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Posted: 12 years ago

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kya yaar ab main itna bhi KHAROS nahi hun...
Thank You so much...🤗

Nahi ye apke pahle wali stories kaheti hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Tami_

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yehi kay main KHAROS hun...😆😆😆
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Preface: this Story is completely dedicated to VIVEK😳😳... its totally based on Him as We all Missing Him, His Stunts, his Obiendiency, His Casual jestures and especially His Friendship with FREDDY Sir...👏👏👏
the Story is VIVEK Centric and the totally Plot plus all situation are of NEEME DII, I m again very Thankful that She trusts me about that...😳😳😳
the Story bit Delayed due to her and mine both Personal Issues... We Appologize for Delaying... 😊😊😊

My Life Segment

SACHIN at Driving wheel whereas FREDDIE with him at Passenger seat, while VIVEK and VINEET at back seat… all these Four were Alert as they will move to Highway Toll Naka as Highway police reported few days back about some Smuggling of Precious Metals illegally through Trucks…

Here some Informers of FREDDIE and VIVEK call them Previous Night after telling them that they will have some important information for Share so Both Officers in Disguise at the Spot, FREDDIE asked.

FREDDIE: VIVEK, Tu MISHA ko kitny dino say nahi laaya ghar? Pata hay meri wife pooch rahi thi.

VIVEK: wo FREDDIE Sir, darsal MOM ki ek Friend aayii hui hain, aur DIDI ki bhi ek do Friends jinhein abhi DIDI ki Maut ka pata chala hay, tou wo sub log aa rahy hain, Condolence kay liye, tou un kay Bacchun say MISHA ki buht Dosti ho gayi hay, is liye wo aaj kal un mein busy hay..

FREDDIE (happy): arry ye tou buht acha hua, (look at watch n say in rash) ye PINTO bhi na pata nahi kahan reh gaya? (to VIVEK in asking tone) aur tera wala?

VIVEK: Msg tou kya hay kay raastay mein hay, aa raha hay.

After some time, both informers be there and tell them that some of CID Old Culprits after completing their Tenure from Jail in different Accusations are coming out now and most f them involved behind this Highway Smuggling case…

After getting this information CID took over the case and today morning all Four CID officers be there to investigate that properly, meantime they got a Wireless that a truck with number plate RH-7854 smashed the barrier of Toll Naka and rushed away, the Highway Patrolling Police behind them… SACHIN turned Jeep towards Highway and after few miles they got that highway Patrolling Police Jeep which was hit with the tree , the Injured Policemen waiting for the Backup and ambulance told by the Policemen who was outside with some wounds… CID Team leaves them there and moved ahead… they got the truck… VINEET, FREDDIE tried to Fire but Failed but at least one of FREDDIE bullet was successful to make a Hole at Truck back tire… Truck stopped with a Scratch and then two men jumped from the Truck seat and started running to small lanes… SACHIN also stopped the Jeep as it's Impossible to move with a Jeep in the Lanes… all ran behind them… trying to fire as well but with care as the area was of Residential one… SACHIN ordered not to Fire now as might be any Civilian gets Hurt with that… they all moving fast in that a Cleaner turned picking a hard Stone from Road and threw it which hit on FREDDIE Forehead, He tried to protect himself but Hurt badly, Blood Coming out while he was falling on the Road… VIVEK and VINEET trying to stand him up… here VIVEK in anger…

VIVEK: Chorun ga nahi main isay.?

After that he and VINEET moved ahead and after few miles, VINEET grabbed the Driver whereas VIVEK after few steps ahead got the Cleaner and in the Process of Grabbing, Beating… He banged and the Bullet sharply entered inside the Cleaner Chest, He fell and Dead on the Spot… VIVEK stand Stunned… VINEET who was little far when came to the Spot… first look at VIVEK then Sat, Check Pulses of the Guy and tell in Low Tone…

VINEET: Mar gaya…

Here FREDDIE and SACHIN came behind and after seeing the Scenario… Quietly look at Both… VINEET explained…

VINEET: Sir Driver Zinda pakra gaya aur is aadmi ko Cheena Jhapti mein VIVEK ki Goli lug gayii…

SACHIN (rash): VIVEK… mana kiya tha na… Zinda pakarna hy Dono ko..

VIVEK (low tone): Sir main isay maarna nahi chahata tha, Retrode action ki wajah say Goli chal gayii…

FREDDIE (shock): per Teri Gun Cocked (load) kub thi?

VIVEK: aaa… wo FREDDIE Sir raastay mein ker li thi… isay Dhamkany kay liyey… per Mian isay maarna nahi chahta tha… sach… Retrode action…

SACHIN (sumup): acha chalo… Laash ko Forensic bhejo aur baaqi Driver ko Bureau lay chalo… Truck ko CID Garadge bhijwao aur Local Police ko Khaber karo… ye Area Seal ker day…

After that they all moved out with their work… the Dead body dispatched to Forensic Lab, whereas all moved with the Driver to Bureau… Here TRIO after hearing all look at VIVEK first… ACP Sir comes in Extreme anger by saying…

ACP (to VIVEK): VIVEK yahan say sub ko bata ker, samjha ker bheja tha kay koi Khoon Kharaba nahi chahayey… aur Tum nay usay maar hee diya…

VIVEK: Sir sach, main usay maarna nahi chahta tha …

ACP (xtra anger): per Maar tou diya na… kaun day ga is ka Hisaab… haan…

ABHIJEET (to VIVEK): aur VIVEK Pair ya Hath per Goli maartay… seedhy Chathi pay maar di…

VIVEK (with low tone): Sir Bhagtay samy Jhatkay kay karan mujhy khayal hee nahi raha kay Gun Loaded hay aur Retrode action say…

ACP: ye Gun Load rakhny ki kya zarurat thi jub SACHIN keh chukka tha kay Wahan open Fire nahi karna hay…

VIVEK (teary tone): Sir, Mian sirf usay darana chahta tha… hawa mein Fire…

ACP (interrupts in complete rash): per Hawa mein tou Fire nahi hua na… us ki Chathi per hua hay… tum sub nay mazaq samjh liya hay.. wo Nehatta tha… Hr Goli ka hisaab dena hota hay… batao hum ooper kya bolein gay… haan…

VIVEK: Sir Mian nay koi jaan ker Goli tou Chalai nahi…

ACP: per chalai tou hay na…. aur us kay lagnay say ek Aadmi bhi Mar gaya…

ABHIJEET (angry): VIVEK Tum say kum az kum is Laparwahi ki umeed nahi thi… ab batao hum kya karein… na koi Gawah hay Na sabut…

VIVEK (whispering tone): Kya mujh per Bharosa nahi…

ABHIJEET: baat Bharosay ki nahi… case tou Kharab ker diya na tUm nay…

Here DAYA after seeing VIVEK who was really in Tears look at ABHIJEET, whose Eyes Pleading to ABHIJEET to Relax ACP Sir now and Himself too, He says to ACP Sir…

ABHIJEET: wesay Sir wo aadmi Mujrim tou tha na… Us kay Truck say?

ACP (angry Intereruption): kaun is baat ko Confirm karay ga ABHIJEET, kya Truck Driver nay tum logun ko kuch bataya hay?

DAYA: Sir SACHIN aur VINEET us say Pooch taach ker rahy hain?

ACP: aur agar us nay ye keh diya kay wo aadmi Lift lay ker truck mein betha tha? ya Truck Driver ka koi rishtadaar ho? Kisi ko kya malum, kya Hum nay us say pooch taach ki per kesay kartay (tease) ye (signal to VIVEK) humaray Janbaaz Officer nay tou usay Mukti hee dila di humaray Sawalun say…

Suddenly His Phone rings, He picked SALUNKHY is on other side who confirmed that the Man was Dead by VIVEK bullet and the Bullet sharply entered in His Heart through Chest but not Exit out so got the Bullet as well… ACP put off the call without any word… after that he looked at VIVEK with Angry shade and Ordered him to move to Forensic and take out the Report from SALUNKHY… VIVEK exit out Immediately… here He turned to FREDDIE and Asked…

ACP: is aadmi kay Ghar walun ko khaber ki?

FREDDIE : Jee Sir, Us ki Biwi bahar bethi hay, buht Ro rahi hay…

ACP: bulao usay… (murmur) ye Mushkil kaam hamesha hee Takleef deta hay…

A Female in dull Color Saari entered inside the Main Room, PURVI tackled Her and Seated Her as She was Crying Hardly… ACP in Consoling tone…

ACP (sorrow tone): dekhyey humein afsoos hay, per humaray Officer nay un ko warning di thi, magar phir bhi, jaan say maarna humaray plan mein nahi tha, (woman cried loud) (ACP look at ABHIJEET and aaded) magar, khair, kya aap jaanti theen kay aap kay Pati kahan kaam kartay thay? Kya kaam kartay thay?

WOMAN (in cry): Sahab wo Loader ka kaam kartay thay, Saman utha ker lay jatay thay, kabhi kabhi truck bhi chala letay thay…

ABHIJEET: acha aap kay Pati ka kisi say koi Jhagra, Larai, kuch bhi?

WOMAN: Nhai Sahab wo buht Shant Subhao kay thay…

ACP: acha Theek hay agar humein aap say kuch aur poochna hua tou aap ko bulaein gay… abhi aap jayey…

ACP Signaled PURVI to take Her outside, Here when she standup and took Few steps, VIVEK entered with the Report… the WOMAN look at him in Shock…

WOMAN: Tum…

VIVEK: aa… aap… mera matlab…

ABHIJEET (in low tone): jee humaray in Officer ki Warning per bhi aap kay Pati nahi rukay tou inhun nay…

WOMAN without hearing all leapt to VIVEK and grabbed His Shirt Collar with Scream voice…

WOMAN: acha… tou maar diya na Tum nay (cry) ker diya na apna kaha poora… kya bigara tha meray pati nay? Itna kaha hum logun nay per Tum nay apna kaha poora kiya?

VIVEK (trying to take out his Shirt collar from her hand with): dekhyey aisi koi baat nahi… aap ghalt samjh… aap ko kisi nay…

WOMAN: Tu nay maar diya… kesay Bharak ker bol raha tha na… ker liya na apna badla poora…

VIVEK (trying to calm her): dekhyey…

ACP (scold): VIVEK kya hay ye Sub?

VIVEK: Sir ye aurat…. (sweat) Sir inhein koi Ghalat…

WOMAN (interrupts in hard cry): acha tou apnay Pati kay Qatil ko Pehchanny mein mujh say Ghalati ho rahi hay… Tum Officer ho tou kya bach jao gay… Qanun sub kay liyey ek saman hay… (turn to ACP and ask) hain an Sahab… Mujhy Insaaf mily ga na…

ACP: Jee bilkul… kahyey kyun aap ko Shak hay Humaray Officer per kay inhun nay jaan ker aap kay Pati ki jaan li?

VIVEK (trying to shuffle): Sir ye aisay hee…

ACP (ordering Tone): kya Mian ny Tum say kuch poocha hay VIVEK (VIVEK moved head in NO) (ACP in Strong tone added) so Keep Quiet… (to WOMAN) jee batayey…

WOMAN (with tears): sahab aaj say 6 maheenay pehlay Meray Pati ko Police pakar ker lay gayii… Pata chala kay us kay Truck say jisy wo us roz chala raha tha, kisi ko chout lug gayii… Sahab hum Ghreeb log… is aadmi nay seedha seedha meray pati per apni Behan aur Jeja ko Maarny ka Ilzaam laga diya… meray Pati nay buht kaha kay woe k Accident tha… per Sahab ye aadmi maana nahi… phir Police nay Chaan Been ki aur Pata chala kay accident hee hua tha… phir bhi ye aadmi meray Pati ko bakshny per tayyar nahi… itna Bura bhala kaha… gaaliyaan dein… kitnay Logun kay saamnay Maarny ki… Jaan lenay ki Dhamki bhi di aur aaj jub isay Mauqa mila tou apni (stand n grabbed VIVEK Collar again with) Khunnas nikal dii… (with cry) hayey meray Pati ko Maar diya… ab Meray Kya hoga… meri Bacchi anath… (to ACP) Shahab isay chorna nahi… Ye buht Kameena aadmi hay… dil kay ander Dushmani rakkhay betha tha… kitna kaha tha na Meray pati nay tujhy kay us nay Teri Behan ko Nhai maara … per Tu…. Acha hua Teri Behan Mar gayii… narakh mein jalay gay…

VIVEK can't handle His Anger now and trying to hit the Woman, DAYA instantly clutched his hand, Here WOMAN little scared even TRIO as well… PURVI took the WOMAN out immediately on ACP Signal who asked VIVEK after DAYA leaving Him in Complete rash…

ACP: haan ab Tum bolo VIVEK… kya ye aurat Saheh keh rahi hay?

VIVEK (relax n say): Sir, wo darsaal…

ACP: main nay poocha kya ye aurat saheh keh rahi hay?

VIVEK (low tone): Jee Sir…

SACHIN and VINEET came out and tell all as after seeing a Tense scenario which was not Understandable for Them…

SACHIN (to ACP): Sir ye Us Truck Driver…

ACP (stopped him by signaling with His hand and again asked to VIVEK): tou is aurat ka kaha gaya ek ek shabd Sach aur theek hay?

VIVEK: jee Sir…

ABHIJEET (rash): tou itni der say Tum munh band kiyey kyun bethay thay? Haan, dawat detay kya hum tumhein jub Munh khulta Tumhara? Kya samjha hua tha Tum nay? Ek baar bhi tum nay us aadmi ko dekh ker nahi kaha kay Tum usay jaantay ho? Pehlay bhi Dhamki day chukay ho usay maarny ki aur…

VIVEK (interrupts): Sir wo bus Gussa tha… aap log…

DAYA (cutting): per Tum nay bataya kyun nahi kay tum usay jaantay ho?

VIVEK Quiet… ACP asked in anger…

ACP (harsh): ab bhi kuch bolo gay ya yunhi Mourn Virat rakkhy raho gay?

VIVEK (brief): Sir jis Truck ki Takker say meri Behan aur Jejajee ki Death hui thi aur MISHA bach gayii thi… wo Yehi aadmi chala raha tha… hum nay Case report kiya… Chaan been bhi hui… mujy laga kay ye ek Murder hay… Magar Baad mein Police nay bataya kay ye Accident hee tha… Meri DIDI ki gadi ka Tie Rod tootnay kay karan Gadi qabu say bahar ho gayii aur Truck say ja takrayii… Sir main maanta hun kay Mian nay Is aadmi ko buht Bura bhala kaha… Dhamkiyaan bhi dein… magar Sir jub Asliyet pata chali tou Mian Chup ho gaya…

ABHIJEET (harsh): haan ta kay Mauqa milnay per usay sukun ki neend sula saku…

VIVEK: Sir aap Log, Meri Emaandaari per… aap Yaqeen karein… (come to FREDDIE) FREDDIE Sir aap tou… (all Quiet including FREDDIE) (VIVEK look at all and added in teary tone) Mian MISHA ki Qasam kha ker kehta hun main nay is aadmi ko jaan ker nahi maara…

Everyone Shocked and Quiet… VIVEK left the place in Tears… here ACP Sir Ordered DUO to investigate about the Case from the Concerened Police Station… He signaled SACHIN and VINEET to His cabin… Here ABHIJEET look at FREDDIE and asked…

ABHIJEET: Tum kya kehty ho FREDDIE?

FREDDIE (low tone): pata nahi Sir, Per VIVEK buht Gussa hota hay… jub bhi is baaray mein baat karta… ek dum Out ho jata tha… usay yaqeen tha kay Police nay saheh say Chaan Been nahi ki thi… Us nay buht baar meray saamnay bhi kaha kay wo us aadmi ko jaan say maar daalay ga… chahy usay kuch bhi karna paray… aur Sir MISHA ki halat dekh ker tou us ka Gussa aur barh jata… abhi bhi aap nay dekha… MISHA jub bhi apni MOM ko yaad karti ya Roti… VIVEK Gussay say pagal ho jata… aur ab Ye… (teary tone) per ABHIJEET Sir wo kabhi bhi MISHA ki Jhooti Kasam tou nahi khayey ga na…

ABHIJEET: per Tum nay hee kaha tha kay us ki Gun Loaded nahi thi?

FREDDIE (confuse tone): haan Sir, aur VIVEK buht Kum Gun use karta hay… wo zayada tar apny Kicks ya Punch use krta hay… pata nahi kyun us nay Gun Load ki thi… pata nahi… (slow voice) magar mera Dil VIVEK ko Mujrim samjhnay ko tayyar nahi…

ABHIJEET: haan VIVEK… magar Gussa aur Rishtay aksar Ghalat kaam bhi karwa letay hain…

FREDDIE oes not have anything to say, here ABHIJEET signaled DAYA and both moved out for concerned Police station… here at Quillas ABHIJEET initiates…

ABHIJEET: Tum kya kehtay ho DAYA?

DAYA: kuch nahi…

ABHIJEET: matlab tum VIVEK ko Gunahgaar nahi samjh rahay?

DAYA: filhaal meray pass usay Gunahgaar samjhnay ka koi Solid Reason nahi hay… aur tum?

ABHIJEET: Shayed… sub kuch uljha hua hay… VIVEK buht sii baatein Chupa raha hay… bata Kum raha hay…

DAYA: matlab in sub baatun say Hum usay Gunahgaar maan lein?

ABHIJEET: nahi magar Us ki Gun loaded hony ki kahani mein garbar hay… FREDDIE nay saheh kaha… VIVEK Gun ka Use kum krta hay… ho sakta hay us nay us aadmi ko pehchan liya ho aur usi waqt ye…

DAYA (interrupts): Murder Plan ker liya ho… hain na…

ABHIJEET did not say any word… both in their thoughts and reached to that Police Station… here first they take out all the cases reported from 6 months as they did not remember the Exact date of VIVEK Sister Death and also they did not want to ask this to VIVEK or any of His family members… the Inspector and Constable entertained them and in discussion process get out the file… Inspector told them…

INSPECTOR: Sir ye Case… VIVEK CID officer wala… (tiring tone) kya Hangama machaya tha is Larky nay…

DAYA: kyun kya hua tha… aur haan khul kay sub kuch batao…

INSPECTOR: Sir ek tou wo CID Officer, phir us ki Behan ka Case… uff wo tou Gussa hee ho gaya… itna Ceekha… hum logun per bhi Ilzaam lagaya kay humari Investigation theek nahi… us aadmi RAJU ko yahan Humaray Saamny maara bhi…

ABHIJEET (rash): aur Tum logun nay roka nahi?

INSPECTOR: Sir wo CID say tha na…

ABHIJEET: tou (harsh) yahan is Police Station mein wo ek Case report karwany aaya tha… ek aam nagrik… yahan sirf tum logun kay Orders chaltay hain… kya aam janta kay sath yehi sulook krtay ho… haan (tease)unhein tou jootay ki nook per bethatay ho…

DAYA (shuffle n ask after seeing Inspector red face): acha ye batao kay Investigation kya kehti hay?

INSPECTOR: Sir Case tou Accident ka hee tha… Car ka Tie Rod toot gaya tha aur wo qabu say bahar ho ker Truck say ja takrai… hum nay achay say chaan been ki… magar VIVEK ko humari chaan been per bhi Shak tha… lekin wahan ek Puncture waly ki Dukan hay, us nay bhi yehi kaha kay Car qabu say bahar ho ker takrai thi… Sir koi bhi subut Qatal ki taraf ishara nahi ker rahy thay… is liyey hum nay ppoori tarah tassali kay baad Case band ker diya… VIVEK buht Gussa ho ker aur Bakta jhakta gaya tha… Buht Ceekha yahan tak kay Gun bhi tan li thi RAJU per… wo tou agar Hum log nahi hotay tou shayed wo RAJU ko jaan say hee maar daalta…

ABHIJEET giving a meaningful look to DAYA… here DAYA asked to INSPECTOR…

DAYA: acha theek hay Inspector… hum chaltay hain…

INSPECTOR: wesay Sir hua kya hay? Itnay dino baad phir say is Case ki pooch taach ki ja rahi hay (smile) kahein us VIVEK nay RAJU ko ooper tou nahi pohancha diya (DUO Shocked) (INSPECTOR teased as) wesay tou mujhy Shak tha… VIVEK aisa hee karay ga… itna Gharam Khoon… kisi bhi samay Dimagh palat sakta tha… RAJU nay baad mein bhi 2/3 baar yahan Police Station aa ker Shikayet ki thi…

ABHIJEET (shocked): kis cheez ki Shikayet?

INSPECTOR: yehi kay VIVEK usay us kay Ghar aur Kaam ki jagah per bhi Dhamki day ker aaya hay… Geraiban pakar leta hay… apny CID mein hony ki Dhonse deta hay… Gun dikha dikha kay darata hay…

DAYA (shock): tou Tum logun nay VIVEK say pooch taach ki?

INSPECTOR: Sir wo CID say tha aur phir RAJU nay aur koi shikayet nahi ki tou Hum samjhay kay VIVEK nay aap logun ko bata diya hay aur wahein say warning milnay kay karan VIVEK nay dubara RAJU ko Dhamki nahi di… (smily tone) wesay Sir kya aap logun ko hairut nahi hui kay VIVEK nay aap logun ko bataya nahi?

DAYA (high voice): kis nay kaha hay kay humein VIVEK nay nahi bataya?

INSPECTOR look at him and Laughing loudly… DAYA really comes in anger after hearing His Laugh but ABHIJEET clutched his arm and tell INSPECTOR after picking the file as…

ABHIJEET: ye File hum lay ja rahy hain INSPECTOR… Tumhara Naam…?

INSPECTOR (proud): VEER…

ABHIJEET: haan tou INSPECTOR VEER, sunny mein acha lagta hay na… INSPECTOR (tease) wesay agar ye SUB INSPECTOR ya CONSTABLE mein badal jayey tou…

INSPECTOR (shocked): Sir aap…

ABHIJEET (engage): acha nahi lagay ga na…

INSPECTOR (tense tone): Nahi Sir…

ABHIJEET (extra rash tone): tou aanda apna munh buht dekh bhaal ker kholna… (warn) mind it…!

After that DUO moved out, they moved to RAJU house and heard the same Dhamki stuff of VIVEK from His Neighbour who also confirmed that after Case, VIVEK was came here and accussed RAJU… his Neighbour told DUO…

PINTO: Sahab RAJU acha aadmi tha… aur phir jub Police walun nay usay chor diya tou us aadmi haan kya naam tha VIVEK ka usay yahan aa ker Dhamkana… hum nay VIVEK ko buht samjhaya per saala Ulti Khopri ka tha… baat us kay bhejay mein Ghussa nahi…

ABHIJEET: kitni baar aaya tha wo yahan?

PINTO: Do baar sahab… phir nahi aaya.. hum nay RAJU say poocha bhi per us nay kaha kay nahi phir us Larky nay kabhi usay Shakel nahi dikhayii…

DUO after Thanking moved to RAJU Working place and here they met with other Loaders who worked with RAJU and asked the same query, they replied…

LOADER: Sahab aaya tou tha, ek Gora sa larka tha, buht Gussa ho ker gaya tha, Dhamkiyaan bhi dein theen RAJU ko kay jub bhi usay Mauqa milay ga wo usay Choray ga nahi… per bus ek hee baar aaya tha… phir kabhi idhar dikha nahi…

DUO again Thanked them and moved to Bureau… here they again repeat the whole against Team and now on ACP Order, FREDDIE called VIVEK at Bureau right now as he was missing from that minute… he came… ABHIJEET repeats the all and all questioning look freeze on VIVEK … He initiates in low tone…

VIVEK (low tone): haan Sir, ye sub sach hay… magar wo bus Gussa tha aur kuch nahi, meri Behan Behnoi jis tarah Maray thay, MISHA ki jo halat thi, MOM DAD ko sanbhalna, in sub nay mil ker Mujhy Pagal bana diya tha, hr cheez Shak mein lipti lagti… Sir meray Jejajee ek mahir Driver thay… aap khud batyein main kesay yaqeen ker leta kay Tie Rod toot gaya tha…

ABHIJEET (angry): ye sub baatein choro, ye batao humaray saamny munh say ugaltay huay kya hua tha tumhein… kyun nahi nikla tumharay munh say ye sub kuch… 6 maheenay ho gayey hain… najanay (murmur) kitna Gussa daba kay rakkha hay… (rash tone) batao hay koi jawab tumharay pass… haan… ab hum log kis kis ka munh band karein gay…

ACP (tease): is ki zarurat nahi paray gi ABHIJEET… VIVEK khud hum sub kay munh band ker day ga… jesay RAJU ka ker diya…

VIVEK comes in a Shock mode… DAYA came Forward after this and say to ACP in little Angry tone…

DAYA (to ACP): Sir wo bata raha hay na kay us nay Gussay mein…

ACP: haan DAYA, kyun nahi, wo bata he tou raha hay, (tease) Tum Emmotinal Fool ban saktay ho DAYA… main nahi… Tumharay Dil ko moom karna aasan…

DAYA (interrupts in rash): Sir plz… hr waqt aap logun nay is Emotional Fool ki rut lagayii hui hoti hay… kya min aap logun ko Pagal dikhta hun tou nikal dein Mujhy CID say … kyun rakkha…

He stopped, ACP completely Quiet whereas Team in Shock mode including VIVEK… ABHIJEET came forward in complete rash and say to DAYA…

ABHIJEET (complete angry tone): Chup ho jao DAYA… Dimagh theek hay tumhara… kya samjh liya hay tum nay Khud ko… haan…. is tarah ACP Sir say baat karo gay Tum… koi Sharam Lihaaz hay ya Sub Pii gayey ho… ek Shaks jis nay tumhein apnay Betun ki tarah Chaha aur tum…

ACP (cold tone): ABHIJEET chalo, mujhy tum say kuch baat karni hay…

DAYA did not open His mouth but his Expressions are really in rash… ACP Sir took ABHIJEET with Him inside His Cabin.. Here DAYA went to his Residence after patting on VIVEK Shoulder… Surprisingly He met with MISHA who was there with Her Nana, VIVEK father at door step, DAYA stepped out from Quillas and moved ahead with…

DAYA: arry aap log yahan……?

MISHA: Baray waly Uncle… (DAYA takes her in lap) (she adds) Mian nay Nana ko bola aaj tou hum Baray waly Uncle aur ABHIJEET uncle ssay milnay zarur jayein gay…

DAYA invited them inside with…

DAYA (to Nana): arry tou aap log Bureau aa jatay ya mujhy call ker letay?

They sat and MISHA roaming here and there, Nana said him in Apology tone……

Nana: arry beta… MISHA ki zid thi aur phir itni raat ho gayii thi, aur shayed aaj kal tum log busy ho, VIVEK bhi…

DAYA feeling Scare so asked in Hurry…

DAYA (hurry): kya hua VIVEK ko?

Nana: nahi bus buht Thaka Thaka lug raha hy, Khamosh sa, Chup sa… Kal sy saheh tarah kuch khaya nahi, na So paaya, raat bhar us kay Kamry ki Light jalti rahi…

MISHA (added): aur Meray sath Khela bhi nahi aur Story bhi Nahi sunai…

DAYA smile, meanwhile ABHIJEET also joint, ABHIJEET take Her Kitchen after seeing DAYA, he said to MISHA…

ABHIJEET (to MISHA): chalo MISHA Chai banatay hain…

MISHA moved Head in Yes, ABHIJEET excused from VIVEK father and moved inside with MISHA, whereas DAYA relaxes VIVEK father as…

DAYA (relax): haan wo Ek case ko lay ker sub he pareshan hain tou lagay huay hain…

Here ABHIJEET engaged with MISHA, He deliberately taken out MISHA from the Scene to dig out something different/changing behavior in VIVEK, in Conversation about usual, ABHIJEET asked…

ABHIJEET: MISHA VIVEK MAMA thoray pareshan lug rahy hain na…?

MISHA: jee Uncle, ap ko pata hay wo na Dark mein Phone per baat krtay hain, jub Nana Nani So jatay hain.

ABHIJEET: kis say?

MISHA: pata nahi, dheeray dheeray baat kartay hain, bus kal raat ko, nahi, kal nahi, haan us say pehlay wali raat ko na kisi ko bol rahy thay kay (trying to imitate VIVEK voice) haan Accident he ho ga

ABHIJEET Stunned, here DAYA also Freeze who was coming to this way, MISHA Laughing after Imitating VIVEK voice, whereas Same query coming at DUO mind…

DOU (thinking): VIVEK aakhir ye keh kis say raha tha.!?

Here MISHA again said in Secret Voice as…

MISHA: aur na Computer bhi chalatay hain, Dark mein he.

ABHIJEET: acha tou kya kartay hain, Dark mein Computer chala ker…

MISHA: pata nahi, Pictures dekhtay hain, animal ki, birds ki, Insects ki…. Pata hay Uncle dark mein Computer dekhnay say aankhein kharab ho jati hain na, per MAMA na samjhtay nahi… aap Daatna Un ko…

ABHIJEET moved Head in Yes, After few time, MISHA and Her Nana moved, ABHIJEET after freed from Shower, started again in teasing tone wth DAYA as…

ABHIJEET: Sahab ka Dimgh theek hua kuch ya wahein per hay? Samjh mein nahi aaya akhir aaj hua kya tha Sahab ko? Bari Hamdardi kay Bukhar uth rahy hain VIVEK kay liyey… Saaray Sabut us kay Khilaf hain abhi tak… magar Sahab kay ander itnay Ubaal uth rahy hain kay aaj ACP Sir kay samnay seena taan ker kharay ho gayey… malum hay na ACP Sahab Sahab ko kitna Chahtay hain… kitna Pyar kartay hain…

DAYA (ignore the whole and focus on Case as): VIVEK itna Pagal tou hay nahi, kay Police Station mein, INSPECTOR kay saamnay, RAJU kay Parosiyun kay saamnay, us kay Kaam walay Saathiyun kay saamnay ya FREDDIE kay saamny is tarah ki Dhamkiyan khulay aam deta phiray… wo ek Sharp Officer hay, Thandy dimagh say sochta aur Kaam krta hy… aur wo kabhi bhi RAJU ko is tarah nahi maarta… (strong) kya Tumhein nahi lagta kay wo RAJU ko aaram say Marwa bhi sakta tha ya Maar bhi sakta tha… agar ye Case is tarah nahi hota tou Hum saari Zindagi nahi jaan paatay kay VIVEK nay apni Behan kay Accident Case kay liyey koi Report bhi Likhwaii thi aur us ki Investigation bhi chali thi…

ABHIJEET (clapping): wah wah…. Kya Bhashan diya hay Sahab nay… (Teasing tone) kya pairwi ki ja rahi hay… kya asshayein hain… wah wah… maan gayey bhae… Sahab ko… wesay sahib nay MISHA ki baat per kuch kaha nahi? Kaho kaho (focusing) Main tayyar hun Sunny ko…

DAYA look at Him in anger and moved to His room completely with pressing his arm… ABHIJEET was really angry from the time when He stood against ACP Sir, here on Next day… Same scenario… VIVEK still explained about all as…

VIVEK: Sir Mian nay wo sub Gussay mein kaha tha… haan main maanta hun kay main nay us waqt Police ki Investigation per bhi Shak kiya tha… Dhamkiyaan bhi dein… RAJU kay ghar ja ker bhi… (Tears) per Sir sub kuch Gussa aur wo dard tha jo MISHA ko dekh dekh ker meray ander utthta… Sir mera aisa koi irada nahi tha kabhi bhi…

ABHIJEET (cold tone): per tum nay bataya bhi tou nahi tha na?

VIVEK (sad): Sir Main kya batata, aap khud batayein, hr baar ek takleef wali cheez ko repeat krna kya acha lagta hay…

ACP (harsh voice): VIVEK, behtar hay kay Tum apna khayal apnay pass rakho aur (rash) jao yahan say…

VIVEK after seeing them all moved downstairs in tears… FREDDIE was really in Trouble He tried last night to Support VIVEK but His low tone, accent realized VIVEK that FREDDIE also has some doubt on him… here DAYA look at all as ACP Sir after yesterday Incident did not give him any Lift and ABHIJEET also favor him, so he moved towards VIVEK…

DAYA (pat on VIVEK shoulder): dekho VIVEK pareshan mut ho… sub theek ho jayey ga…

VIVEK (sad tone): Sir, ACP Sir tou Mujhy hee Mujrim samjh rahy hain… magar Main… Un kay Lehjy mein Shak mujhy buht….

DAYA (trying to relax him by saying): dekho VIVEK, sirf Tum nay Main aur ABHIJEET bhi buht baar ACP Sir kay Shak kay dairay mein aayey hain… magar wo bhi kya karein… Haalat unhein aisa sochny per majboor ker detay hain na… is ka matlab ye thori hota hay kay wo Tum per Wishwaas nahi kartay… haan..

VIVEK (look at him with tears n say in painful tone): DAYA Sir kya kabhi aisa waqt nahi aayey ga jub ACP Sir Mujh per bhi (voice crack) ABHIJEET Sir aur aap jitna Aitabaar karein gay…

DAYA look at Him in Pain… He really feels the Crack and Pain of VIVEK… His Tension, Disbelieving state… but He also has that Courage to Support ACP Sir at any Cost… He looks at VIVEK and initiated with Strong tone…

DAYA: VIVEK aisa mut socho… agar wo tum per Aitabaar nahi kartay tou tum is waqt CID ka Hissa nahi hotay… kya Sir nay aik baar bhi Tumhein CID chornay ko kaha, kal say Duty per nahi aanay ko kaha, kya Tumharay Ghar walun tak baat pohanchi, (VIVEK moved head in NO) (DAYA added) phir Tum nay aisa kyun socha… ACP Sir kay Dil mein hum sub kay liyey jitni Muhabbat hay na Tum soch nahi saktay… aisa nahi sochtay yaar… ACP Sir hun ya ABHIJEET, FREDDIE ho ya SACHIN ya koi bhi, Tumhein kya lagta hay sub Tumharay khilaf hain… agar aisa hota na tou sub tum ko chor detay… per aisa nahi hai na… wo bhi buht fikermand hain Tumharay baaray mein aur sub say pareshani ki baat ye hay kay wo kuch ker nahi pa rahay… khair Tum chalo meray sath…

Both moved Upstairs… here Rash behavior roaming around bureau… DAYA discussing something to VIVEK and suddenly ABHIJEET said after seeing ACP Sir coming out…

ABHIJEET: DAYA filhal VIVEK ko is Spot per mut …

DAYA (interrupts): kyun?

ABHIJEET: dekho, abhi VIVEK per RAJU kay Qatal…

ACP (to ABHIJEET): mera khayal hay ABHIJEET, VIVEK ko Suspend karna Theek rahy ga, wesay bhi Media Shoe macha raha hay…

VIVEK was in Shock, ABHIJEET little Tense and here DAYA comes with Smooth but complete Strong tone and tell to All…

DAYA (smooth n strong tone): mujhy VIVEK per utna hee Bharosa aur Yaqeen hay jitna Khud per… (Confront him in confident tone) Mian VIVEK ko hr maamly mein Support karun ga…

ACP, ABHIJEET and all Team stand Stunned and in Shock…. DAYA stand with complete confident mode while VIVEK face glowing like a Shinny bulb whereas FREDDIE took a relax Sigh silently…!!!

One by One everyone coming out from the Stunned phase, ABHIJEET told in rash tone…

ABHIJEET (to VIVEK): Chalo VIVEK, Khush ho jao… (tease) ek Emotional fool ko akhir Tum nay apni taraf ker he liya..

VIVEK (shock tone): ABHIJEET Sir aap…

DAYA signaled Him to Keep Quiet, whereas ACP want to say something but suddenly RAJU Wife again coming in Rush and started Beating VIVEK in Hard Cry, PURVI and SHERYA grabbed Her but She still beating him with Cry…

WOMAN: kahan hay Meri Bacchi..?

VIVEK (protect himself): Mujhy Kya malum?

WOMAN (to ACP): Sahab meray pati ko Maar ker tou Isay sakun nahi mila, ab (crying loudly) meri Bacchi…

ACP (confuse): kahan hay aap ko Bacchi?

WOMAN: Sahab wo Kho gayii hay, isi nay Usay Aghwa ker liya hoga… (again grab VIVEK collar) dekho Meri Bacchi mujhy Wapis ker do… Tum…

DAYA (rash): aap kesay keh sakti hain kay aap ki bacchi ko VIVEK nay aghwa kiya hay?

WOMAN: tou aur Kaun hay, jo humein Tabah karna chata hay, (angry) yehi kameena hoga, (to ABHIJEET) Sahab kahein ye Bacchi ko bhi Maar…

ABHIJEET: aap ki Bacchi kahan say Aghwa hui hay?

WOMAN: wo Ghar kay pass khel rahi thi, aur (cry) phir…

ACP:chalo…!

Without wasting time, CID Team rushed there with that WOMAN, ACP did not allow VIVEK to move as the Neighbours knew about Him so might be there some Rash coming out from the Publiic… after investigation, they found that the Girl named BELA playing with Kids, ACP gathered all which are 5 in numbers and asking small Queries as…

ACP: beta aap log abhi thori der pehlay BELA kay sath khel rahy thay na..

KIDS: haan Sahab, per phir BELA ko ek Tohfa mila tou wo YANA kay sath us kay Ghar chali gayii..

ABHIJEET: acha aap mein say YANA kaun hay?

KID: YANA tou hay he nahi, main bula ker laon Uncle.?

ABHIJEET: haan jao…

After 2 Minutes, YANA came in with a Gift Box wrapped in Wrapping paper, ABHIJEET ask..

ABHIJEET: YANA beta, BELA kahan hay?

YANA: wo BELA tou un waly Uncle kay sath chali gayii?

DAYA: kin Uncle kay Sath…

YANA: wo tou Malum nahi Uncle, wo Bari wali Bike mein thay na, Red colo ki aur Helmit tha, bus Pink color ki Shirt pehnay huay thay…

All Shock for a moment, as VIVEK wore today a Pink Shirt and He had a Red Color Heavy Bike as well…

ACP: acha kay BELA unhein jaanti thi, jo us kay sath chali gayii?

YANA: pata nahi…

ABHIJEET: acha BELA kay liyey koi Gift aaya than a?

YANA (giving the Gift): ye raha…

ABHIJEET take it with Gloves but He knew that now its almost Impossible to fine the Deliver Finger Prints as all Kids clutched it in that phase, Here all moved to Forensic after calling VIVEK to be there after ACP order, they reached, VIVEK was already there in Shock, ABHIJEET tells all after seeing VIVEK… just for a Chance TAREEKA unwrapped it Slowly to get the Print, might be they will get something, ABHIJEET initiates…

ABHIJEET (to VIVEK in tease): wesay VIVEK, BELA ko Gift detay huay Gloves tou pehnay hon gay na Tum nay…?

DAYA (harsh to ABHIJEET): Tum itnay Sure kyun ho kay wo VIVEK he ho ga, koi aur bhi tou…

ACP (interrupts in scold): DAYA hr waqt ka Favor acha nahi, hr cheez, Shirt, Bike, Helmit… sub VIVEK jesi hay, kuch tou alug hota, aur BELA he kyun? haan…

DAYA Quiet, VIVEK Standstill, TAREEKA checking it, while SALUNKHY opened the Box and if He was not pulled back, hope Dead in Few minutes, yes the Box contained LEECHES… all froze as its really a Werd Scene, SALUNKHY instantly pulled them in a Jar and closed it with Lid, all moving, He took a Snap, then after Scanning got some Results from Google as…

SALUNKY: ACP sahib, Bach gayey, hum bhi aur wo sub bhi jinhun nay is Box ko chua tou per Khola nahi…

ACP: hay kya ye SALUNKHY?

SALUNKHY: Maut…

All eyes moved to VIVEK, who was totally Shocked after seeing and listening all…

ABHIJEET: matlab?

SALUNKHY: ye Africa mein payii jaany wali sub say khatarnaak Leeches hay, jo kay agr kisi bhi Insan kay Jism say Chimat jayein tou Khoon ka aakhri Qatra tak Nichor daalti hain…

Here ABHIJEET look at VIVEK First and then DAYA, who Eyes also have a Same query pop up in his mind, DUO remembers,

MISHA: aur na Computer bhi chalatay hain, Dark mein he. pata nahi, Pictures dekhtay hain, animal ki, birds ki, Insects ki….!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
DADA n Neeme Di you both are brilliant writers 👏 👏
Your story is really good as usual👍🏼
Keep going ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ossam as usual... Waitng for nxt part...
Thanx Dada n Neeme
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Gadhadada n Neeme

the job u both have done is..



😊 waiting for next part 😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
It's awesome GD and Neeme!!! Do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Same time same thought pop up in two minds... I don't know what to say

I think you get what i want to say

I cried on this sentimental full thought two time once when i am handling my plot and now when i am reading your

the comments of Abhijeet pinch my heart

but love how you show Daya standing for Vivek

please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Same time same thought pop up in two minds... I don't know what to say

I think you get what i want to say

I cried on this sentimental full thought two time once when i am handling my plot and now when i am reading your

the comments of Abhijeet pinch my heart

but love how you show Daya standing for Vivek

please update soon

Same thought 😛 I m excited to read ur Stuff...
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