CID Story: The Forest Graveyard

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

good story i really like it sri

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Gamayun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: visrom
Finished reading Sri...it's an interesting plot, but I got a bit confused with too many characters and the plastic surgery and judwaa bhai and duplicate addresses and what-not.

You kept Nik away...that's perfectly ok... no explanations are needed. I am not sure if I'll have him in my own story...when FW can make duo vanish without reason why do we need explanation for Nik's vanishing act? 😛

Can you just give me the overall picture of the plot in English? I will re-read it.

In English...basically Kumar stole money from the bank from the rich and then disappeared by pretending to have died. His twin brother came in place of him, in case anyone ever asked. Aliya, his girlfriend, trapped other bank managers and stole money from those banks as well. Then both of them killed them off and threw them in the forest. They decided that enough was enough and tried to trap Kumar's brother in the case, but Kumar got greedy and killed his own brother and then blamed Aliya. But CID caught both of them together.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: guglu-baby
It waz very interesting,luved it.. kal mera exam hai n i'm busy here;)

Originally posted by: intzar
very interesting story. keep it up👏

Originally posted by: 394duo7
Good story...GOD bless u ..nice moments with acp-salunke..

Originally posted by: Be.A.Rebel
good story i really like it sri

Thank you. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Be.A.Rebel
good story i really like it sri

Thank you. 😃

u R Welcome Sri

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: sherdilali
VERY NICE STORY KEEP IT UP

Thank you. 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

SHERYA... NICE STORY😃 with lots of MELO DRAMA😉 n CONFUSION😕 but as END is WELL😆... SUB kuch WELL... 😆👍🏼

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: gadhadada

SHERYA... NICE STORY😃 with lots of MELO DRAMA😉 n CONFUSION😕 but as END is WELL😆... SUB kuch WELL... 😆👍🏼

Thank you GD. 😃

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akshita1112

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Very nice story.Specially like Nikhil's absence and Daya-Abhi together scenes

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sunny

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Interesting so may dead bodies, so many names your story actually tested my memory 😆 (on day when I took break from any sort of work. Just kidding). So many elements in story------- fake accident 2 years ago, so many dead bodies, bomb. Very good distribution of work. Sachin and Purvi disappeared same way. 😛. And yes CID team caught Aliya and Kumar on plane 😃.

There was confusion but summary you gave on page 5 helped me to understand story but one confusion which I still have from point I read below lines ----

About same time, Jogeshwari location
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"Nisha se toh baat nahi ho paaye. Manager ne hum se jhoot bola. Nisha ki maut toh ussi din ho gayi thi jis din usne chutti li thi. Balki, usne chutti li hi nahi. Subah kam pe aate huye uski maut ek aur gari se takar hone ki wajah se ho gayi thi," Abhijeet said."

Why manager lied?? Or manager didn't know that Nisha died while coming to office (no one informed him).

Actually I am also planning to write story which had so many names and I myself got confused so draw layout on paper (diagram) and thought If I am confused what will be readers condition. So planned to show diagram. You can also easily written that CID team in bureau drawing relation on board and at last show one final diagram. I actually myself have confused many times readers 😛. So I am just suggesting a way when many names involved how to make things little simple for readers

Edited by sunnyp1414 - 13 years ago