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Posted: 13 years ago
dair lagi aney may hum ko๐Ÿ˜›
Shukar hay phr bhi aye tuo ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

maaf krna bachi ne padh tuo kafi Din pehlay he li thi
lekn masroofiaat k baais fb dene ka Qeemti waqt darkaar naa hua ๐Ÿ˜‰

afreeen afreeen afreeen ๐Ÿ‘
kya mind paya hay๐Ÿ˜‰, apke chashmay ne
badee dooor ki sochta hy ye nadaan Chashma๐Ÿค“

nyc to meet Chaand ki Aaathma ๐Ÿ˜†
hillariously Awsum๐Ÿคฃ
(kya chaand ki aathmaโ˜บ๏ธbhi itni Handsum hoti hay๐Ÿ˜)
the Flavour of Scaring Freddy Sir for which i lyked him so mch
after Duo ๐Ÿ˜‰
wht a masoom n bhoola COP he iz ๐Ÿ˜ณ


bht he dil aawaiz narration k sath likhi hay Dada๐Ÿ‘
wonder Ful , Superb , mind Blowing ye sb kaha jaye tuo bht kum hy๐Ÿ˜ณ
AYUSH segment iz Wow ๐Ÿ˜ณ
me too wana hv an Apple frm Apple walay uncle ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†


aah! felt vry Bad fr Ayush
THELISEMI
A ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿฅบ
Daya Sir felt on hiz kneez n Burst out ! n Cried so loudly ! ! !
aah , i hadn't found thz Flavour of ur'z Bhai
in ur Written collection ๐Ÿ˜’ ever ,really touched me frm depth๐Ÿ˜’
tough to read the Hospital scenario ๐Ÿ˜ญ


GREAT Dada ! VIVEK still present in ur PEN'z Soul ๐Ÿ‘

finally HIACE ki tuo waatt lag gae
Thank GOD is bar Picnic via Quillas planned nhi thi , vrna tuo ! ! ! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ


Hattz off to ur Plan ,Ooops not ur'z ๐Ÿ˜›
actually tht wz mst be ur'z Baday Bhai'z Plan naa ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
to bring Ur Bhai back ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘
my Gudness ! ๐Ÿ˜›,sach may is story ko Hadsa samaj kr read kr rahi
thi then i got to know k sb ur'z Badey Bahi ki Karustaani thi ๐Ÿคฃ
Mind blowing ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ‘

ye kya phr se Dr, "T" ! high lited
kabhi kabhaar tuo chalta hay Dada,๐Ÿ˜•
lekn ab tuo Dr"T" ki entries kuch ziada he honay lga hain๐Ÿ˜ˆ
over n alll Luvly Scenario
aww , bicharey Rented Culpritz ๐Ÿ˜†finally alll saved frm Ur Bhai'z Lafa ๐Ÿ˜†
nhi tuo unka bhurtaa bn ney se koi nhi rok sakta tha๐Ÿ˜›
๐Ÿคฃhow phunnny ๐Ÿคฃ


really a Mind Blowing Perfect Plan ๐Ÿ‘
true
Action Speakz Louder thn Wordz ๐Ÿ˜ณ
thanx fr increasing maah Starz๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—




Edited by vevah - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow Vevah Di what an awesome poem โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Ž
Try and publish it out๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fairy1

Wow Vevah Di what an awesome poem โค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Ž

Try and publish it out๐Ÿ˜‰

hehe yes dear while Posting mje bhi kuch aisa he Feel ho rha tha ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰
chalo will try to post it @ CID Creative Corner ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
thanx fr wnder ful Complemnt ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
, but may Shaayer tuo nhiii ๐Ÿคฃ


๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
Koi bat nahi...par aap Shaayar ban toh sakte ho๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: vevah

dair lagi aney may hum ko๐Ÿ˜›
Shukar hay phr bhi aye tuo ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†

Un kay aa janay say jo aa jaati hay SEENG per Ronaq๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
wo samjhtay hain Meray Chashmy ka Haal Acha hay...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰

maaf krna bachi ne padh tuo kafi Din pehlay he li thi
lekn masroofiaat k baais fb dene ka Qeemti waqt darkaar naa hua ๐Ÿ˜‰

Qadar Kho deta hay Roz raoz ka Der say aana๐Ÿ˜‰
aur Gittun mein gir ker Maafi Maangna...๐Ÿ˜‰

afreeen afreeen afreeen ๐Ÿ‘
Husn-e-Chashmay ki Tareef Mumkin Nahi...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

kya mind paya hay๐Ÿ˜‰, apke chashmay ne
bus jee GURUR Nahi kiya kabhi Chashmy nay...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

badee dooor ki sochta hy ye nadaan Chashma๐Ÿค“
Nadaan Na hongay tou kya Naam Na hoga๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰


nyc to meet Chaand ki Aaathma ๐Ÿ˜†
hillariously Awsum๐Ÿคฃ
(kya chaand ki aathmaโ˜บ๏ธbhi itni Handsum hoti hay๐Ÿ˜)
Boss its SUPER MOON na...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

the Flavour of Scaring Freddy Sir for which i lyked him so mch
after Duo ๐Ÿ˜‰
wht a masoom n bhoola COP he iz ๐Ÿ˜ณ

bht he dil aawaiz narration k sath likhi hay Dada๐Ÿ‘
wonder Ful , Superb , mind Blowing ye sb kaha jaye tuo bht kum hy๐Ÿ˜ณ
AYUSH segment iz Wow ๐Ÿ˜ณ
me too wana hv an Apple frm Apple walay uncle ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

ufff He only Give APPLE to 4 years old Kid and a Male Kid๐Ÿ˜‰... Mind it...๐Ÿคฃ


aah! felt vry Bad fr Ayush
THELISEMI
A ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿฅบ
Daya Sir felt on hiz kneez n Burst out ! n Cried so loudly ! ! !
aah , i hadn't found thz Flavour of ur'z Bhai
in ur Written collection ๐Ÿ˜’ ever ,really touched me frm depth๐Ÿ˜’
tough to read the Hospital scenario ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Thank You๐Ÿค—, sumtime I presented MYSELF engulf in His Personality, which really Wrong, but my Qalam was Not Obyed Me at those Scenarios...๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ


GREAT Dada ! VIVEK still present in ur PEN'z Soul ๐Ÿ‘
Obviously I am Not Dumped like FW to lost such Gem...๐Ÿ˜ณ


finally HIACE ki tuo waatt lag gae
Thank GOD is bar Picnic via Quillas planned nhi thi , vrna tuo ! ! ! ๐Ÿ˜ˆ
haan agar Quillas hoti tou yaqeenun Mujhy Nikhil aur Sachin ko Chat per Baandh ker Picnic per lay jana parta...๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ

Hattz off to ur Plan ,Ooops not ur'z ๐Ÿ˜›
actually tht wz mst be ur'z Baday Bhai'z Plan naa ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜†
to bring Ur Bhai back ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘
my Gudness ! ๐Ÿ˜›,sach may is story ko Hadsa samaj kr read kr rahi
thi then i got to know k sb ur'z Badey Bahi ki Karustaani thi ๐Ÿคฃ
Mind blowing ๐Ÿ˜†
๐Ÿ‘

darsal aaj kal Meray CHASHMY aur Baray BHAI kay COAT mein Garhi Chin rahi hay na...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


ye kya phr se Dr, "T" ! high lited
kabhi kabhaar tuo chalta hay Dada,๐Ÿ˜•
lekn ab tuo Dr"T" ki entries kuch ziada he honay lga hain๐Ÿ˜ˆ
over n alll Luvly Scenario
aww , bicharey Rented Culpritz ๐Ÿ˜†finally alll saved frm Ur Bhai'z Lafa ๐Ÿ˜†
nhi tuo unka bhurtaa bn ney se koi nhi rok sakta tha๐Ÿ˜›
๐Ÿคฃhow phunnny ๐Ÿคฃ

First VIVA, I accepted Dr Shahiba as Baray Bhai GF atleast on Screen๐Ÿ˜Š and I m also not Bad to Not Handle Her Character Improperly๐Ÿ˜Š, I just used Her character as Team member bit tilt towards Baray Bhai๐Ÿ˜‰... its Ok... Baray Bhai ko Support karna mera Janam Kartavya hay...๐Ÿ˜‰
Dil Daa Mamla hay Dilbur...
hun kya zor hay is Dil per...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

really a Mind Blowing Perfect Plan ๐Ÿ‘
true
Action Speakz Louder thn Wordz ๐Ÿ˜ณ
thanx fr increasing maah Starz๐Ÿ˜ณ
๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

baat sun itnay Starzzz๐Ÿ˜‰ Na Increase ker lay kay Teray liyey ek New Galaxy banai paray...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
buht Shukriya...๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—

Jeeti Raho, Khush raho...๐Ÿ˜ณ
apnay Kharchy per...๐Ÿ˜ˆ


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Posted: 13 years ago


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Posted: 13 years ago
GD you just didn't have a shootout between the duo? Awesome yaar!!!! But I'm sad now. Abhijeet sir crying and Daya sir dead?
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Posted: 13 years ago
HMMM waise Abhijeet shooting at Daya is not which is hard to imagine all thanks to FW...

But please isse YSPT na banana DADA

I am excited to know further...

only can guess that Daya is trying to save someone... may be a girl DEEP or That DOLL... but just a guess...

waiting for next part...


Please update soon

About this part I will just say it make me seat at one place and read it with out even taking off my eyes from lappy screen for a minute...

Gr8 Going Dada... keep rocking
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Posted: 13 years ago
Dada u rock.. Seriously ur last story hasn't completed as busy with the schedule but this one I read it in a first go..
AWESUM DADA!!!
HATS OFF!!!
EXCITING STORY!!!
dada if u think ur story needs any publicity then give this task to me.. Haha joking it doesn't needs any publicity.. From starting to end just fabulous..
Waiting for the next part.. Please release ASAP...
N one request plz isse YSPT mat banana...
N I have the same guesses like praddy dii.. Saving deep or that doll...
Go on... ๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by daya_angel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
GD Hats off to u... awsum blossom story... i know daya sir is just saving someone thats why he is not saying anything.. (its only my guess )... post the next part ASAP ... cant wait to read next part... great story like always...

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