Hr Zulm...!(New Experimental VM @PG 139) - Page 105

Originally posted by: misha.as

will read it soon...

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

dada abhi aap bhi waiting mein ho...😉

sorry..😳

main thode dino mein padhti hun..

Originally posted by: beena.thomas

Firstly,Thankyou very much for the story GD. 😃

awww, Thank you to U that u read it...😳😳

Commendable work.Well written. 👏 ⭐️

😲😲😲, arry kisi aur ki tou Story nahi parh li...😉😆😆

The introduction with Duo casual conversations and later their conversation about their work;Abhijeet's concern about how Rajat and Sachin would be able to handle their pending work and Daya's responses has been very nicely portrayed. ⭐️

Yes its Difficult for Me to Handle Many aspect of cases side by side😆... I wrote that Introduction at Last Moment...😉😆😆

Liked the next part where ACP was giving instructions to Rajat,Sachin and Freddy about the work they were to handle.Very nicely described. 👏 👏

Thank You...😳😳

The part of how Rajat and Sachin coordinated with Abhijeet and Daya for the completion of the pending case is very nice.⭐️

Suspense na...😆😆😆

Liked the manner in which you started the description of the mission with the scene at the Bar,
ACP sir's accident which was a part of their plan for the mission,other mission related scenes and also simultaneously alongwith it, described how Rajat and Sachin were going about their work with guidance from Abhijeet and Daya.Abhijeet's conversation with Rajat has been well written.Rajat informing him about Varun and Micky,Abhijeet's response when Rajat says that Micky would soon die because of his actions and the undeliberate reaction of Abhijeet and then his statement to clarify it has been very beautifully portrayed. ⭐️

🤣 I broke laugh when wrote that Quick and undelibrate Reply of ABHIJEET Sir...😉😉

a Big Thank You to U...🤗

Ufff POPAT turning Reddd...😳

You have very nicely written the whole mission part.Really liked the way in which you have described each scene.👏

awww, Thank you either I felt it little Hurry...😆😆😆

Liked all Duo scenes and their interactions in the disguise of Varun and Mickey,the manner in they helped and saved each others life when in difficulty. 👏 ⭐️

Thank You again...🤗

OML! POPAT Red Color turning His Pillow also in Red...😳😳😳

Liked the hospital scene of DUO with ACP sir and the team.👏 ⭐️

WWE...😉😆😆

Loved all the Duo scenes and the ending scenes between Duo and also their respective care, concern and self thoughts about each other.Their friendship has been very nicely portrayed.Really well written.⭐️

awww, a Big Thank You...😳🤗

Thanks a lot once again GD, for your efforts in writing this awesome story.😊

awww, now POPAT turn complete Red...☺️

Ufff, koi KAT ko Bulao...😆😆😆

a Big Big Thank you to U baccha...🤗🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

An Announcement for GD from KKKLOVEU...😈

Aap Abhi QUE mein hain...😆

I dunt want that ppl read it by Force...

just Relaxing U all from Burden of My Bulky PM's Baccha...😆

Thank You so much...😳😳