Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147)

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pinky118

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Posted: 13 years ago

#981

Awesome story...love it👏👍🏼😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#982

excellent story👏👏
luved it fm core of heart
especially end part😃

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Forfriend

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Posted: 13 years ago

#983

Nice update DADA & Neeme 👍🏼

Yaar but agar Daya akele kuch karta na jara jada maja aata

Aki toh as usual You are awsome DADA

nice way to trap Vivek but then kuch bate miss ho gayi

Like usse Vivek ne mara yeh bat toh abh bhi clear nahi hue

woh joh ilajam laga tha ussaka kya hua

Ya maine kuch miss kiya 😕

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Gamayun

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Posted: 13 years ago

#984

A really nice story guys! I loved it to the core!

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Soni.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#985

Wow Neeme and GD i actually don't know what to say. i am totally speechless. the story is mind-blowing, interesting, fabulous, brilliant and there are lots more words i want to say but i cannot remember right now. Right from the starting to the end you kept me engrossed into the plot and Vivek was awesome. I know it from my heart that Vivek can never be a culprit and you two proved me right. The ending scene with DUO was fantastic i wish we get to see these types of scenes on screen but that will never happen. You both of lots of talent within you. great going guys.

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Haleemah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#986

Oh my god x no words 2 explain how gud it was. Keep it up.
Lookin forward 4 ur nxt story . I was dyin wytin 4 dis part n finally da wyt was ova n it was amazing 😊

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gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#987

Originally posted by: Forfriend
Nice update DADA & Neeme 👍🏼

Yaar but agar Daya akele kuch karta na jara jada maja aata

Aki toh as usual You are awsome DADA

nice way to trap Vivek but then kuch bate miss ho gayi

Like usse Vivek ne mara yeh bat toh abh bhi clear nahi hue

woh joh ilajam laga tha ussaka kya hua

Ya maine kuch miss kiya 😕

kisay FF...😕😕

RAJU VIVEK ki Goli say hee mara tha... RETRODE action kay karan...

obviously jub Mujrim pakra gaya tou Ilzam tou khud ba khud hat gaya na...

cz ACP Sir nay VIVEK ko Oraly Suspend kiya tha, there was No Written Orders n I mentioned it in the Story...😊

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Parul

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Posted: 13 years ago

#988

@Dada n Neeme diii...
Awesome story guys.!!.!
Lovvved it totally❤️❤️

Missing Vivek much more now..😭😭

I really wanna see this one on air..⭐️⭐️

Daya Sir's part was really good..i liked the way he stood for Vivek❤️

Loved Duo's last convo😆

Keep going guys..!!!
Waiting to see more from u...

Btw Sorry for late feedback😳

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Forfriend

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Posted: 13 years ago

#989

Originally posted by: gadhadada

kisay FF...😕😕
RAJU VIVEK ki Goli say hee mara tha... RETRODE action kay karan...
obviously jub Mujrim pakra gaya tou Ilzam tou khud ba khud hat gaya na...
cz ACP Sir nay VIVEK ko Oraly Suspend kiya tha, there was No Written Orders n I mentioned it in the Story...😊