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Posted: 13 years ago
dair lagi aney may hum ko😛
Shukar hay phr bhi aye tuo 😛😆

maaf krna bachi ne padh tuo kafi Din pehlay he li thi
lekn masroofiaat k baais fb dene ka Qeemti waqt darkaar naa hua 😉

afreeen afreeen afreeen 👏
kya mind paya hay😉, apke chashmay ne
badee dooor ki sochta hy ye nadaan Chashma🤓

nyc to meet Chaand ki Aaathma 😆
hillariously Awsum🤣
(kya chaand ki aathma☺️bhi itni Handsum hoti hay😍)
the Flavour of Scaring Freddy Sir for which i lyked him so mch
after Duo 😉
wht a masoom n bhoola COP he iz 😳


bht he dil aawaiz narration k sath likhi hay Dada👏
wonder Ful , Superb , mind Blowing ye sb kaha jaye tuo bht kum hy😳
AYUSH segment iz Wow 😳
me too wana hv an Apple frm Apple walay uncle 😉😆


aah! felt vry Bad fr Ayush
THELISEMI
A 😲😒🥺
Daya Sir felt on hiz kneez n Burst out ! n Cried so loudly ! ! !
aah , i hadn't found thz Flavour of ur'z Bhai
in ur Written collection 😒 ever ,really touched me frm depth😒
tough to read the Hospital scenario 😭


GREAT Dada ! VIVEK still present in ur PEN'z Soul 👏

finally HIACE ki tuo waatt lag gae
Thank GOD is bar Picnic via Quillas planned nhi thi , vrna tuo ! ! ! 😈


Hattz off to ur Plan ,Ooops not ur'z 😛
actually tht wz mst be ur'z Baday Bhai'z Plan naa 😛😆
to bring Ur Bhai back 😉👏
my Gudness ! 😛,sach may is story ko Hadsa samaj kr read kr rahi
thi then i got to know k sb ur'z Badey Bahi ki Karustaani thi 🤣
Mind blowing 😆👏

ye kya phr se Dr, "T" ! high lited
kabhi kabhaar tuo chalta hay Dada,😕
lekn ab tuo Dr"T" ki entries kuch ziada he honay lga hain😈
over n alll Luvly Scenario
aww , bicharey Rented Culpritz 😆finally alll saved frm Ur Bhai'z Lafa 😆
nhi tuo unka bhurtaa bn ney se koi nhi rok sakta tha😛
🤣how phunnny 🤣


really a Mind Blowing Perfect Plan 👏
true
Action Speakz Louder thn Wordz 😳
thanx fr increasing maah Starz😳
🤗🤗🤗




Edited by vevah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Vevah Di what an awesome poem ❤️😛😎
Try and publish it out😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fairy1

Wow Vevah Di what an awesome poem ❤️😛😎

Try and publish it out😉

hehe yes dear while Posting mje bhi kuch aisa he Feel ho rha tha 😛😉
chalo will try to post it @ CID Creative Corner 😛😆😉
thanx fr wnder ful Complemnt 😛😆
, but may Shaayer tuo nhiii 🤣


😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
Koi bat nahi...par aap Shaayar ban toh sakte ho😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vevah

dair lagi aney may hum ko😛
Shukar hay phr bhi aye tuo 😛😆

Un kay aa janay say jo aa jaati hay SEENG per Ronaq😈😈
wo samjhtay hain Meray Chashmy ka Haal Acha hay...😆😉

maaf krna bachi ne padh tuo kafi Din pehlay he li thi
lekn masroofiaat k baais fb dene ka Qeemti waqt darkaar naa hua 😉

Qadar Kho deta hay Roz raoz ka Der say aana😉
aur Gittun mein gir ker Maafi Maangna...😉

afreeen afreeen afreeen 👏
Husn-e-Chashmay ki Tareef Mumkin Nahi...😉😆😆

kya mind paya hay😉, apke chashmay ne
bus jee GURUR Nahi kiya kabhi Chashmy nay...😳😳

badee dooor ki sochta hy ye nadaan Chashma🤓
Nadaan Na hongay tou kya Naam Na hoga😉😉


nyc to meet Chaand ki Aaathma 😆
hillariously Awsum🤣
(kya chaand ki aathma☺️bhi itni Handsum hoti hay😍)
Boss its SUPER MOON na...😳😳

the Flavour of Scaring Freddy Sir for which i lyked him so mch
after Duo 😉
wht a masoom n bhoola COP he iz 😳

bht he dil aawaiz narration k sath likhi hay Dada👏
wonder Ful , Superb , mind Blowing ye sb kaha jaye tuo bht kum hy😳
AYUSH segment iz Wow 😳
me too wana hv an Apple frm Apple walay uncle 😉😆

ufff He only Give APPLE to 4 years old Kid and a Male Kid😉... Mind it...🤣


aah! felt vry Bad fr Ayush
THELISEMI
A 😲😒🥺
Daya Sir felt on hiz kneez n Burst out ! n Cried so loudly ! ! !
aah , i hadn't found thz Flavour of ur'z Bhai
in ur Written collection 😒 ever ,really touched me frm depth😒
tough to read the Hospital scenario 😭
Thank You🤗, sumtime I presented MYSELF engulf in His Personality, which really Wrong, but my Qalam was Not Obyed Me at those Scenarios...😭😭


GREAT Dada ! VIVEK still present in ur PEN'z Soul 👏
Obviously I am Not Dumped like FW to lost such Gem...😳


finally HIACE ki tuo waatt lag gae
Thank GOD is bar Picnic via Quillas planned nhi thi , vrna tuo ! ! ! 😈
haan agar Quillas hoti tou yaqeenun Mujhy Nikhil aur Sachin ko Chat per Baandh ker Picnic per lay jana parta...🤣🤣

Hattz off to ur Plan ,Ooops not ur'z 😛
actually tht wz mst be ur'z Baday Bhai'z Plan naa 😛😆
to bring Ur Bhai back 😉👏
my Gudness ! 😛,sach may is story ko Hadsa samaj kr read kr rahi
thi then i got to know k sb ur'z Badey Bahi ki Karustaani thi 🤣
Mind blowing 😆
👏

darsal aaj kal Meray CHASHMY aur Baray BHAI kay COAT mein Garhi Chin rahi hay na...😉😆😆


ye kya phr se Dr, "T" ! high lited
kabhi kabhaar tuo chalta hay Dada,😕
lekn ab tuo Dr"T" ki entries kuch ziada he honay lga hain😈
over n alll Luvly Scenario
aww , bicharey Rented Culpritz 😆finally alll saved frm Ur Bhai'z Lafa 😆
nhi tuo unka bhurtaa bn ney se koi nhi rok sakta tha😛
🤣how phunnny 🤣

First VIVA, I accepted Dr Shahiba as Baray Bhai GF atleast on Screen😊 and I m also not Bad to Not Handle Her Character Improperly😊, I just used Her character as Team member bit tilt towards Baray Bhai😉... its Ok... Baray Bhai ko Support karna mera Janam Kartavya hay...😉
Dil Daa Mamla hay Dilbur...
hun kya zor hay is Dil per...😆😆

really a Mind Blowing Perfect Plan 👏
true
Action Speakz Louder thn Wordz 😳
thanx fr increasing maah Starz😳
🤗🤗🤗

baat sun itnay Starzzz😉 Na Increase ker lay kay Teray liyey ek New Galaxy banai paray...😆😆
buht Shukriya...🤗🤗🤗

Jeeti Raho, Khush raho...😳
apnay Kharchy per...😈


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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
GD you just didn't have a shootout between the duo? Awesome yaar!!!! But I'm sad now. Abhijeet sir crying and Daya sir dead?
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Posted: 13 years ago
HMMM waise Abhijeet shooting at Daya is not which is hard to imagine all thanks to FW...

But please isse YSPT na banana DADA

I am excited to know further...

only can guess that Daya is trying to save someone... may be a girl DEEP or That DOLL... but just a guess...

waiting for next part...


Please update soon

About this part I will just say it make me seat at one place and read it with out even taking off my eyes from lappy screen for a minute...

Gr8 Going Dada... keep rocking
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dada u rock.. Seriously ur last story hasn't completed as busy with the schedule but this one I read it in a first go..
AWESUM DADA!!!
HATS OFF!!!
EXCITING STORY!!!
dada if u think ur story needs any publicity then give this task to me.. Haha joking it doesn't needs any publicity.. From starting to end just fabulous..
Waiting for the next part.. Please release ASAP...
N one request plz isse YSPT mat banana...
N I have the same guesses like praddy dii.. Saving deep or that doll...
Go on... 😊

Edited by daya_angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
GD Hats off to u... awsum blossom story... i know daya sir is just saving someone thats why he is not saying anything.. (its only my guess )... post the next part ASAP ... cant wait to read next part... great story like always...

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