My story:THE COP

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@Namratha.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Thank you Soniya..😊

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Sheen

@..Princess..

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

good story.. Namratha👍🏼

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Bhavya

@parindi_pari

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

fantastic story with superb emotions

chalo celebrate karte hai ice cream khakar🤣

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@Namratha.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Thanks intzar..😊aur Bhavya thanks and chalo chale...😛😉

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Gamayun

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Namratha, I'm so sorry. I forgot to tell you. Great story!!! 👏

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@Namratha.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

No problem.
Thanks for reading😊

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

The concept is really very good...its ur first attempt so totally understood...the length is little bit short...but u can improve urself...keep writing 👍🏼

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@Namratha.

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Thanks..Deba di..And yeah..ill do it next time..Infact i ws reading ur story now but the page didnt load completely..😔

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Debasree

@debasree04

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Namratha.
Thanks..Deba di..And yeah..ill do it next time..Infact i ws reading ur story now but the page didnt load completely..😔

actually my story is too long 😆 for this may be it has some problem in loading...