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Lovely Ending👏👍🏼, Lovely Emotions⭐️ APP Dono ne tu Kamal ker dia 👏 WELLDONE❤️🤗

Part 3

Wow wow wow.. Neeme di and GD awesome part.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Daya sir totally changed. 😲 Never saw him in negative so it was shocking.😲
Abhijeet sir was lovely. 👏A good challenge for all Specially Abhi sir and ACP sir. 👏
At the end Abhijeet back with bang,⭐️ 👏
super, mindblowing...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏

Can't wait for the next. Will read them soon.

🤗 🤗 😃

Haaann... it's the perfect ending... that is what I was wanting to read since long... a really great chapter.. Especially loved the way how the team came to take back Daya. The whole scene of Daya beating that inspector was really fantastic.. I was like.. Aur maro aur maroo😆
The scene where Abhijeet hold Daya's hand signature was really superb... can't describe the feelings I got after reading that part.
But that whole well scene was really heart breaking... I was crying the whole way. That was really really cruel.. and that hunger part was out of this world. I can't write my feeling when I read that letter part... that was really heartening. Sb kuch bht dardnaak that bhaijaan... how can this world be so cruel..😭
The whole ending or say the whole part where Daya came back home was really touching.. The way Daya didn't give any lift to Abhijeet was understandable. And aww how Abhijeet calm him down.. that was really cute... I really loved that.. especailly that Abhijeet ki pitai honi chahye and Daya to accha baccha h na... hahah... awww... so cute..
I really loved the bonding you showed between Daya, Abhijeet and ACP..!! really good and applaudable. 👏
and loved the whole ending.
Thanks to both of you for writing this great chapter and the whole story.
Hugs to both of you.

ok...at last a rise of new bigining 😊 ...Daya sir compeleted the tough challenge 😃 ...evry thing is fine now...i really luv this combine project ❤️ ...u both r awesome Dada n Neeme 👏 👍🏼

Part : 4

GD and Neeme dh this part was totally Fabulous, fantastic...⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
You both are Rocking...!!! 👏 👏 👏
Daya sir's new avatar was lovely and amazing,👏 Brilliant plan.⭐️ 👏
This chapter was again mind blowing.⭐️ 👏
Now going to read next part.🤗 😃

Finally manage time to read the last two parts in a hurry. And right now I just want to hang DCP CHITROLE & INSPECTOR QAMAT untill death 😡😡😡.. They are just..NO COMMENTS 😡😡😡.. Aww my DAYA Sir.. So brutally tortured both physically and mentally.. I too agree with Snehal di.. Is this part your brain child Dada ? Then I will not hang you only because I really don't want to lose my drug supplier. Jokes apart, you just teared my heart brutally and shattered me by portraying Daya sir in such a condition.. That letter mentioning Mujhe Bhukh Lagi hai.. Just heartbreaking..heart wrenching.. Truly Dada and Neeme di this time I am really hurt. I didn't expect this from you two and not at all satisfied with the fact that both DCP and his inspector left unhurt.. If not officially then unofficially they should get the taste of their own medicine.. Why didn't the villagers get doubt once when the girl was not actually dumb ? Iss baar sachchi me aap se bohot naraz hoon main.. These things wrap me in a shell of utter grief, pain and tears. ACP sir really did a fabulous job this time as a father.. The way he took care of his two sons..is just outstanding.. And the last line...ahh what a soothing effect it gives to the reader's heart and mind may be you two yourselves can't understand even after writing.. Chalo bas isi ek line ke liye maaf kar diya, nahi toh... And Finally take many many bows for such amazing masterpiece.. Its best piece of work till now from you two.. Simply superb, fantastic, fabulous, awesome, marvellous, excellent work.. Love each bit of the whole series except the upper mentioned part.. Just at that point I am completely disappointed (extremely sorry if other readers are hurt on my comment).. A huge round of applause for both of you Dada and Neeme di..and the biggest tighest huggy to you two.. Thank you so so much for the classic 🤗🤗🤗.

Part 5 :

This part was amazing. Finally the suspense out.⭐️👏
DUO hurted. 😭 Hope Daya sir will back soon.👍🏼

The last part was so emotional...👏

Thank you for this great masterpiece.⭐️ ⭐️👏

Last part

amazing plot, 👏dialogues 👏 and u both amazingly presented it. ⭐️ 👏 👏
I loved it ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏
It was so emotional...⭐️ 👏
U say it was last part par Suspense end tak barkar hai...😉

Neeme di and GD you two are
awesome ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Ohhh BH You made me cry with this... Daya sir ki woh halath... uff I can't even imagine...

I am just crying from start till end when Daya hit Abhijeet and saying that Battamiji ke dialog... Most touchi part is The letter wrote by Daya when he is feeling hungry...

The way he shown his anger on Abhijeet uff so much realistic... Thanks you did not make all things goddi goodi just after they meat in that Shaitan Choiki...

But you made me smile with the soo thing words of abhijeet... when he is handling his younger brother not a cop... Abhi ganda baccha hai... uff what a sweet dialog...

I found ACP sir totally different... the way I always imagine him...

the last scene in ACP sir's cabin... wow... jaan dal di aane iss story me BH...

Its dilse likhi story dil ko chu gayi...

👏

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Awesome ending. So emotional. Daya sir ki wo halat dekh kar to rona agya tha 😔 par jais Abhi sir ne unko handle ki wo kafi touchy tha. Bt most beautiful scene which i lovd d most ws last scene. ACP sir taking care of his son. CID team is really a family, onscreen n offsceen n in our imagination, evrywhr.