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Will read a bit later GD...

Story is really nicely written dear.. 👏

First of all, I beg your pardon for commenting so late on "Catch Me If You Can"

DADA I WILL READ UR STORY AFTREWARD

Firstly,Thankyou very much for the story GD. 😃

Commendable work.Well written. 👏 ⭐️

The introduction with Duo casual conversations and later their conversation about their work;Abhijeet's concern about how Rajat and Sachin would be able to handle their pending work and Daya's responses has been very nicely portrayed. ⭐️
Liked the next part where ACP was giving instructions to Rajat,Sachin and Freddy about the work they were to handle.Very nicely described. 👏 👏

The part of how Rajat and Sachin coordinated with Abhijeet and Daya for the completion of the pending case is very nice.⭐️
Liked the manner in which you started the description of the mission with the scene at the Bar,
ACP sir's accident which was a part of their plan for the mission,other mission related scenes and also simultaneously alongwith it, described how Rajat and Sachin were going about their work
with guidance from Abhijeet and Daya.Abhijeet's conversation with Rajat has been well written.Rajat informing him about Varun and Micky,Abhijeet's response when Rajat says that Micky would soon die because of his actions and the undeliberate reaction of Abhijeet and then his statement to clarify it has been very beautifully portrayed. ⭐️
You have very nicely written the whole mission part.Really liked the way in which you have described each scene.👏
Liked all Duo scenes and their interactions in the disguise of Varun and Mickey,the manner in they helped and saved each others life when in difficulty. 👏 ⭐️
Liked the hospital scene of DUO with ACP sir and the team.👏 ⭐️
Loved all the Duo scenes and the ending scenes between Duo and also their respective care, concern and self thoughts about each other.Their friendship has been very nicely portrayed.Really well written.⭐️

Thanks a lot once again GD, for your efforts in writing this awesome story.😊

really sorry GD, I don't know why my post repeated here... Sorry... 😭

dada abhi aap bhi waiting mein ho...😉

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Waow yar GD first part perha hai abhi... Bohut hi mazey ka hai bilkul hi gjumao sa... Kuch samjh hi nahin aa raha itni sari confussions hain hahaha... Tooba bechary Abhijeet sir sach mein yar ager Daya sir Mazak ker rahy hain na tou unn ki pitai honi chahiye, ahaha... 😉😉

Acha yar aik question hai k phone booth tou urr gaya tha na tou ACP sir ko kaisy pata chala k receiver clipped tha... 😕

Take care dear and stay blessed... 😊

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

Really enjoyed the whole... Awesomely written and greatly handled... 👏

Last part was just great.. Especially the gas name, I read it nearly 4, 5 times thinking k shaid main ghalat perh rahi hun, hhahahhaha... 😆

And then I thought k shaid yeh koe naye gas hai js ka mujhy pata nahin hai, hahhahaha.. 🤣

Thank you dear and take care... 😊