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Originally posted by: gadhadada

😆 Wo Becharay tou khud Mazaq ka Shikaar ho gayey thy is Ghumao Phirao mein...😉😉

dekho Baccha as Baray Bhai nay poora Incident Repeat kiya tha, Us mein Wohi ek Cheez ODD thi aur Kum az Kum Meri Stories mein itni Mental Chemistry tou hogi na yaar...😃😃

17 Saal ka Mutual Understanding tou hay na TRIO kay Beech...😃😃

only in Our Stories...😉😉

Thank You so much Baccha for Liking it...😳😳😳

Originally posted by: gadhadada

🤣 Basically I gave the Idea that Inspectors Not Knowun so many Technical and Forensic Science Knowledge and they are also Humans so in Trapping Culprit, they also did Mistakes...😉😉

they are Not Super Heroes na...😆

yaar Story Buht zyada Investigative thi tou thora sa Light Part daal diya tha...😃😃

A Big Thank You Baccha...😳😳

its always gives a feeling of Pleasure to have such appreciation from a Renowned Writer Herself...⭐️🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Dekha dikha diya main nay tumhein Bina Dum ka MICKY...😉😆😆

Yaar, I watched it Last Month and Loved to Portray it with DUO...😳😳

Kafi Changes karni pari but I like to Write on it...😛😛

Thank You so much that U Like it...😳🤗

Finally read Lucky Charm.. Decide kiya tha story padhte padhte review likhungi par baad mein mujhe ye Luck film ke copy ke tarah lagne laga toh socha chalo puri story hi padh lun, fr review likhungi..

Sorry for late reply...
Include me in your PM list plzzz...

I am back at IF after a long time, and here a nice surprise is waiting for me!😃 I have not yet completed the story, but it seems to be a good work!😊 will review soon GD!

zabardast bel.. 👏
luck version 02 😉
waise i thot micky is Daya nd Varun is abhi
coz those were perfuctly suiting d character
any ways...nice story for a nice guy 😳

Another masterpiece from a brilliant writer...👏
I loved it a lot dada...
the suspense was very well maintained..👏
I loved the way you started the story on a light note with duo's convo..appreciable work...⭐️
You entered the reader smoothly into the case wihout much khitar pitar...
Acp sir's brief to sachin and rajat about the case was very good...
Then Abhijeet- Rajat convo was simply mind blowing dada...the way abhijeet sir undeliberately uttered those words was very well shown and added a realistic charm to the story...and then the way he covered up his mistake..sharp shine haan...😆
Then again the introduction of MIcky and Varun was very well shown...👏
It was there i guessed that micky is daya sir while varun is abhijeet but in the later part i got confused as micky somewhere had the characteristics of daya sir like singing and somewhere abhijeet like witty remarks..
It was when you showed varun a less talkative and a character who enjoyed silence and nature i knew that he is daya and Micky is abhijeet...intelligent na..thank you thank you..
I am still not able to get the role of major and fahad in the story and rajat's task too...
I have not watched Luck but i think i don't need to watch it now as you have showed me the movie with my heroes itself..
Thanks a lot dada for such a masterpiece..
It was really fun to read...and believe me it was truly a great one..👏 all the credit goes to popat and Luck makers...😆
Take care dada...
Bye..
Allah aapko jaldi se theek kare...aameen..😳

Once again amazing story, dada with great suspence and duo ;). Love it.
PM me too.