My story:THE COP

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THE COP
SCENE 1
TIME:1PM
Two men are chasing a man...
man1:Hey..rukh jaa..rukh jaaa..
man2:rukh jaa varna goli mardunga...
1:tu goli chala ye aise nahi manne wala..
2:tikh he to chala ta hoon..
...FIRE...
They approach the man..
1:arre!!ye kahan goli mardi tumne??
2:tum hi ne toh kaha goli marne ke liye..
1:arre chod use lakta hey ye mar gaya hey..isse pehle ki koi hame dek le chal yahan se dafa ho jate hey..
SCENE 2:IN THE BEAREAU
FREDDY:Are bhagwan mein to mar javunga..!!!
VIVEK:kya hua sir..?? wife ne kuch kaha kya...??
F:tumhe kya lagta hein mein wife ke alava aur kuch sochta nahi??
V:aise nahi he sir...aap ye batayiye kya hua..
F:tume garmi nahi lagrahi he kya...??
V:haan sir yaha bahut garmi he..
F:isi liye mein chilla raha tha samjhe na...vivek mere paas ek idea hey..kyuna hum ICE CREAM khane chale..
V:sir idea bahut accha hey..par ACP sir jaane denge kya..???
F:arre ACP ka chinta mat kar..me sambhal lunga...tumhe free me khilaunga...jitna chahe utna khalo...
V:sir fir to bahut maza aayega...
TRIO ENTER..
ABHIJIT:kyun maza aayega vivek??hame bi toh batau..
DAYA:ab bata bhi do
V:sir freddy sir ne kaha ki vo hum sab ko free mein ice cream khilayenge
F:[mein to mar gaya wife nahi chodegi...]
A:kya soch rahe ho freddy??
F:kuch nahi sir...
ACP:tumne kaha na ki ice cream khilaoge...to chalo khane chalte hey...
TRIN...TRIN..PHONE RINGS..
D:helo ins.daya here...
kya..lash..kahan??
tik he hum abhi chalte hey...
D:sir ice cream khane ki baat bhul jaayiye..
ACP:kya hua..kiska phone tha..???
D:sir ek laash mili he...central road par..
A:vo sunsaan jaga..??
D:haan vo hi..
ACP:to chalo chal te hey...
F:[mein to bach gaya..]
DUO SEE EACH OTHER FACE AND SMILE AT EACH OTHER...
SCENE 3:CENTRAL ROAD..
THEY APPROACH THE DEAD BODY..
ACP:ye dekho...abhijit..sir ke peeche goli maari hey..
A:sir lakta he bohot door se mari he...ye goli bahot andar chala gaya hey..
V:sir inka naam hey Shreya..inhi ne hame phone kiya tha...
A:Shreya ji aap yahan kyun aayi thi itni sunsaan raste par..
SHREYA:sir iss route se jjanane par mein apni office jaldi pohoch sakti hoon..
ACP:aap har din isi raaste se jaati hey kya..???
SHREYA:haan sir..
A:aap ne kuch dekha..?kisi ko bhagte hue..??
SHREYA:nahi sir ye raasta bilkul khaali tha..
ACP:teek he aap ne bahut accha kaam kiya..agar aap ki zarurat padegi to hum aap ko bulalenge..
SHREYA:to mein ja sakti hoon sir??
ACP:haan bilkul..
SHREYA GOES...
D:sir...lash se das feet door mujhe ye gun ka shell mila..
ACP:oh...acha kaam kiya tumne daya..aur kuch mila???
D:nahi sir..ab tak iss ke alava aur kuch nahi mila..
A:vivek..freddy..kuch mila...??
F&V:nahi sir..
ACP:iss ke kapdon me check kiya abhijit?
A:haan sir sab kuch khaali he..
D:kahi loot paat ke liye to nahi kiya isska khoon??
A:ho sakta he..par dikhne mein ye bilkul..simple sa aadmi lakta hei...jyada kuch nahi hoga isske paas...
ACP:abhijit.. ek kaam karo iss lash ko forensic lab mein pohchado...salunkhe zaroor kuch na kuch doonde ga..
A:teek he sir..
D:vivek..frddy is jaga ka chappa chappa chan maro kuch na kuch to zaroor milega..
V:yes sir...
SCENE 4:AT THE FORENSIC LABACP:kuch pata chala salunkhe???
DR SALUNKHE:ek ajeeb si baat pata chali hey..
ACP:kya hey..?jaldi batao..
DR:iss aadmi ke khoon hamne test kiya...to pata chala ki isme hame thodi si quantity ki drugs mili hey..
A:matlab ye drugs leta tha?
DR:nahi abhijit..ye drugs nahi leta tha par shayad ye drugs ban ne vali jaga mein zaroor jata hoga..isi liye iske body mein hami sirf thodi si drugs mili he...
D:ye kaisa naya chakkar he..??
ACP:jo bhi chakkar he hum log zaroor iska pata lagayenge...salunkhe aur kuch mila??
DR:abhi tak to sirf itna hi pata chala he..aur kuch pata chala to zaroor bataunga..
ACP:tikh he..par zara jaldi..
daya..kahi ye koi criminal to nahi??records mein check karo..
SCENE 5:BEAREAU
ACP:ye kya ho raha hey..??aaj tak kisi bhi case mein aise nahi hua tha...kuch pata nahi chal raha hei iss aadmi ke bare mein..iss admi ka naam tak pata nahi chala hei...uss khoon ki jaga mein sirf ek goli ka shell mila hei hame...aur iss salunkhe ne bhi zyada kuch nahi bataya..hey bhagwaan...agar uss DCP ko pata chali to hame boriya bistar baand ke himalay ki aur jana padega...
A:sir..dr sab ne kaha ki uss shell aur bullet match ho gayi hei..
ACP:match ho gayi to me uska pooja karun?
A:ye to aap hi decide karenge sir...
ACP:kya kaha tumne..???😡
[abhijit bends his heads..]
vivek tumne newspaper aur news channels mein iss aadmi ki photo di..??
V:haan sir mene aaj hi diya..
ACP:to abhi tak kuch pata kyun nahi chala..??
D:sir...ye dekhiye...kya mila hey...😲
[daya is sitting in front of the computer..]
Sir..mene criminal records mein check kia to match nahi hua..isiliye mene police records check kiya to ye pata chala...
A:arre ye to ek police officer hey...
D:haan abhijit..iska naam KARAN hey..isse join karke sirf chaar mahine hua hey..
ACP:aur itna jaldi iska khoon bhi ho gaya..lekin hua kyun???
iska ghar ka adress hey??
D:haan sir NO85 SHANTI NILAY DELHI ROAD MALAD.
ACP:to chalo chal te hey..
SCENE 6:AT THE COP'S HOUSE..
[ACP,ABHIJIT,DAYA,VIVEK&FREDDY ARE PRESENT THERE]
they knock the door..
A:darwaza kholo..
D:darwaza kholo...
[suddenly a man comes there..]
MAN:aap log CID wale hei na..?
A:aap ko kaise pata..??
MAN:sir mera naam JAY hei..mein to beareau aane hi wala tha iss news paper ka add dhek kar..aap yahan kyun aye hei?yahan koi nahi rehta...
D:ye to karan ka ghar hei na..??
JAY:haan sir karan ek cop hei par uss ne ghar badal diya..
A:aap ko pata hei ussne ghar kyun badla...??
JAY:sir mujhe to nahi pata par ek admi hei shayad vo aapko bata sakta hei..
ACP:kaun hei uska nam to pata hoga aapko..
JAY:nahi sir par karan iss jaga mein ek mahine tak rehta tha..uss waqt vo aadmi karan se milne aata tha.
ACP:tum uska sketch banva sakte ho??
JAY:teek hai sir koshish kar sakta hoon..
ACP:vivek tum ise beareau lekar jao..jab tak hum log iss area ke POLICE se milkar aate hei..
[ACP,DAYA&ABHIJIT GO TO VISIT THE POLICE]
SCENE 7:POLICE STATION
COMMISNER:oh ACP or unke team yahan kaise aana hua??
ACP:arre aap yahan??
yahan to DEEPAK retha tha na??
COMMISNER:haan...par uska tranfer hua hey..isliye mein yahan hoon...
[ACP thinks in his mind..transfer?par ye kaise ho sakta hei?transfer to 10 ssaal ke baad hi hoti hei...kuch to gadbad hei..at the same time abhijit whispers in ACP's ear..sir..iss aadmiko maine ab tak kahi nahi dekha hei...aap isse jaante hei kya..??]
ACP:kab hui aapka transfer??
COMMISNER:abhi abhi...aaap yahan kaise ...aapne bataya hi nahi..😆
ACPwhispers in daya's ear..[Ek kaam karte hein..abhi yahan se bahana bana ke nikal jate hei..ye kuch gadbad laktah hei..]
DAYA knods his head.
D:aap to jaante hi honge ki karan ko kisi ne goli maardi hei..
CMSNR:ha ha haan sir mujhe pata chala..
A:aap ne kuch karne ki koshish nahi ki??
CMSNR:sir mujhe pata chala ki aap log is case ka investigatio kar rahe ho isliye..
D:isliye aap ne kuch karne ki socha hi nahi...he na??
CMSNR:nahi mein to ab bhi aap ke madad karne ke liye tayar hoon..
ACP:to aap ek kaam kijiye...karan ka naya ghar ka adress hame de dijiye..
CMSNR:t..t...teek he ye lijiye...
[chalo..chalte hei..aur daya aur freddy tum dono iss aadmi par nazar rakhna..]
while ACP&abhijit leave..a constable comes running...
saab..saab...
ACP:kya hua..???
constable:saab...yahan bohot gadbad chal rahi he saab..hame bachalo saab...
A:kaisi gadbad??
constable:saab ye naye sab jo aaye he na unse milne bohot ajeeb log milne aate he saab...vo logonko bohat baar maine criminal list mein bhi dekha hei...
ACP:aise log jo criminal list mein he...abhijit maine kaha tha na..ye aadmi ajeeb hei...tik he tum chinta mat karo..hum log sambhal lenge..agar kabhi aise log aaye to hame inform kar dena...
constable:tikh he saab ...aap jaldi iss mamle ko khatam kardijiye saab...
ACP:tum ab jaao...
[till tat cmsnr tells his partners tat ACP is going to karan's house]
vivek sends an mms of the mans photo tat ws made by the sketch person to ACP's phone
ACP:ye kaun hey..??
A:sir shayad uss constable ko pata hoga..
ACP:haan bulao use..
abhijit calls him..
zara dekho ye yaha aata thha..??
constable:haan saab maine bohot bar ise yahan deka hai..
A:deka hai tik hai...
ACP:AB jo bhi chakkar hai sab iss karan ki ghar mein hi pata chalega...
SCENE 8:KARAN'S HOUSE
ACP:lagta hei ye akela rehta tha..
[before ACP tells abhijit to break the door...
DUMMM...FIRE...
A:sir vo dekhiye...une pata chal gaya ki ham log aa rahe hey...
ACP:chup jaao...
then firing begins...DAYA VIVEK and FREDDY reach the place...
there are 4 men...and even the commisner is present wit them
DUMMM...DUMMM...DUMMM...
ALL MEN ARE HIT...
DAYA CATCHES THEM...
SCENE 9 SHIFTED TO BEAREAU
THE OFFICERS SLAP THE MEN...
SLAP...
D:wah tum log khud waha pohochkar hamara kaam aasan kar diya...
ab bolo tum logonmese kaun bolega??
chalo tu bata commisner..
kyun kiya karan ka khoon???
cmsnr:karan ka khoon maine nahi kia..in dono ne kia..
D :koi bhi ho saza to zaroor milegi...ab bata ye kya chakkar he..
cmsnr:ham log drugs ka dandha karte hei..iss mein karan bhi shamil ta..uska ghar mein ek khoofia jaga hei jidhar ham log sara drugs rakte hei..
A:oh isilie tum log wahan pohoch gaye..taki us jaga ke barein mein hame pata na chale..
MAN1:haan aur vo karan uss jaga ka chavi lekar bhaag raha tha ..lalach bhara pada tha us me..kehraha tha ki sabkuch cid ko bata dega..iss liye hame use maarna pada..aur hum log chavi lekar bhag gaye..
ACP:aur kaun kaun shamil he iss dandhe mein..??
MAN1:bus hum 6 log he..
ACP:aur tum cmsnr hoke bhi sharam nahi aayi eise karte hue??
cmsnr:kya karoon me paise ki lalach mein andha ho gaya tha...
A:agar tum jaise log hi aise karenge to baki logon ka kya hoga??
ACP:ab jail mein sadte baitna...PHANSI KA ORDER AANE TAK...
F:sir ab case solve ho gayi to ice cream khane chale???
ACP:zaroor kyu nahi😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Story gayab ho gayi..kuch tou gadbad hai... CID ko bulana padega...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please post the whole story in the first post itself. You can edit the first post and update it 😊 It will be easy to read ..else everyone will have to scroll through the comments to read the whole story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@NAMRITHA... ur first attempt is really GOOD...😃
short and nice...😊
i liked ur DHUMMM DHUMMM alot...😆😆
keep it up baccha...👍🏼
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Oh thanks dadu..:)im glad u liked it..im namrAtha...not namrItha..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good story. Short and sweet. 👏 Thanks. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice story! I enjoyed reading it... ice-cream part was gud :)
Edited by guglu-baby - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Namratha.

Oh thanks dadu..:)im glad u liked it..im namrAtha...not namrItha..


Sorry I lost in that DHUMMM DHUMMM 😆so missed the correct spelling of UR name...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice attempt

please keep writing👏

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is a very good first attempt from you. 👏

It was a bit too short...but that's understandable...once you write a few stories, it will start getting longer and longer...ab mujhe dekho...when I wrote my first one, it was as short as yours but now it keeps going on and on...my latest one touched 30 pages and people have started getting bored of its length. 😆
Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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