CID Story: The Forest Graveyard

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Gamayun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Thank you ariel102. 😃

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nidhi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

well love it hats off for u 😎 well a tene tiny problam i don't have a hat but i can take my goggals off

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Forfriend

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Shri very nice story...

I don't know why but i got confused in between so read it again...

issi liye late hogayi comment karne ke liye

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Just finished reading it.

Started off with quite a characteristic high body count ala NK, but the overall plot was very well thought, planned and presented. 😃 Lots of characters as well - it got a bit hard to keep track of them all at times. A little advice - when having so many of them, try to give a few of them some sort unique feature (physical or behaviour-wise), so that it'll be a bit easier to remember.

Great team distribution, nice dialogues (especially liked the forensic parts) and special mention goes to the opening disclaimer about Nik. Dear Lord, I'm laughing my sides sore. 😆

Great work, keep it up! 👏 😃

Edited by DemonStar - 13 years ago