reminds the Conversation, the Scene where Both Enjoying that Disguise... ABHIJEET Denying that DAYA Used Heavy Bike in that but DAYA still Arguing and the Make Up Artist who be there for Help them in Disguise totally Confuse...

ABHIJEET: DAYA, kya Bewakoofun wali Baat kr raha hay... Tu Buddha bana hay... Samjha aur Buddhy Heavy Bike Nahi chalaty...

DAYA (singing and winking after sitting on Bike): Boss, (wink) Dil tou Baccha hay Jee...

ABHIJEET (angry): Aby DILAWAR aur Us Kay Saathiyun ko Shak ho jayey ga...

DAYA (kicking with): Nahi hoga Boss, Main Hil Hil Kay Bike Chalaon ga na...

ABHIJEET (pat on His Haed): Aye BHAGWAAN...

While FREDDIE, RAJAT and NIKHIL laughing with the Make Up Artist and DAYA really done that Scene with so much HIL HIL Kay and tease ABHIJEET with...

DAYA (naughty smile): dekha Kitna Acha Hilta Hun Main...

ABHIJEET: haan dekha, wo tou Shuker kr Darhi itnay achy say Chipkai thi Us Make Up Artist nay, Warna Shahab jitna (press) HIL rahy thy na, sub ko pata chal jata...

DAYA (moving with Irritative tone): pata tou Nahi chala na... (angry) huh... Hr waqt Dekho Daantta rehta hy Mujhy... ACP Sir ko Bolun ga, Salay Kaat lein Is ki... (Naughty) aur Mujhy dein dein...

Here MAAN SINGH provided the Same MENU of His Mother to DAYA on these Three days where Dhaba was Closed... After that He was Use too of it, either Dhaba Wala after coming from His Village found DAYA who was taking Lunch and Dinner in BUS KHATA... He does not know about what happened with this Shehri Babu as the Whole Incident was happened in His Absence even MAAN SINGH also did not know about that...

Dhaba Wala found DAYA so Simple, He took Very Less Item either Sometimes after seeing His Weakness and Wounds about which DAYA said that He fell on Well in Dark, He gave Him Lassi, Milk by saying that's it's Dusshera Offer... He gave Him a BOTI PASTE after seeing His Swollen and Rupturing Skin at His Left Hand which really Healed His Pain and Rupture it like a Magic, the Swollen was Little Less but not Completely...

DAYA becomes Laggard with Days Passing... He did all the Work Quietly or sometimes Singing Relaxes His Angry Emotions when Inspector QAMAT gives Some Nonsense Work to Him like Yesterday a Case was reported and Inspector QAMAT first time in such 72 days Order DAYA to move with them to Spot..

DAYA was Surprised as well having Scare about Something Bad coming on His way... He sat at Back of Police Jeep with them and Jeep reached at the Spot having Two groups Fighting for some Crops Issue... before DAYA move Forward with them... Inspector QAMAT turned His Neck towards DAYA and Order Him...

Inspector QAMAT: Hero, Yahan Khara reh aur dekh Gari Ka khayal rakhna, Darakht Kay neechy Khari hay, koi Patta Na giray... Aur haan Ye Ghatya Jootay Utar Kay Khara reh... Gaon Humari Maa jesi hay...

DAYA wanted to say that WHY U ALL IN SHOES but Kept His Lips Sealed, He just Examine His Tolerance and Patience to it's Limit that's why Obeyed the Order although He Saved the Jeep from Everything but wrapped Himself in Dust and Dirt... His Sole burnt Badly either He spend the Hours after changing His Body Weight from One Foot to Another...

RAHUL entered inside the Residence and found a Big Shock, the Whole Residence was White Wash, so many Labour's are there to Displace the Furniture... ABHIJEET headed them with so many Orders, RAHUL found a Big and Happy Spark inside Him so ask...

RAHUL: ye kya ho raha hay ABHIJEET...?

ABHIJEET (turn neck with): Arry RAHUL... Sahab aa rahy hain... Pata hay na... Bus socha thora Safai ho jayey gi Ghar ki... Roshan aur Khula khula lagay ga...

RAHUL (smiles): Haan... Wesay Leenay Kub Jana hay..?

ABHIJEET (happy): 20 din baad...

ABHIJEET exchanged so many things with RAHUL about that Arrival Celebration which He was Preparing for His BEARY Brother...

DAYA was totally Cut Out from Everything... The Hope of going Back to MUMBAI, Hope of having FORGIVENESS from His BHAI, Hope of MEETING THEM AGAIN, RE-JOINING HIS JOB was completely Vanished from His Life... He turned Lousy, Dull, Dumb, Tann and Quiet with a Confirmation that THIS IS HIS DESTINATION OF LIFE...

Zindagi ki Talaash mein Hum
Maut Kay Kitnay Pass aa gayey
Jub ye socha tou ghabra gayey
Aa Gayey Hum kahan aa Gayey

Hum thay aisay Safar mein chaly
Jis ki koi Manzil Nahi
Hum nay saari Umer jo kiya
Us Ka koi bhi Hasil Nahi

EK khushi
(wiping tear) ki Talaash mein thy
Kitnay ghum Hum ko Tarpa gayey
Jub ye socha tou ghabra Gayey
Aa Gayey Hum kahan aa Gayey...

Someone coming inside after coming out from that Sweet but Painful Voice aroma with Difficulty as He was watching DAYA rubbing a Small Cloth tearing from the Bed Sheet which was His OORHNA and BICHONA, A small Bowl was there having Water through which DAYA Soothing His Soles...

RAJ (whisper): Master Jee...

DAYA turned His Neck as after that Robbery where He Lost His Bag, He totally Windup to Close that BARNYARD Door in Nights too...

RAJ coming ahead and near to DAYA, rub His Small fingers over DAYA Face having Dry Wounds and His Finger turned Wet and Suddenly He wrapped DAYA inside His Small Arms...

ABHIJEET Polishing Every Furniture of Residence, He did not want to Change anything as DAYA mostly Love to Use Oldie Goldie... He made a Plan after Opening DAYA Wardrobe that now Shopping should be Must for DAYA...

DAYA spills His Tears on those small Shoulders and after some minutes, Relaxes so offered RAAJ by making Space over Bed as...

DAYA: Beta, Tum Kub aayey..? Aur itnay Din laga diyey..?

RAJ: Master Jee, Do saal baad Gaya tha tou Chutti zyada lii thi... Pr Aap ko kya hua... (tense) Chout kesay lagi..?

DAYA: Wo Main Kunwein mein Gir gaya tha na...

RAJ: magar wo tou Dusri Ore hay... Wo tou Aap Ka RAsta hee Nahi...

DAYA (twisting): Arry wo Andhera tha na , tou Ghomtay Ghumatay Udhar nikl Gaya...

RAJ (inquire tone): phir Aap Niklay Kesy..?

DAYA (smiles): Tum tou bhae, EK dam Police Waly ban Gayey ho...

RAJ: kya Master Jee... Meri Maa Bolti hay, Court Kacheri aur Police Kay Chakker say BHAGWAAN sub ko bachayey... (DAYA smiles) (RAJ giving Him a Shopper with) Maa nay kuch Khany ko diya hay, Aap Kay Liyey bhi... Ye Dekho...

He was showing some HOMEMADE FOODS, SWEETS which He brought for DAYA, also showing Him a HANDKERCHIEF where His NAME as VEER was Embodied because Her Small Sister taking Sewing Lectures from Her Mother.. DAYA really engaged to watch those all with Some Sooth...

ABHIJEET called Dr RAJEEV and Dr ASHOKE and tell them the Date and Time they would be presented at Residence as He understand very well that DAYA was not Prepared to move to Hospital after coming back to Mumbai... He already Purchased His Medicines Before a day, so many Junk Food Items, even Preparing Something by Himself, RAHUL and ACP Sir, Some Foods already Ordered...

The BACCHA PARTY was at Peak of Happiness, MISHA already placing His Drawing Book at DAYA Bedside table... AMAN uploaded so many New Songs in His IPAD, so many New and Exciting Games, their Updated Versions in His IPAD... ABHIJEET Cleaned His Lappy, checked the Decoder again for some HD quality Channels...

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DAYA was Tired after doing the BUS SHOWER today as from few days, He feels that He can't properly Stand on His Soles for Longer Period of Time... He feels that the Cut Marks at His Palms now Hurting when the Washing Powder entered from the Crevices and it's Difficult for Him to Close His Palms easily which Irritating Him in Few Hours Sleep as He was Habitual of of Sleeping by making Fists...

After Washing Buses, He went towards Police Station and Suddenly CHANDU Running Fastly and Collided Him in Middle and Order DAYA...

CHANDU: Jaldi chalo... Shahab bula rahy hain...

DAYA (rash): Aby tou Ja raha hun na... (moving with) Teray Sahab ko Sans Nahi aata Meray bina...

CHANDU without Word takes Him to Police Station, DAYA was in Anger so missed to Look around... He entered and Freezed...

ACP Sir, ABHIJEET, SALUNKHY Sir, RAJAT, SACHIN, FREDDIE and VIVEK was there in Shock, Hurt and Pain after seeing a Man as when They all Left Him at least He was Not in such Worst condition they all are Seeing Him now...

ACP comes ahead after coming out from this Shock First, He moved close to DAYA and DAYA without a Second loss Hugged Him with extreme Tight grip which was Surprising for ACP Himself... His Tears and Shivering Body Hurt Him a lot either His Tense Eyes focused ABHIJEET who was really feeling a Big Worry and Pain inside His Heart...

ACP Releases Him from His Soothing Shell... DAYA Wipes His Tears like all the Rest, His eye got the Accessories of His Body Parts as His BADGE with a Printed Paper placed at Table... ACP grabbed His Eye focus so ordered...

ACP: DAYA, is pr Sign karo aur Chalo...

DAYA moved ahead and trying to Sign on it but His Palm can't Gripped the Ball Point Properly as well His Embarrassing Shivering Teary Body really makes Trouble for Him...

A Soft hand comes from Behind and Clutched DAYA shivering Palm with Crisp Grip, DAYA Fingers automatically turn Strong and He Signed on it with Zeal and Hit His Elbow in Backward direction which makes a Big Hole inside ABHIJEET Abdomen and move ahead...

ABHIJEET mouth unintentionally throw an OUCH and He feels the Naughty glints of RAJAT and SACHIN so said...

ABHIJEET (rubbing that part with): buht Jaan hay bhae...

Smiles comes on every Lips after those Hurtful moment where they saw DAYA First... DAYA asked after taking His Badge from Table to ACP Sir as...

DAYA (little Rough tone): Sir, ab Main Sr. inspector of CID Hun na...

Everyone look at Him in Shock after hearing such Strange Query either ABHIJEET Shocked to hear the Voice... is that DAYA Voice... So Dull, Vacant and Drained... ACP looked at Him First, then ABHIJEET and Replied...

ACP: 100% DAYA...

DAYA moved ahead and gives a Tight and Hard Slap to Inspector QAMAT which not only Silent the Place but fills the room with Scare... He started Beating Him Badly either His Tears understands everyone about the Pain He bore from that Man but as its against the Rule so Officers moved ahead to Stopping Him...

Officers efforts wastes as DAYA was really in Angry mode, ABHIJEET tried but DAYA pushed ABHIJEET Badly and growl...

DAYA (growl after pushing Him): Leave Me...

ABHIJEET Completely Embarrassed as well Stunned as He found that Rash towards Him from DAYA part was Baseless...

DAYA Left the Man and Police Station Instantly, ACP after placing that Paper and look at that Injured Man whose Voice was Completely Shuts moving out after signaling all His Sub Ordinates...

DAYA stand outside ACP Sir Innova meant He totally Avoid to sit at Quillas... ACP Driver look at Him and after feeling the Glance opened Doors... DAYA trying to sit either it's so Painful for Him to Manage Himself in that Vehicle but got Succeeded... SALUNKHY beside Him, while ABHIJEET completely Quiets and did not Argue or interrupts in any matter...

Offices engaging their Seats and the Vehicles moving in Line up either ACP asked after sitting on Innova to DAYA...

ACP: DAYA, Tumhara Bag...

DAYA (low tone): Sir, kuch khas... (remember something so said) haan Sir, Main ly kr...

ACP signaled Him to be Seated and tell His Driver to be at DAYA House while asking to DAYA...

ACP: DAYA, Raasta Batao, Driver wahein lay lay ga...

DAYA (embarrass to take them to that BARNYARD so in hurry): Sir, Main lay lun ga... wahan Gari Nahi Ja paayey gi...

ACP (opening door with): acha tou Pedal chalaty hain...

DAYA really feels about Boiling His All Wishes as He found that ACP Sir at every Cost move with Him, He say in Low tone...

DAYA (low tone): Sir, wo Jagah Aap Kay Qabil Nahi...

ACP: Jis Jagah Tum reh sakty ho... Wo sub Kay Jany Kay Qabil ho gi... (to Driver) Gari ..

DAYA (slow tone): Left side...

Driver takes the Vehicle and Quillas moved behind it and when the Point DAYA stopped it, ABHIJEET stepped Out in Hurry... DAYA also moving out with help of ACP and FREDDIE whose was coming Fast on ABHIJEET Signal...

ACP and SALUNKHY entered with DAYA who insisting Him to be Outside, but Both ignored, ABHIJEET went with Him after signaling all to be there...

ACP takes a Big Big Sigh after Entering... DAYA just picking those Papers from that Brick table and moving out with a Look at ACP who was leaving that BARNYARD with SALUNKHY and Him either ABHIJEET check the Washroom and Kitchen and after Punching over Bed moving out in Great Pain...

He really Understands what kind of Pain DAYA tolerated by this Punishment... He was Shocked by Not getting the Traveling Bag which DAYA brought so He SMSed ACP asking about that and sit on Quillas which were ready to move as Innova still Waiting...

ACP read the Message and framed the Query to DAYA with Soft tone as...

ACP: DAYA, Medicines kahan hain Tumhari.? aur Tumhara Bag bhi Nahi Nazar aa raha..?

SALUNKHY: aur ye Kesy Slippers Tum nay pehnay...

DAYA (cutting in vacant tone): Sir, Chalein gay Nahi...

Without any more word, ACP signaled Driver and Innova and Quillas move to their way either He saw DAYA close His Teary eyes on Ray View mirror...

Someone placed hand over DAYA Shoulder and the way His Body Jerked was really Unbearable... DAYA Rashly pushed ABHIJEET hand from His shoulder and with Difficulty moving out and His Eyes Blurred after seeing Something in Front of Him as He Lost Hope to See this in His Life again...

MISHA and AMAN ran Fast and Wrapped Him around their Arms and when He Happily Left them, Someone Wrapped Him, He completely Lose His Body Weight to that Person for Some times... how many Tears that Shoulder of RAHUL soaked of DAYA, Nobody would Counted...

DAYA entered inside the Residence, His Both Palms clutching by MISHA and AMAN and with CHILDREN'S OF HEAVENS, He moved inside Lounge found Dr. RAJEEV, Dr. ASHOKE, NIKHIL, VINEET, PUNKAJ, PURVI, SHERYA and Dr. TAREEKA too, whose presence was a Surprise for DAYA as well for ABHIJEET...

DAYA met with Each One but the Pain, Hurt and Sadness showing with His Every Moment... ABHIJEET signaled Dr. RAJEEV and Dr. ASHOKE as DAYA tells RAHUL that He wanted a Shower...

Here RAHUL was in Confusion, He looks at DAYA about His Whisper and then moved to ABHIJEET side and ask in Secret Tone...

RAHUL: kya hua...?

ABHIJEET: Do Pasliyaan tour chuka hay Meri... aur Himmat Nahi hay...

RAHUL in Smiles Grabs DAYA arm and takes Him inside room, RAJEEV and ASHOKE joint Him after closing the Door Ordered...

RAKEEV: Betho DAYA... Pehlay Haddi dekhny do... phir...

DAYA (rash): Nahi dikhana hay Mujhy kuch aur Tum ko kis nay Bulaya hay... Haan...

ASHOKE (little strict): DAYA, Baatein baad mein... Pehlay Mujhy Haddi...

DAYA (complete anger): kya lagaya hua hay... Nahi dikhana Mujhy kuch... Kya karo gay... Haaan...

ABHIJEET (entered with): kya masla hay, kyun itna Ceekh rahy ho DAYA, Bahar tak Aawaz aa Rahi hay...

DAYA (Pushed Him Badly with): Tum kyun aayey ho... Kis nay bulaya hay.. Aur Bahar tak hee Awaaz jaati hay... Ander Nahi jaati... (hit on His Chest) Nahi Jati Ander... jao... (scream) jao... Leave Me alone... jao...

His Voice Tearing and all leave the place in a bit although feeling the Hurt, Pain and Tears in His Every Word... After moving out, RAJEEV pressed Palm over ABHIJEET Chest with...

RAJEEV: ABHIJEET, Zor say tou Nahi lagi na... (ABHIJEET nodded in No) (RAJEEV again) najany DAYA itna Rash...

ABHIJEET (Teary tone): Akelay rehna Aasan Nahi RAJEEV...

RAJEEV understand so sat at lounge Sofa with ASHOKE... all heard DAYA Scream so Silence Preveils, ABHIJEET tells RAHUL in Low Voice...

ABHIJEET: RAHUL, Tum jao ander... Shaye Usy kisi Cheez ki Zarurat ho aur Bhais mut Karna... Gussa ho tou foran Bahar aa Jana...

RAHUL nodded and knock the Door, No answer He found so Opened Door Knob and peep inside, Room was Empty meant DAYA went inside to take Shower, He entered, taken out some Lose Cloths which ABHIJEET Purchased during these days for Him and Come Outside...

ABHIJEET signaled all to Set the Dinning and gives that Lunch Call over ACP Shoulder by saying...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Aap DAYA ko Khany ko kahyey ga tou Wo Inkaar Nahi karay ga...

ACP moved Head in Yes, Here after 15 minutes, A call filled the Residence and Echoing in every ear as...

DAYA: RAHUL... RAHUL...

RAHUL moved inside in Hurry and Helped DAYA a little to wear T Shirt due to Swelling, RAHUL instantly look at Him and opened the Door with...

RAHUL: DAYA, Aao, sub Khany pr Wait kr rahy hain...

DAYA (rash): kyun kya Main nay kisi ko Wait karnay Ka Kaha hay... Nahi Khana Mujhy Khana wana...Sam...

ACP (coming with): kya hua RAHUL... Kyun Meray Betay ko Tang kr rahy ho... Haan... (clutch DAYA palm) Chalo Beta...

DAYA completely Melted and move with ACP who sat Him on Dinning Chair and occupied the Chair Next to Him...

DAYA throughly look at the Dinning which was filled with His Every Favorite Food item consisting from Veg to Non Veg to Desert to Junk Foods to Soft Drinks... He feels that after ages He saw KHANA in front of His Eyes which having a Watery Glaze now...

ACP on ABHIJEET Glance taken Out CHICKEN and puts it on DAYA Plate and placed a POORI on it and say DAYA...

ACP: chalo DAYA, Khana shroo karo...

DAYA makes a Bite of Chicken wrapped inside Poori and when about to eat, the Teary Glaze turned into a Tear drop which fell over His Plate and He instantly put it on Plate, dragged the Chair and run towards His room... He covered His Face and Crying Slowly...

All hands fell down Automatically... ACP backed His Chair and move again after seeing ABHIJEET who Left the Spot Immediately and went to Kitchen to Shed His Tears...

ACP sat Beside DAYA and Half Hugged Him... He Uncovered His Face but the Tears did not Soaked by His Facial Parts... ACP takes Him again while DAYA Wiped His Face from Towel...

DAYA sat again, look here and there and SALUNKHY Signal RAHUL to Call ABHIJEET as He knew the Focusing of those Searching Eyes, ABHIJEET came and ACP puts that Bite inside DAYA mouth who engaged in Eating Now...

Here ASHOKE after seeing DAYA went to Kitchen and discussed with ABHIJEET as...

ASHOKE: ABHIJEET... DAYA ko Neend ki Buht Zarurat hay aur Hum Neend mein hee Us Ka Check Up bhi kr sakty hain...

ABHIJEET: haan Tou...?

ASHOKE: DAYA, Kuch Specific leta hay Khany Kay baad...

ABHIJEET: haan Green Tea with Lemon...

ASHOKE: Theek hay Wohi Serve karo aur haan Ye Mila dena (taking out something from His Shirt pocket) Gari mein Kuch Heavy Dose reh gayii theen, kyunkay Sample ki Medicine Rakkhi hain...

ABHIJEET moved Head in Yes and Now Females completely Wiped the Table and presented Tea, Coffie, Cold Drink according to Demand... ABHIJEET told TAREEKA who made Tea for ACP Sir, RAJEEV and ASHOKE whereas ABHIJEET and RAHUL taking Meal at Kitchen Counter with...

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA, DAYA ko Green Tea bana do, Half Lemon bhi Sqeez Karna aur Ek Spoon Shugar aur haan (placing Tablet at Counter and whisper) Ye 2 Tablet daal dena... Wo So jaye ga... Theek...

TAREEKA Nodded while RAHUL praise by moving His Head in Yes as His Mouth Full with Eatables... Everyone Enjoyed their Tastes after presenting What they Want, DAYA picks His Mug when TAREEKA presenting a Tray to Him with Lower Eyes... He knew He can't Face the Girl or it takes Time to Him...

Here all are Chit Chatting but Nobody asked or discuss anything about DAYA Painful Days Once... They all Discussing about General Topics like Inflation Rates, reason behind Increasing Crime rate, Govt Policies etc...

DAYA listening with Siping and fell His Head at Sofa, Only ABHIJEET knew as He kept His Eyes Fixed on Him... after Confirming about DAYA Deep Sleep which Shocked other as His Mug still have Half filled, ABHIJEET Relaxes all while ASHOKE checked DAYA and then Signaled all Boys to take Him to His Room...

All took Him to His Room and laid Him on His Bed and after Laying Him, All feels Sad that DAYA Lost so much Weight as its not their First Experience to grab DAYA in Hands...

RAJEEV and ASHOKE checked Him with Some Instruments taking out from their Vehicles, ACP and SALUNKHY stand there while ABHIJEET, FREDDIE and RAHUL helped to Move DAYA body according to DR demands and after thorough check up, Both Dr conclude...

ASHOKE: Haddi tou achi khali Dislocate ho gayii hay (looking Previous X Ray reports given by ABHIJEET on His Demand and added) lagta hay Haddi pr koi Buri Chout bhi lagi hay... Haddi Bahar ki taraf aa gayii hay... Shayed Surgery ki zarurat paray, magar ye sub Ultra Sound aur X Ray karwany Kay baad he pata chaly ga...

RAJEEV (added): DAYA Kay Jism aur Chehray pr Zakhmun Kay Nishan kuch Aajeeb hain... Zakham Khusk hon gayey hain, matlab Purany hain, Us nay shayed kisi Dawa ya Laip Ka Istaimal kiya hay, kahein say HALDI Kay bhi Particals mily hain tou matlab REMEDY ki hay, Jis Ka Karan Dard mein Kumi hay aur Zakham Heal Up ho chukay hain...

ABHIJEET (worry tone): pr DAYA Kay Haathun aur Pair Kay Talwun mein kya hua hay..?

ASHOKE: Pair Kay Talway Sooj gayey hain, kyunkay Sole ki Skin kafi Moti hoti hay is Liyey keh Nahi sakty Kay (stop and added in low tone) Maara Gaya hay Sole pr (ABHIJEET eyes Fired) (ASHOKE added again) ya kisi aur cheez say Aisa hua ho... Wesay kisi cheez matlab Remedy ya kisi Khany ya Paani Ka bhi Asar ho Sakta hay...

RAJAEEV (asking tone): ABHIJEET Tum nay tou Kaha tha, DAYA Apni sub Medicines lay gaya hay... (ABHIJEET moved His head in Yes) (RAJEEV added) magar shayed Derh ya Do Maheenay say Us nay koi Dawa lii hee Nahi hay... (All Shocked, RAJEEV added) Us Kay BP aur Blood aur Beat level mein bhi Kuch Up Down Feel ho raha hay... Magar sub kuch Test aur Un kay Reports Aany Kay baad pata chaly ga aur Is kay Liyey DAYA ko Hospital lay Jana Zaruri hay...

ASHOKE: aur haan Jahan tak Hath ki Baat hay, GHATYA Qasam Ka Washing Powder Istaimal karnay say Aisa hua hay aur shayed wahan Ka Paani bhi Theek Nahi hay, ye dekh rahy ho na Safaid Dhabby (DAYA was without anything on His Upper body) (ASHOKE added) ye Kuwein Ka Paani ya Aisa Paani use karny say Hotay hain jin mein Gandhak ya Phasphorus ki matra Zyada ho...

ABHIJEET (painful tone): matlab Kuch bhi Normal Nahi hay...

ASHOKE: shayed, itnay Din bina Dawa Kay Istaimal Kay wo sirf Apni Will Power pr chala hay, magar haan Remedies nay Acha Buck up diya hay Usy...

ABHIJEET (to ACP): Sir, Main nay Aap ko DAYA Kay Bag Kay baary mein SMS kiya tha na, Aap nay poocha Nahi..?

SALUNKHY (replied in Slow tone): Us nay koi Jawab hee Nahi diya...

RAHUL (hurry): tou Hospital lay chalaty hain DAYA ko...

ABHIJEET (instantly): Nahi... (all look at him in Shock so He briefed) Wo Nahi jayey ga aur agr Him Zabardasti lay gayey tou Wo Bhag jayey ga... Is waqt Wo thora ACP Sir Kay Qabu mein hay, Warna Mujh say Us Ka Bartao sub dekh hee chukay hain...

RAJEEV (confuse): magar wo Tum say kyun is tarah Ka Bartao kr raha hay..?

ABHIJEET (low tone): kyunky Main hee Us Kay sub say zyada Qareeb Hun..

After that He moved Out, seeing MISHA slept on Couch, AMAN playing Game on His Cell, Females Gossiping after Cleaned the Dinning Hall while Rest Officers Discussing Reported Cases...

Here after His Exit from DAYA Room, Every One coming Out in Sadness especially after seeing DAYA like this... ABHIJEET understands that DAYA just Expel Out His Tears and Anger to some Extent through Beating Him, He really Hurt how much His BHAI bore and that DCP and INSPECTOR... His Blood started Boiling... ACP keenly Look at His Face, comes to Him and said...

ACP (near to Him): ABHIJEET, Abhi sirf DAYA Ka Socho...

ABHIJEET (complain tone): Sir Aap...

ACP (patting on His Shoulder with): Main sirf Apny Betun ko Us Dard say Bacha raha Hun, jo Un ko aur Na Tour day...

ABHIJEET lowered His Head, while ACP ordered all to Leave the Residence, VIVEK takes MISHA on His Lap while all One by One moving Out except ACP, SALUNKHY, RAHUL and AMAN... Here Both DOCTORS suggested to ABHIJEET and ACP as...

ASHOKE: ABHIJEET, jitni jaldi ho saky, DAYA ko Hospital mein Admit karwao...

RAJEEV: haan, wesay jo Dawa wo khata hay, Usy Khilao, Usi Dose mein...

ABHIJEET nodded in Yes and after All Departure by getting a Big Thank you from ABHIJEET, Rest seated and ACP said...

ACP: Filhal Sub log Shant raho... (to ABHIJEET) Khas kr Tum ABHIJEET... Behtar hay abhi DAYA Kay Samny Un Cheezun ko Repeat hee Nahi kiya jayey...

ABHIJEET: Sir, (rash) kya Us Kay Zakhm, Dard, Asnsoo dekh kr Main Khud pr Control rakh paon ga...

ACP (stressed): Rakhna ho ga ABHIJEET, rakhna hoga... Ek Kari Dhoop say nikl kr wo Tumhari Chaon tak Pohancha hay... Haan Waqt lagy ga kyunkay Usy Dhoop mein Jalny ki aadat ho gayii hay, magar SAYA, Saya hee hota hay...

SALUNKHY (added): jesay Wo Mazboot raha hay na ABHIJEET, Tumhein bhi rehna hay...

RAHUL (confuse tone): Mujhy tou ye Samjh Nahi aa raha Kay Wo ABHIJEET Kay sath Aisa kr kesay Sakta hay... Us nay Is Buri tarah ABHIJEET ko Dhakka maara, wahan Sub Kay Saamny aur Cheekha bhi...

ABHIJEET: shayed Wo Apna Dard is tarah Nikalna chahta ho...

RAHUL: agar Aisa hota tou wo Hum sub say Khicha rehta, magar sirf Tum say... Kuch Samjh nahi aa raha..,

ACP and SALUNKHY stand up, while ABHIJEET Shook Shoulders as He also Confused cz He finds that DAYA Insulted His Emotions rather Neglecting the Other presence which was Unacceptable from His side...

DAYA Calmly Slept whole Night, either AMAN and RAHUL rest at Guest room while ABHIJEET just strolling at DAYA room to get out the detail of DAYA Rash Outbursts only over Him...

Morning comes, DAYA opened His eyes and finds a Smily Face, His Gesture suddenly changed, Emotions Sudden Sparked... He seated in Jerk with a Painful AHHh... ABHIJEET who wanted to tell Him to be Careful got a Big Punch on His Face with a Loud Scream...

DAYA (loud): RAHUL, RAHUL.. (RAHUL coming inside saw ABHIJEET placed His Palm over His Cheek in Shock, while DAYA Growl) kya Bakwass hay ye... Haan... Nikalo Isy (signaling ABHIJEET) Meray Kamray say... jaldi...

RAHUL stand in Complete Stunnd mode while ABHIJEET Heart Pinch a lot after hearing ISYrather BOSS or ABHI or ABHIJEET... RAHUL Angry so Scold...

RAHUL (scold): Dimagh Saheh hay Tumhara DAYA... Kis Kay baary mein Aisa keh rahy ho... Jaantay ho na...

DAYA (angry): haan sub jaanta Hun... (chewing tone) Kaun kya hay... Aur Tumhein (pressing teeth) Samajh Nahi aayii na Meri baat.. (He grabs ABHIJEET arm and throw Him Out from His room with) yahan dubara Qadam Nahi rakhna...

ABHIJEET feeling Extreme Insult as AMAN also looking the Scene from Lounge in Shock, He Confronted DAYA...

ABHIJEET (rash confrontation): kyun, kyun Nahi rakkhun Qadam...

DAYA (harsh): kyunkay Main keh raha hun ye, Ye Mera Room hay, aur Tumhara (signaling finger) Yahan aana Mana hay...

ABHIJEET (teasing): Ohhh acha, tou Kamra hee kyun... DIL say bhi Niakl do...

DAYA (pushed Him and now both at Lounge): wahan say tou Kub Ka Nikal diya hay... (ABHIJEET Hurt Badly) (DAYA in Teary tone) Jub Pukar ki Ihmeyet Nahi tou Rakhnay Ka Faida...

RAHUL (rash): DAYA, Badtameezi ki Had Hoti hay... samjhy... ABHIJEET ki Narmi Ka Faida Mut Uthao...

DAYA (rash): Badtameezi ki Had... Main bataon Tumhein Badtameezi ki Had kya hoti hay.. (Beat ABHIJEET by Pushing) Jub Insan Ceekhta reh jata hay aur koi Aata Nahi.. Wo hoti hay Badtameezi ki Had.. (still Pushing Hardly to ABHIJEET) Jub Wo Akela reh jata hay, Apnun Kay Hotay huay...

Here Door Bell Rings, AMAN instantly Opened the Door as Now He was Scaring a lot... ACP Sir, SALUNKHY Sir, RAJAT, SACHIN, FREDDIE and VIVEK entered just to Meet DAYA first and then Prepare Him about getting Treatment, but the Scene was Weird Enough as the Voice already coming Outside... DAYA cant Focusing on anything... He Enaged in...

DAYA (angry tone): Wo hoti hay Badtameezi ki Had... jub koi Ek Niwala (His voice melted and He started Crying either His Hand still Pushing ABHIJEET) Wo hoti hay Badtameezi ki Had aur jub koi Khauff say Bachany...

ABHIJEET who was in Painful Shell after grasping Not the Word but pain, Hurt and Tears from Every Word of His Bhai, got the Point of that Anger in a Bit... He said...

ABHIJEET (just click): DAYA... baat Suno..

He grabs His Hands as He understands that DAYA can't Imagine that NO BODY from Team Visited Him in these THREE Months Once although in Disguise especially ABHIJEET, RAHUL also grabs DAYA... ABHIJEET know it's the Best time to Clear it as after this it's Difficult... ABHIJEET said in Hurry...

ABHIJEET: Nahi, DAYA, Hum aatay pr Hum nay HQ say Demand ki thi...Kay Hum is Shart pr TUJH say Koi Raabta Nahi rakkhein gay jub HQ ki kisi File mein Tera koi Naam Nahi hoga, Koi Suspension Order, koi Punishment Order, kisi Ka bhi Nahi... (coming close to him) Sach DAYA, Main nay Is Memory Loss Kay Hawaly say Sub say Buht Teer Khayey hain, Aaj bhi Us ki Cubhan Hr kisi Plan mein kahein an Kahein say Sunnay ko Milti hay... Ek Dard jisy Meray Liyey Tana bana diya Gaya hay... (trying to Relax him by saying in Tears) Hum sub Tujhy Us say Nikalna chahty thy (wipes DAYA tears) Sach DAYA, ab koi Tujhy GHADDAR Nahi Kahy ga. Is Wajah say Hum mein Say koi wahan Nahi..

DAYA (pushed Him with Loud Cry): Pr Tum kyun Nahi aaye.. Tum... (He moved and Dragged Him till the Wall and say after Punching on His Chest as) Main nay kitni Aawazein dein... (DAYA Crying Badly, ABHIJEET and all have Tears in Eyes, DAYA engaged) Tum Nahi aayey... mujhy itni Bhook bhi lagi thi... (His voice little Diminishing) (ABHIJEET sat on Floor with Him) (DAYA in Rash) Mujhy itna Darr bhi laga... Main Kitna Ceekha (slap Him) pr Tum Nahi aayey Boss... (ABHIJEET feels a Sooth after Heaing this Teary BOSS) Tum nay Mujhy Akela Chor diya na... (engage in tears as His Face over ABHIJEET chest) bola tha kay DAYA Main kabhi Tujhy Nahi chorun ga... Pr Chor diya na... aur Maafi bhi Nahi di na... Tum ko aana tha na... aana tha na Yaar... main nay Buht Intaizaar...

ABHIJEET wrapped Him around His Left hand and from His Right Hand Weaving on His Hairs with...

ABHIJEET (soft and loving tone): haan ABHI Bilkul Ganda hay na, (DAYA say HMMM) (ABHIJEET enagage) Apnay DAYA Ka Khayal Nahi rakkha, Kuch Socha Nahi Kay DAYA ko Kitna Darr lagy ga.. (DAYA unintentionally grab His Shirt more tight) (ABHIJEET again) DAYA ko Bilkul Akela Chor Diya...

ACP sat on His Knees in front on Both and Signal AMAN to give Towel to Him... AMAN picked Towel from DAYA room and give it to Him, who with Care wrapped ABHIJEET Left Hand which was placed over DAYA back to Protect More Bleeding as in DAYA Pushing and Beating, ABHIJEET Wrist Hurt Badly...

DAYA feeling Soothing, the Healing of His Heart and Soul Started, He feels that He drained all His Pain, Hurt, Insult, Tears, Embarrassment, Scare, Anger with those Soft Pores, ABHIJEET Fingers Circular Movement gives Him the New Hope... yes The Hope which was Misssing...

DAYA (in Soggy tone): aur DAYA tou Pyara Baccha hy na... kisi ko Tang bhi Nahi krta aur Shaitani bhi Nahi krta...

ABHIJEET (wet tone): Bilkul DAYA tou Sub say Pyara Baccha hay, Ek dam Masoom sa, ye tou ABHI Shaitani krta hay... hain na... (DAYA moved Head in Yes, Tears still Flowing from every Eyes) (ABHIJEET added) ABHI ko tou Dr Kay pass bhej dena chahyey... Jub wo ABHI ko Bara wala Injection lagay ga na tou Maza aayey ga...

A Smile Flashed over DAYA Lips, He still moving His Head in Yes meant He likes the Punishment for ABHI...

All Officers really in Weird Phase, it's Unbelievable as it's not looking like ABHIJEET Consoling to a Mature Cop but Relaxing a Small Kid which Confuses them, while ABHIJEET Mind goes Back and He Reminds...

DR: any History..?

ABHIJEET: basically Dr, ye Batana Mushkil hay (look at ACP, who nodded so He added) darasal DAYA Ka Bachpan Orphanage mein Guzra hay... Hum poori tarah tou keh Nahi sakty, magar haan kuch Cases mein bhi Usy Drugs dii gayii hain, Tabhi shayed Aap ko feel hua ho Kay Us kay Blood mein Drugs ki History milti hay...

ACP (adds): Humaray yahan Kay 80% Orphanage Ka Haal tou Aap Jaantay hee hain Dr (Dr Nodded in Yes) (ACP continued) ab wahan kya hua ya Bacchun Kay sath hota hay, Janna tou buht Difficult hay aur Phir DAYA nay Kabhi in sub ko kisi say bhi Share Nahi kiya..

DR: haan Main Samjh Sakta hun... Pr is Drug Treatment Kay Session mein ye baat Samny aayii hay kay wo Akely Honay ya rehnay say Darta hay aur Bachpan Kay kisi Buray pal ki Yaad yehi Dar hay... Shayed Us ki Teacher ya kisi Baray ny Usy Saza dii ho aur phir...

ABHIJEET (confuse so ask): magar Dr, DAYA aadi hay Akelay rehnay Ka... Kitni baar wo Mission pr Akela gaya hay... Kidnap hua hay...

DR: Bilkul Saheh... Magar Hope Kay sath... Matlab Usy Umeed thi kay Meri Team Mujhy Nikal lay gi ya koi hay jo Mujhy Bacha lay ga... Magar Aisa Akela rehna Jahan Us Kay ander Hope Khatam ho jayey ya Toot jayey Usy phir say Usi Darr ki Kefiyet mein lay jayey ga...

Mera Experience kehta hay Kay DAYA Kay sath Aisa koi waqiya 9-12 saal ki Umer Kay ander hua hay... is Umer mein Bacchay Baray ho rahy Hotay hain, Hormone Secretaion mein bhi Farq aata hay jis ki wajah say ek dam say Un Kay Behaviour mein Change aata hay Emotions Samit... Jesay Is age mein LARKY Rona Kum kr detay hain aur Larkiyun Ka Barh jaa hay... Ye sub EK Natural Process Ka Hissa hota hay...

(after a minute) jub kabhi Us Kay ander ye Ihsasa Jaga Kay Us ki Umeed Kho gayii hay ya Kho Rahi hay, wo Usi khauff Kay Dairay mein Phanse jayey ga... Usy Kuradyey mut, Poochyey Nhai... Haan kabhi Aisa ho tou Usy Deal Karna hay Bacchun jesa... Kyunkay Khauff Usy Bachpan Ka hay, Baray hony pr Nahi... Lafzun Ka Chunao behtar karyey ga, jesay Bacchy Kehtay hain na Kay Main Ganda Nahi, aur Choti Moti Sazaein... Kyunkay wo Us waqt Usi Lamhy mein Qaid hoga, Bachapan mein kuch ho na ho... Us Kay Pass Hope Nahi hogi... Isi Liyey is Khauff nay Us Kay ander Dera Jama liya hay... aur ab bhi Jahan Jahan Umeed ki Kami hogi... Ye Khauff Usy Jaker lay ga...

ABHIJEET (current): ABHI ko tou Kaan pakar Kay MURGHA bana dena chahyey...

DAYA (laughing and say): haan haan Bilkul...

All Smiles, DUO still on Same Positions, Here ACP Feels that Bleeding was Done Much so say in Low Tone...

ACP (low tone): aur DAYA ko tou Dhairun Gifts bhi Milnay chahyey...

DAYA (opening eyes, look at Him and say): Sach...

ACP Nodded in Yes and Pat on His Cheek, A Glowing Spark fills Sooth to Every Heart when Flashing to TRIO lips... DAYA get up like a Kid and told as...

DAYA (happy tone): Main bhi Aap Logun Kay Liyey Gifts laaya Hun...

SALUNKHY (smiles): tou Lao...

DAYA rushed towards Room... ABHIJEET Look at His Both Palm with Down Head, ACP placed His Palm over them and say...

ACP: bus ABHIJEET, ye Chapter yahin Close... Usy Takleef say bachana chahty ho tou Khud ko koi Takleef mut do...

He Pressed His Palms and ABHIJEET eyes fell some Precious Tears... DAYA came out, ABHIJEET instantly Wipe and Stand up with help of Wall... DAYA giving all this Letters with...

DAYA (with shy): wo... Ye Main nay sub ko Letters likhy thy...

RAHUL (making Scene Lighter as): ahannn... Love Letter...

A Grin glow the Face of that Bear, who was looking at ABHIJEET Injured Wrist which was Bandaging by RAJAT on ACP Order as...

DAYA (tense): ye kya hua Boss...?

ABHIJEET: kuch Nahi, abhi Uthtay samy Table say lug Gaya, thori sii Chout hay...

DAYA: Lao Main krta Hun...

RAJAT gives Him Space and DAYA Wrapped the Bandages with asking some Queries...

DAYA: aur Tum logun nay Meray Liyey Gift Nahi liya...

RAJAT: Sir, liya hay na...

RAHUL (wink RAJAT and added): pr wo Tum ko Chal kr dekhna paray ga...

DAYA (shocked and Curious): kya itna Bara hay...

RAHUL: ye tou bhae, Chal kr hee Pata chaly ga...

DAYA (clutch ABHIJEET palm): Chalo... (to ACP) Sir Aap bhi chalein gay na...

ACP Nodded in Yes and all Officers moved towards that Place, DAYA sat with ABHIJEET this time... On way, when Quillas entered and Salty Water Weaving DAYA hairs, He was at Peak of Happiness...

Vehicles Stopped and all coming Out either it's Sunny Day and Less Crowded but SEA is SEA... nothing be taken out from its FANTASY... RAHUL signaled DAYA who was taking Off His Chappal and Folded His jeans as...

RAHUL: ye hay Tumhara Gift... Dekho Hum nay Ro Ro kr Kitna Bhar diya hay...

FREDDIE (innocence): haan kitna Bara ho gaya hay na...

DAYA and all started Laughing while AMAN takes Him ahead with ABHIJEET Permission, who said to ACP in Low Tone...

ABHIJEET: Sir, aakhir CHITROLY Jeet hee Gaya...

ACP (tough tone): Bekaar ki Baatein mut karo ABHIJEET, Tum Jaantay ho Hum kya Karen gay Usy 4 Din Kay Liyey Susend Karwa Kay... Haan... aur Kis Base pr, wo DCP hay, Ek Constable ko Maar bhi Sakta hay aur Marwa bhi... Aur Tum kaho gay Reason, wo koi bhi Jhoota Ilazaam lagwa day ga... Gaon walun ko Ragar kr Apni Marzi Ka Biyaan Dilwa day ga... Aur phir who Ek na khatam Honay wala Silila...

SALUNKHY: haan ABHIJEET, Behtar hay Jo hua Usy chor kr Aaagy Barha jayey...

ABHIJEET (sad): yani Dard ko Saha jayey... Us Ka Ilaj Nahi kiya jayey...

ACP (signaled towards DAYA): kya ye Dard, Us Ilaj say Behtar Nahi hay ABHIJEET.. Dard ko Saho Nahi, Magar Barhao bhi Mut... Tumhara Ek Qadam, DAYA ko 10 Qadam peechy kr day ga... Jaantay ho na... Us nay kisi ko Nahi Pukara pr sirf Tumhein... kya Ye Dard Khubsurat Nahi... Us nay Intaizar kiya tou sirf Tumhara... kya ye Dard Behtar Nahi...

SALUNKHY (added): haan ABHIJEET, Waqt do... Khud ko bhi... Tumhein malum hay Zakahm Bhartay hain pr haan waqt kay sath aur yaad rakkho jub tak Un ko Phir say Cheera Nhai jayey... Wo takleef Nahi detay... kal TAREEKA nay Khud Mujh say Poocha DAYA kay baary mein... Khud hee Chal kr aayii na Wo... kyunkay Hum nay Waqt diya... Us ki Takleef ko Cheera Nhai... Koi Naya Ghao dena ka Socha Nahi...

ACP: isi tarah VIVEK ko dekho... Kal say Us kay Rawayyey mein Duty Nahi... Muhabbat hay... Khichao nahi... Apnayet hay... (stand beside Him and half hugged Him with) Mujhy malum hay Mera ye Beta jazbati hay, Gussay wala hay... pr Main ye bhi achy say jaanta hun kay wo Samjhdhaar bhi hay... (an Embarrasing Smile Glows ABHIJEET face) (ACP added after rubbing His arm) Jao Dekho DAYA Tumhein Bula raha hy...

ABHIJEET moved there with a New Lesson as DAYA calling Him through Hands moving and OLDIE DUO Smiles that they Save Both Deary Dudes again... After Some Chilling Time, they Back to Residence while DAYA fall in a Sound Sleep on way... While RAHUL and AMAN went to their House and Officers Leaving except ABHIJEET...

Next Morning, DAYA came inside ABHIJEET room and Wakes Him with Excitment...

DAYA: Chalo Boss, jaldi say Utha jao... bureau Jana hay na... meray Kapray Iron...

ABHIEET look at Wall Clock and comes to Shock as its 4 AM, He looked at DAYA and said after standing...

ABHIJEET: Time dekha hay DAYA... 4 Bajay hain abhi... Raat hay aur Tum Uth kyun...

DAYA (casual Interrupts): Main wahan itnay Bajay he Uthta...

ABHIJEET (scold): ye wahan Nahi hay DAYA... Ye Tumhara Ghar hay... Mumbai mein ho Tum aur Yahan... (He realized after seeing DAYA Shock Expressions so Hugged Him with) DAYA abhi So jao, Theek... Main Tum ko Jaga dun ga, jub Jana hoga...

DAYA moved Head in Yes and ABHIJEET Brings Him to His room, Lay down Him and again reminds to Sleep and went to His room... DAYA after 10 minutes again Seated and Murmur...

DAYA: Aadat ho gayii hay Is Time Jaagnay ki... Ab kya Karun... (He got His IPad) chalo dekhta Hun Kay AMAN nay kya daala hay NAYA...

He checked it and found NFS Newer Version so start to Play it, He was so Involved in Playing after moving Level to Level so said in Excitement after glancing at Clock struck at 8:15 AM with...

DAYA (moving here and there with IPAD as): chalo chalo... Bhago... jaldi (telling this to car) abhi jaag Gaya na Kharos Boss tou Class lay lay ga Meri...

ABHIJEET entering inside His Room with this... IPAD slipped from DAYA hands on Bed and He heard the Teasing tone of His BHAI as...

ABHIJEET (tease): Kharos Boss aa jayey ga Nahi, aa Gaya hay... Chalo Break fast Kr lo... (DAYA look at Him in Question who added) Kapray rehny do... Bus aisay hee chalo, Main 20 Minute mein Tum ko Wapis Ghar Chor jaon ga aur Dophair mein VIVEK aur FREDDIE aa kr Tumhein Hospital lay jayein gay...(DAYA makes sad face) (ABHIJEET again) Main wahein Milun ga Tum ko...

DAYA stand up and taking Breakfast, both Locked Residence and reached Bureau... FREDDIE who was coming Downwards stunned to See DAYA stepping Out from ABHIJEET Jeep... He Rushed and Hugged DAYA Tightly while ABHIJEET said after getting Ringer of His Cell as...

ABHIJEET: FREDDIE, DAYA ko Ooper lay jao, Main Aata Hun...

DAYA moved with FREDDIE and when stepped inside the Bureau, Everyone Astonished... All Started Clapping with Smiles while a Lovely Call Raise How much Happiness inside DAYA heart as First time He heard that Call so Openly...

ACP (loving call): Arry Mera Beta aaya hay...

DAYA Smiles from Ear to Ear, ACP takes Him, He tried to Sit on His Desk Chair while ACP asks...

ACP: Ghar mein Aaram krna tha na DAYA...

DAYA: Sir, Main Bureau ko Buht Miss kr raha tha...

ACP feeling His Uncomfortability in that Desk Chair so takes Him inside His Cabin with Ease... ABHIJEET entered and asked about DAYA as...

ABHIJEET: Ain... DAYA kahan hay..?

VINEET: Sir, ACP Sir Kay Cabin mein...

ABHIJEET nodded, moved ahead, after knocking pushed the Door and Freezed at His Spot...

DAYA slept over Cabin Table in Head Down mode, ACP Sir reading a File with Small Book Lamp while His Right Hand continuously weaving in DAYA Hairs, Cabin Lights were Off to give a Completely Sleepy Atmosphere...

A Pure Smiles Flash on ABHIJEET Lips as He saw a Perfect Scene where a Father takes Extreme Care about His Son Deep and Peaceful Sleep...!!!

Some Clearification:

NEEME already discuss this Plot with Me this Year FEBRUARY but I was Denied as I was fed up to Write on DAYA Sir at that Time... She completely Back Off and did not Raise this Issue then again in September, when I was going thought some of My Word Documents, I got that Plot so want to Write as NEEME was Not happy as after My Rejection, She completely Lost Her Interest and Zeal so this was NOT THE FINAL PRODUCT according to Her Wish as She Forgot so many thing because of My Step...

When I started this Story Series, I talked to SHREELA (K.D) for Her Law Expertise and She told Me that there would be an IPC Section and Helping any Criminal to Runm Waay Him from Jail comes in Criminal Offence and there is a Punishment for this...😉

I started the Story which U all Like or might be I said LOVE IT, as its really a Nice Change for Me to Write Some Negitive after Game Over Series where I was Engulfed in KUNAL character and here according to NEEME Plot my Mind Worked in 2 Aspects, One Negitive as being DAYA Sir and another Positive as being Team...😈

I tried to present DAYA Sir in New Avtar as NEEME Plot because its Her Wish to Presents DAYA Sir like this and BAD More than that and I just tried to gives WORDS to Her Characterization, Plot, Scenes, Sequences, Frames and all...😃

After the Whole the SAZA part was just My thought as Now I did not find any Punishment Concept in CID or mostly in No crime Thrillers, I think in Security Forces, Dicipline was the Basic Ingredient so I applied that SAZA part and obviously JAGYA FARA was DAYA Sir Open Criminal Offence when He Showed HIMSELF on Camera so to Justify the Punishment, I wrote these Two Chapters on My Behalf but with Help of NEEME...😳

I took some 2/3 Ideas like in Part 4 when DAYA Sir rehearsed that Bank Robbery with Wooden Boxes from AANKHEIN (indian movie) and that College Bus Idea was taken from DARK NIGHT (English movie) rather I cleared that Only using College Bus and wooden Boxes, Nothing More than That...😉

I used so many Episodes as ABHIJEET KA INTEQAM, MOUSE TRAP and Others and Some of My Stories as TRUTH BEHIND LIES, DEADLY HERB etc...😊

I really Enjoyed after Long time a Character yes DAYA Sir as BAD MAN... I tried to presented Gradual Changing in His Habit, Languages, Laugh but Not in His NATURE...😉😉

I used His Singing or Humming Nature just to Relax His Mind and Anger in that Era as well after being Punished too...

TAREEKA Kidnapped was Not Accepted by Some Readers but here NEEME just want to Presented that What Team did not expected from DAYA Sir, He did that just to Make Himself a COMPLETE BAD MAN...

I am just trying, only... all and all its NEEME Idea, Plot and Excillent Ability to Use My Brain and excel it with Her Skills...👏⭐️👏

I am really Thankful to DEMONSTAR aka RAVI wjo made that Title Siggie...👏👏

Again Thank You so much to all Active and Silent Readers and especially those who are always at My Back as My Priceless Feedbacker and NEEME cz without HER, GD is Not would be GD/Dada..!!!🤗

Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago

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