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Originally posted by: pappais

Awesome story GD👏

i loved each and every moment of the story😊

Originally posted by: Soni.

First of alll a big big sorry for commenting late for Why are you so serious. Coming back to the story all I can say is that it what a classic masterpiece GD. Tumhe hume heart attack dene ka irada tha kya. Kya kya karwaya mere bechare Abhi sir se. Poor guy. Birthday ke din itni bhagdor. Birthday midnight ko celebrate karna chate the aur ache se gift lena chate the lekin kya diwadiya. The story was fast paced, very well written. Kya mast birthday gift di hai Daya sir ne Abhi sir ko. After the plan was revealed it was nice to the Involvement of Acp sir as voice of master mind made it a nice, warm touch. Loved Abhi sir's comment with naughtiness after knowing Daya sir's fullproof plan. The dialogues were mast yaar. It was a super duper hit story Abhi sir's talk to Daya sir at the end was very heart touching and lovely that they wont separate again aur end mai phir se wohi purana gift naya cell and titan ke watch that scene was very cute. You describe each and every scene so well GD that I can see all in mind's eye. It was one of my favourite stories by you GD. Keep writing and keep entertaining

Originally posted by: duoa

wow GD kamal karte o yaar

reality that u portrayed is really bitter and painful but definitely its happening around us so we can not denie it

the way u portrayed baby lying on garbage was really painful and i was really feeling helpless😭

hats off 2 u for writing such lovely stories 👏

plz do update soon m anxiously waiting for next part

Originally posted by: snehal.

And i cried and cried and cried.. As you promised me GD.. I so emphathize with abhijeet now.. Taking right decision though it is unpopular and paying for it very dearly.. Please say you are going to continue this soon and till then no more reviews from me as i can't take my mind to other things than tears 😭

Originally posted by: nsapo

Wooow! soo cool...I dint finish yet but its realistic😃

Originally posted by: _Mayonnaise_

Your stories always has that crux which every perfect story has, Dada😊

The scenes, the dialogs, the emotion kept me just aback!!😲

Wonderfully written, the words carving out at the right moment and the pen in hands of such a wonderful person!!!!!!

Wish I could experience it in flesh...

My mom was constantly irritating me ki khaana kha lo😡, and I was like ruko let me finish with the story😃😆

Pls post the continuing part soon...👍🏼

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

The theme's mind blowing bhaijaan. You wrote it in a realistic way.
The starting part took my heartbeats with it. Seriously my heart beats increased at the starting of this story.
Can't tell you how much this affected me. I am reading such type of stuff for the first time in my life.
Never expected this much cruelity from anyone but a mother.
The name selection ceremony was just wow. I too was shoked when Daya said Nakul out of the blue. It was really impressive. And then the bonding between all of them.
And the the ending part was mind blowing. Rahul's expressions were somewhat right but Abhijeet and ACP were correct on their decisions as well.
Well it's really hard to send your loved ones away from you when you see them growing with your own eyes.When you too are living with them. But Bhai has to understand this.
And what he said after coming out from coma was superb. I was like awww the whole time as how he was telling Badey bhai in an indirect way.
But the last paragraph took my heart with it. Ab shuru hui lalai... 😆
Now I just can't wait to know how Badey bhai will handle the situation.
Aur haan.. Forgot to mention pyaar wali baat.. Aww how innocently Bhai asked the doc.. That was really cute.

First i was quite confused with the title... ke abhi Dna wala case aya aur bhaijaan bhi dna story le kr aa gaye.. 😆
but when I get to know the actual reason behind this I was stunned.. that's quite impressive and seems quite promising.
I really appreciate your efforts bhaijaan.. as how you moulded a quite common issue into this story and plus not to mention the cruelity of this society. May God bless us.

Bht ho gaya.. My biggest review uptil now. I think I covered everything. Ab jaldi se post the next part as soon as possible.

Awesome Dada👍🏼...so emotional story😭...very nice...

wow di , this was amazing.
it was so heart touching
and the issue u wrote on really is a sad reality.
but your story was great !
pata nai kyun , jab bhi aap ki story padhti hun ankhein khud bakhud nam ho jati hai :)
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