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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1031

Originally posted by: -Shruti
I'm always open for PM notifications! Aaj kal story padhne ka time nahi mil raha tha.. :(
I've free time now..so I'll read the previous ones after this one. 👍🏼

Popat ke baal grey ho gaye? Use Colormate! 👍🏼😛

First Thank You so much that U Respond...😳

Second No its Not about Forcing Urself, taking out Time and then Read...

I just ask a Simple Query as I dunt want to give Burden of deleting PM's from Inbox...🤔

Thank You so much...😳😳

BTW, after using so many COLORMATE...😉😉

POpat Grey hairs turned as...😆😆

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1032

Originally posted by: binod.abhijeet
Dada i will definately read and please pm me...i have saved it in my mobile..will comment after completion of reading.

I knew Beta, U are Busy in Ur Exams...😊

I just asked cz then I'll decided to whom I will send the PM...🤔

Thank You so much Baccha...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1033

Originally posted by: visrom
sorry I couldn't read previous story as you wrote it in parts and I was out of town. Will read this...pakka.

Thank You for Ur Reply...😊

No, I dunt want that Readers Forcely read them without their Intentions...😭😭

Already I Skipped so many as I felt that they are Not Intrested in reading My Stuff...

I just ask so I will Quit to send My Bulk PM's in Ur Inbox...😆

Thank You so much...😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1034

Originally posted by: sheroo9000
Just started reading...will comment after reading full😊

hmmm...😊

also tell Me that U will Open for PM Notification about my Stuff in Future too...🤔

Thank You so much Baccha...😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1035

Originally posted by: nsapo
will read soon😛

dunt Promise NSAPO...

I just ask cz I dunt want that People read My Stuff without their Wish...

Dunt Force just tell Me...😊

its Not about Hurt Boss...😊

its only to Relax U from My Bulk PM's...😉

Thank You so much...😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1036

Originally posted by: saman0
Sorry dear😳. Will read both stories in one attempt and comment soon😛

SAMAN, Yaar Dunt say Sorry...😊

I dunt want that people having Trouble to Read My Stuff due to their Busy Skedules...

its just a Query to gives U all Sooth from getting My Bulk PM's in Ur Inbox...😊

Thank You so much...😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1037

Originally posted by: ..optimist..
Will read a bit later GD...
Very busy in submissions...
Sorry yaar...

NEHA...

its Not that or U all take it in that aspect...

I dunt want that U get burden about having My Bulk PM's...😆

plz, think in Positive way...😊

Not about Hurt and all...

Thank You so much Gudda...😳😳

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1038

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01
Story is really nicely written dear.. 👏
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Main tou Micky, Daya sir ko samjh rahi thi, hehe... 😉 Wasey duum wala idea mazey ka tha, hahah... 😆

Main ny LUCK nahin daikhi aur ab daikhny ki koe zarort bhi nahin lagti, you portrayed all greatly... ⭐️

Thank you dear and take care... 😊

Dekha dikha diya main nay tumhein Bina Dum ka MICKY...😉😆😆

Yaar, I watched it Last Month and Loved to Portray it with DUO...😳😳

Kafi Changes karni pari but I like to Write on it...😛😛

Thank You so much that U Like it...😳🤗

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1039

Originally posted by: Reshma.
First of all, I beg your pardon for commenting so late on "Catch Me If You Can"
I really liked everything in both the parts.😃 But somehow I kept losing grip in the middle.. In the 1st part especially.. Daya sir's presence in both the places was kinda confusing for me.😕. But then you cleared it in the 2nd part.😃. I loved all the investigation in the second part.. The plan for Bluemoon hotel and etc etc..

Thanks for this lovely story, GD😊

Keep writing. God bless.😊

hmm, Yes True cz in First chapter, the Story was Stretching in a Slower way...

basically Beta, I wrote the Whole Story in One Go and when I was posting it...😉

Split it in Parts so cant able to get that Part 1 was completely Boring...😆😆

in Second Part, Obviously opening every Fold sustain the Reader Interest...😉😉

But I like My Own Experiment...😳😳

A Big Thank You to U baccha...🤗