CID Story: The Forest Graveyard - Page 5

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414

Interesting so may dead bodies, so many names your story actually tested my memory 😆 (on day when I took break from any sort of work. Just kidding). So many elements in story------- fake accident 2 years ago, so many dead bodies, bomb. Very good distribution of work. Sachin and Purvi disappeared same way. 😛. And yes CID team caught Aliya and Kumar on plane 😃.

There was confusion but summary you gave on page 5 helped me to understand story but one confusion which I still have from point I read below lines ----

About same time, Jogeshwari location
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"Nisha se toh baat nahi ho paaye. Manager ne hum se jhoot bola. Nisha ki maut toh ussi din ho gayi thi jis din usne chutti li thi. Balki, usne chutti li hi nahi. Subah kam pe aate huye uski maut ek aur gari se takar hone ki wajah se ho gayi thi," Abhijeet said."

Why manager lied?? Or manager didn't know that Nisha died while coming to office (no one informed him).


Actually I am also planning to write story which had so many names and I myself got confused so draw layout on paper (diagram) and thought If I am confused what will be readers condition. So planned to show diagram. You can also easily written that CID team in bureau drawing relation on board and at last show one final diagram. I actually myself have confused many times readers 😛. So I am just suggesting a way when many names involved how to make things little simple for readers

Finished this too 😃

I knew you'd put in a bomb element !! Shreya loves playing with bombs 😆

Well I liked the way you used the investigation element .. it was very nice.
Also you've got an NK in you 😉 considering the no. of dead bodies 😆 .. the only difference being this NK writes really good stories 😛
You've kept Nik aside .. Thank you 😃

To be frank in between somewhere I was a little confused .. considering so many names .. but once i continued I could get the hang of it ..

One has to read you story in one go .. warna bahut confuse ho jaayenge 😛

Nevertheless liked the story a lot .. would love seeing it as an episode ... it's got all the elements needed plus good team distribution (then why is FW a failure in achieving both of these together ?)
chodo ..

altogether you hard work has paid off .. really nice one 😊

Finished reading now 😊
It's a very nice story and I do appreciate your efforts. I too was confused a bit but after reading the entire story, everything became clear. Loved duo part and nikhil's absence.

Overall it's a very nice one and would love to see you replace nk.

Nice Story - Shreya!!

Originally posted by: Bhavanab

Finished this too 😃

I knew you'd put in a bomb element !! Shreya loves playing with bombs 😆

Well I liked the way you used the investigation element .. it was very nice.
Also you've got an NK in you 😉 considering the no. of dead bodies 😆 .. the only difference being this NK writes really good stories 😛
You've kept Nik aside .. Thank you 😃

To be frank in between somewhere I was a little confused .. considering so many names .. but once i continued I could get the hang of it ..

One has to read you story in one go .. warna bahut confuse ho jaayenge 😛

Nevertheless liked the story a lot .. would love seeing it as an episode ... it's got all the elements needed plus good team distribution (then why is FW a failure in achieving both of these together ?)
chodo ..

altogether you hard work has paid off .. really nice one 😊

Originally posted by: Shruti_HR

Finished reading now 😊
It's a very nice story and I do appreciate your efforts. I too was confused a bit but after reading the entire story, everything became clear. Loved duo part and nikhil's absence.

Overall it's a very nice one and would love to see you replace nk.

Originally posted by: ddsweetheart

THANKS FOR THIS, I LOVE CID SHOW----

Originally posted by: visrom

Finished reading Sri...it's an interesting plot, but I got a bit confused with too many characters and the plastic surgery and judwaa bhai and duplicate addresses and what-not

At last finished...so sorry for the late...nice story 😊
I totally agree what @Visrom said...i was totally confused with lots of names & read again & again to remember all those names 😆...fully NK style...u can compete with her 😉
Anyway good job 👏

Great Job !! 👍🏼